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Seele's picture



Once, in an endless forest, there were a doe and a stag. They were quite happy together, even though their paring made no sense.



Such a dark, wicked looking stag, with such a sweet, tender doe.
How’d that happen anyway?

He had told her many times before. Why don’t you go look for a stag that suits you better?
One with white antlers, a real deer mask like you wear, the same chocolate pelt.
But she didn’t like it when he said such things, and shushed him.
She loved the black stag.

So time goes by. And at times, the stag finds himself alone. Quite often, frankly. He doesn’t like that feeling.





She hasn’t left him, oh no. She’s just not around as much.
He feels lonely, but doesn’t want to sit down and just feel that way.
He goes on his way to meet other deer.



So he does.










She’s quite a pretty sight. Quite fierce, too. They love to frolic together, this doe and the black stag. They joke a lot.

The stag occasionally meets his love. Nothing has changed between them. He adores her, still. She doesn’t share the same temper as his friend, but he doesn’t need temper.
He needs someone calm.

Though, the fierce doe and the dark stag meet more often. They play, they frolic.
They joke.






A nibble on your ear, a peck on your cheek, don’t we love to joke around.
In the dark of the night.
Noone needs to know.



It’s our little secret.



He enjoys the attention. Oh he surely does. As at one dark night, hidden away from others, the dark doe says something quite unexpected.

“Sometimes, I have the feeling, that I am the only doe you ever truly loved.”

And he doesn’t know. And he doesn’t like to answer.

Suddenly it’s no longer a game.









He realizes, he went way too far.
But it’s too late.

He decides to tell the sweet doe. His mate.

He tells her about the other doe. About how he betrayed her.
A rainy day it was.

Ever since then, he waits.


She charged at him. Her brother later, too.
He didn’t mind. He deserved that.

Even the fierce doe came to slap him across his face.





He should’ve kept his mouth.











No. No he’s glad he told.

It doesn’t matter that he’s alone right now.

Atleast she knows the truth. It’s what matters most. He got to make his decision.
He needs her.
But if she chooses to put him aside, he’ll accept that.










As long as she’s happy in the end.
Verycrazygirl's picture

Holy- woah this is

Holy- woah this is incredible! You made it like a story, and it had me hooked until the very end!

Crikey Mis, you really outdid yourself here. *_*

Amazing Job! the writing and

Amazing Job!

the writing and the pictures, they float so well together <3 love it

Aaaah I'm tearing up ;A; I

Aaaah I'm tearing up ;A; I love the story-like quality of this, and just...sdfkjhf everything <333333333...
Pegasicorn's picture

I love these "simple"

I love these "simple" vector-like illustrations. No need to be detailed; the solid-colored shapes get the point across. =]
AnimaSoul's picture

awesome!!

awesome!!
The Soul Of Souls
Flyra's picture

uhwhoahoah o-o You know

uhwhoahoah o-o

You know you're greatly talented right?
This story with these amazing illustrations is just, jeeze, beyond awesome <3
Moar food for my eyes. Yay. -noms-

Though I'm having a hard time trying to figure out who the second doe is. Ahh, I just fail at being up-to-date with TEF deer I suppose. I blame my laptop for not letting me play the game. -slaps it-
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Imp's picture

Very interesting. Wish I knew

Very interesting. Wish I knew who this was about. 8D
OokamiAzura's picture

Wow, I love this. The

Wow, I love this. The drawings, the story...<33
Seele's picture

VCG: Thanks dear!

VCG:
Thanks dear! <33 Oh stories 8D I never do stories. Glad I got you hooked though XDD
I outdid myself? ;_;".. Well I guess I need to get even better then D8""

AliceV:
Thanks! I'm glad you think so! XD I was hoping for that 8D

Dannii:
Aw thank you <33 I'm nowhere near a writer as you are though, I need fancy pictures to make up for that 8\

Pega:
Thanks! It was tricky for me, I always think it's such a shame when I have to let go of details. But it worked ok XD

Mick:
Thanks!

Flyra:
Well, thanks XDDD I'm one who doesn't really believe in talent frankly. But thanks <3 I'm honored anyway! LOL Eyefood ;_; XDD
Oh! No don't worry, said doe doesn't look like the real doe at all here! I gave her a different look on purpose XD I'm not sure if there are any darkred doe around. If there are, HII D8""

Imp:
Thank you! XD I guess it's going to stay secret ;x

OokamiAzura:
Thank you dear<33 Glad so!

; ; ..

; ; ..

This made me cry. Beautifully

This made me cry.
Beautifully done.
Spirituelle's picture

Damn this is beautiful. ;;

Damn this is beautiful. ;; <3
Spirituelle misses him. ):


Gehirn... Where have you gone?

Awwww. It's kinda sad at the

Awwww.
It's kinda sad at the end.
I wonder who the other doe is, but I guess you're not telling.
Love the images.

I did cry ;-; Dad.. what

I did cry ;-;
Dad.. what have you done? Waarhijd did slowly step beckward. How could you! she runned away, searched for Taleine, her mom.

Seed's picture

Oh me oh my.... An

Oh me oh my.... An interesting tale indeed.
Seele's picture

Arches: ;_;.. Ashdrau: Aw!

Arches:
;_;..

Ashdrau:
Aw! D8 *Dries your tears* Thanks though!

Spirituelle:
Thank you ♥ He misses her a lot as well! ._.

Paz:
XDD I'm sorry XD Not sure if it matters much in the end, but I think it's just smarter not to tell ^^' Thanks for the nice comment!

Nopje:
Aww don't cry D8 It's ok ♥!

Seed:
Thank you! ♥♥ Wish I could write as well as you do though!
Seed's picture

Aww, I'm flattered. I think

Aww, I'm flattered. I think the style of this is much more well-suited to this story than mine would be; the trick is to play to your strengths, right?