the darker side of the woods

A little fawn and his friend where sitting a the bordering river that separated the forest from the darker more evil side of the woods. The river keeps the demons at bay but every Halloween a few demons are able to cross the river.the little fawns sat at the edge of the river listening to all of the blood curtailing screems and howls made by the creatures. They were wondering what it would be like to cross the river, and what would happen when they did. One fawn braves up and crossed the river. When he crossed the other fawn followed. They waited a second to see if they could see one of the creatures behind the screems, but nothing would come close to the river. The little fawns continued to go further into the woods. They heard the sound of heavy feet running and the bushes around them rustling. They where being stalked. Then it went quiet. A long, skinny, white, dragon like creature with long sharp teeth ran at them. It grabbed one fawn and ran off. The little fawn wus terrified, didn't know what to do, so in effort to escape the teeth of the demon he squirmed and kicked and bit the creature. The creature just grasped him harder and ran faster. The little fawn panicked and started to kick harder and screem, in hope to get the attention of a rescuer. The creature stops and drops the fawn not caring where or what the fawn landed on. A smaller wolf like creature stepped out the shrubs and showed it's teeth and screems at the dragon creature. The second demon wanted to steel the fawn from the first demon. They begin to fight over the small fawn, the winner gets dinner. While the demons where distracted the smaller fawn that got rejected by the demon followed them at a distance, trying to rescue his friend. The little fawn poked his head through the bushes and found his friend sitting on the ground parshaly wet from the nasty spit of the demon. The fawn stumbled to his feet and walked to his friend. The fawn only got half way to his friend when the first demon chased the smaller wolf like demon away. He turned to the two fawns. The fawns ran and the demon followed their every move and slowly gained distance to the fawns. They turned a corner and hid in some thorns they say silently bearing the pain of all the tiny thorns pinching and poking their face and legs. The demon ran past them. Before running into the open they looked for any sine of the river. Off in the distance they saw a little glimmer of water. They decide to make a run for it. The wolf like demon walked out in front of the fawns. They were exposed. They had already left the safety of the thorns. The demon stopped, and slowly turned his head to The fawns and started to walk towards them. They where frozen with fear, no matter how bad they wanted to move they couldn't. A big black winged creature came down from a branch and killed the wolf like creature then it drug the carcass off to eat. The fawns ran to the river before anuther demon could try to make a meal of the them. They crossed the river and looked back to see if any thing and tried to follow. Nothing but dark woods and loud screeches. The fawns left and found a safe warm spot in the ruins to sleep. That bad experience wus now just another memory for the fawns.

If you have a better ending or anything else tell me and I will try to add it OR change it. Smiling

I got bored and made this

I got bored and made this
Kamaya's picture

Scaaaaaaaaaryyyyy... Personal

Scaaaaaaaaaryyyyy...
Personally, I like the story. I find it great, except the fact that you made some spelling mistakes, but I don't think anyone cares about it. X3

I know the stupid spellcheck

I know the stupid spellcheck on my tablet changed a few words and my fingers at bigger than the letters
Oops
Kamaya's picture

You could do this on

You could do this on computer, don't you have any?

Nope. not with me

Nope. Sad not with me

Yes but I left it at my memes

Yes but I left it at my memes house Sad

I don't know why it double

I don't know why it double posted the story
Kamaya's picture

Sorry, was drawing.

Sorry, was drawing. ^-^'
Oh...too bad...
Well, it happens sometimes, did you spam the "save" button ?

Probably :/ I love

Probably :/
I love drawing
What are you drawing
Kamaya's picture

In this case, it's normal, it

In this case, it's normal, it makes double (or more) post when you spam the "save" button, same thing for the comments.

I'm drawing one of my characters, Amika, for her bio. ^-^

Can't wait to see it!!!!!!!

Can't wait to see it!Exclaim!!Exclaim!!!! Smiling
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Can't wait to see it either!

Can't wait to see it either!

Laughing out loud
Avatar by me& signature courtesy by velveteensoldier <3

STALKER!! haha just kidding!

STALKER!Exclaim! haha just kidding! XD. Love your story's by the way
Kamaya's picture

I don't think this one will

I don't think this one will be as good as my first one.

That's fine but I still want

That's fine but I still want to see it and I found a pick on rtf website that looks like the first demon in my story can I put it on the story page
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I don't know. By "pick", you

I don't know. By "pick", you mean a "picture" ? If it's so, don't you think it would be wiser to ask the one who did this picture ? By the way, I finished my art, go see Amika's biography if you wanna see it, but I'm warning you: it's ugly. X3