Creature's Story, Chapter 1 ~ Day of awakening

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'M-mother? where are you?' A weak voice called out, the only reply was a howling wind that bit and tore at the newborn fawn like the wofs themselfs. Carefully, the grey fawn climbed down from his resting place upon a tall hill that was surrounded by rocks and streams, powered by the wind rushing down into the forest to places unknown.

Upon the beaten path there lay bones of others long past gone. Moonlight shone on his path, guiding him like a mother safely down to the border of the forest.
Strange calls came from this forest, all sounding different, all sounding happy. Happy

The poor fawn blinked his eyes from his tears. All four of them, lined with white fur, orbs as grey as his pelt shone in the moonlight. Slowly, he steped twords the forest, leaving the only place he knew of home behind him. The tall mountain of rocks and streams, surounded in mist, slowly faided behind him as he walked farther and farther into the forest.

Strange shadows danced at the edges of his vision, all calling out, all mocking him for fun jokes. He paid them not even a glance as he folowed the path of moonlight, taking him to a small pond where other fawns such as he were playing.

As he approached only but one of the fawns noticed him from there play, giving him a strange look it called out,'What kind of creature it that thing?'
Strucken with sadness, he stomped his feet,'Who are you calling a creature? I am no different then you'
By now all the fawns had stoped playing and came close to the grey fawn. 'Whats your name?' a female voice called out from the group.

'I...uh...my name is...C-creat?' he answered

'Creat huh, weird name. Dont mind the other boys, there just big bullys' The girl called out from the back of the group, shoving the other fawn that had made fun of him to the side

'Thank you miss' Creat answered quietly, a small smile on his face as he played with the others

'Maybe this place isnt that bad

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not the best but i kinda like how his story starts out |D
please let me know what you think

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Zergarikiaka's picture

oooh. *stalks creature's

oooh. *stalks creature's blogs now* =3
Darkweaver would love to meet this fawn. |D So far he's the only extra-set-of-eyes deer he knows of, so that could be interesting.

Vira's picture

Creat would love to mean

Creat would love to mean Weaver |D

Density's picture

Bawwww. I don't how I missed

Bawwww. I don't how I missed this one D: but I like your writing. *scurries off to read chapter 2*