|Aton Nemesis|

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Note: Before any confusion happens, I'd like to point out that Aton and Nemesis are two completely different characters using the same body.
In other words, if you are in terms of friendship with Nemesis, it doesn't mean Aton knows you.
BUT, if you're friends with Aton, Nemesis might know you too. Because he's a stalker and watches Aton's every move.

Note 2: I'm using a font called Trajan Pro in this bio so I think it's possible people who don't have the font on their computer can't see it right.

These characters are still heavily under development xD



Name: Nemesis
Being: A Demon
Gender: Male
Age: unknown/ageless

Personality:
- Unpredictable
- Changing: sometimes he's mellow and approachable, sometimes he's fierce and aggressive.
- Intelligent and calculating
- Observant. Well-aware of his surroundings.
- Loner in a way. Curiosity usually drives him nearby other deer.
- Trickster. Tends to trick his prey or cruelly play with them before killing.
- It's not impossible to make friends with him. The thing is, would you trust a demon?


Other Facts:
- Running speed can be surprisingly high and he can make long leaps. However he can't run full speed long distances.
- Other living beings are his prey. Including deer.
- His eyesight is rather bad. He can sense spirits [living mostly] and his surroundings incredibly accurately instead of seeing with eyes.
- Doesn't usually roar but often keeps growling/purring quietly.


People on his "do not eat"- list:
In consideration: Riptail


Appearance:
In Art:
- Big compared to a deer. Around the size of a horse.
- Very muscular body built. Covered with a thick layer of black feathers.
- Eyes are yellow colored, gums and tongue are dark greyish blue.
- Skull as a face. extremely strong jaws. Mouth full of sharp teeth. Mouth can be opened really wide.
- Five toes on both of his front-legs. Sharp, long claws.


In the Forest::
- Skull Mask
- Either Kirin antlers or Peacock feathers
- Pelt undecided. Skeleton, Beluga or Nightfall.




Pictogram: |X|

Relation:
Nemesis tricked Aton to a deal and now uses his body for making it possible for him to take a fleshy form instead of remaining in a spirit-like form.
But he must let Aton be conscious time to times so his spirit won't die which would mean that Nemesis would have to find a new body.
Nemesis isn't completely parasite to Aton as Aton has become more powerful in many levels, thanks to Nemesis' spiritual powers.
Plus, there's no way Nemesis would let Aton die too easily so he also offers Aton some protection.
Aton would still do anything to get rid of the demon.




Known as: Aton
Real Name: Louise
Gender: Male
Age: Around 20 in human terms

Personality:
- Quiet. Doesn't talk very much and his voice is soft and quiet. His quietness has even caused him troubles in his past.
- A bit shy. Hates to stand out of the crowd and doesn't talk easily to strangers.
- Might seem a little a cold, self-centered person but actually he's a really gentle and kind person when you get to know him better. He's just a little defensive and people asking personal questions might make him say something unfriendly. But he really wishes harm to no one.
- Might seem a little awkward around new people at first but he can be really playful when he starts feeling more comfortable around them.
- A bit stubborn at times.
- Calm. Appreciates quietness.
- Non-violent. He thinks physical fighting is a waste of time and refuses to be part of something like that.
- Tries to look as neutral as he could from the outside but actually he's quite sensitive person. Might show that he doesn't care but he really does. He usually tries to hide his strong feelings [negative ones. He has no problems with laughing <8D] behind his neutral mask.
- Can be really funny/outgoing when you get to know him better. [because most of the time the player fails at playing him serious]


Other Facts:
- Tends to observe groups of deer but he won't really join them unless someone invites him. He doesn't want to be pushy.

Relations:
Rain :: A new friend
Emmy :: A friend
Riptail :: Acquaintance


Mate: I prefer him not having one. I'm not saying that he absolutely won't have one no matter what but I'm reallyreally hesitant about this subject.

Appearance:
In Art:
- Body is an average size.
- coat is white and soft. A bit longer around his neck. Somewhat plain looking appearance.
- Eyes are turquoise.
- one of Nemesis' black feathers hanging on his other antler.


In the Forest:
- Devout Pelt [or the secretary/grey pelt if devout one isn't sticking]
- No mask or just any mask. I think I prefer the magpie mask for him.
- Bare antlers of candles.


pickle96's picture

cant wait to see him

cant wait to see him in-forest. :3

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dayne's picture

Tracking this

Tracking this <33

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Snowrift's picture

Yay Isis met

Yay Isis met him~

/track

Tuhka's picture

mahmah, sitting right next

mahmah, sitting right next to her.
I'm having random megalags so I'm sorry if he's unresponsive at times <8D

Snowrift's picture

xD S'ok I should go walk my

xD S'ok

I should go walk my dog. >> Ill just leave her there for now.

Glad she could meet him~


Tuhka's picture

You do that. Aton continues

You do that. Aton continues with the awkward silence xD
-noticed that both of their names are gods of Egypt-

<333

<333

harassed Aton is harassed

harassed Aton is harassed xD
(I love how he just calmly sits down. hurr~)

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Tuhka's picture

aggressive fanboy. -shot

aggressive fanboy. -shot at-
And I had my reasons to ignore the stag, I know the player. [not that Aton would fight anyone anyways but still] Just don't pay any attention if he attacks again c;
ooh and Aton had fun with your deeryness, thank's for the great time x'D

-kapwiiiiing- ah, it makes

-kapwiiiiing-
ah, it makes sense now. I thought it was weird how they singled him out..

heehee, anytime! x3 Emm will have to keep a lookout for him~

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Tuhka's picture

xD -nodnod- good thing you

xD
-nodnod- good thing you can't die on tef |D

Yeys, good for him getting fwiend <]
-shoves him forward to socialize with people-

parrotsnpineapple's picture

/traaaacking 8D Hopefully

/traaaacking 8D

Hopefully Ill be able to meet him in forest sometime!
Sandrilyona's picture

Really hope to meet both of

Really hope to meet both of them in the forest)
Sandrilyona's picture

I actually got to walk

I actually got to walk around with Aton today) Didn't expect to see him so soon)
http://endlessforest.org/community/aton-encounter
Tuhka's picture

-nodnod- He was glad to make

-nodnod- He was glad to make acquaintances with Rain. Thanks for the company C;

pickle96's picture

I think he and Safear spent

I think he and Safear spent awhile playing the other day, unless of course it was the imposter. ^^;

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Tuhka's picture

Yeah, I recall recall him

Yeah, I recall recall him bouncing with Safear for a while. c;
I don't believe the impostor will be seen again unless the glitch happens to again. Luckily the glitch seems rather rare.

Traccckiinngggg

Traccckiinngggg nnggg.

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Sandrilyona's picture

Sorry for being all over

Aton was completely..

Aton was completely.. naaaaaaay-keeeeee
(Rocko's Modern Life reference. I'm pretty sure nobody here would know what I'm talking about xD)

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Tuhka's picture

-never heard of Rocko's

-never heard of Rocko's Modern Life but tries to pretend she knows-
He's such a streaker, running around nekkid seems to be his speciality. Cool

lol. I can't even find a

lol. I can't even find a clip of it >__< how lame

He's just as proud as he can be
Of his anatomy
He gunna give us a peek ;D rofl

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Tuhka's picture

Baw, no making me wiser,

Baw, no making me wiser, then <:D

Proudly naked. Show that body of yours, man!
And keep that shy look on your face, I'll take few pictures and make money out of your nice features.

-imagines him as the

-imagines him as the Coppertone girl- xDD

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Tuhka's picture

-had to google 'Coppertone

-had to google 'Coppertone girl', got amused in many levels and can't shake Coppertone Aton out of her head-

Aton, you'd make a perfect girl. I'm so proud of you.

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Baww, Rip's not in Nemesis'

Baww, Rip's not in Nemesis' menu. Laughing out loud

every time I tried to give

every time I tried to give this to you, the site went down :/
x
do with it as you wish.

(I watched The Last Unicorn before drawing that. can you tell? |D )

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Tuhka's picture

sdkj. sdgsdgdfs. *dies by

sdkj.
sdgsdgdfs.
*dies by awesomeness shot through her head*

I love you. You know that, right?
I've been wanting draw Emmy because she is pure awesome but art blocks are making me crazy. Maybe Emmy can break this one with her epic roflrearpunch. Cool

I've been meaning to watch The Last Unicorn lately [thanks to VCG]. Never seen it <:D

Oh anyway thank you for the picture, I just love it <33

oh, hurrhurrhurrrrrrrr~ I'm

oh, hurrhurrhurrrrrrrr~ I'm very very glad <33333
( sorry that I didn't draw him streaking or as the Coppertone girl. I know, I'm a failure xD rofl rofl )

holypoot, it does look like a punch! 0__0 -had been trying to find out what it reminded me of for the go, Emmy! punch through the wall that is art block |D kaBAM!

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Bintaroung's picture

Tracking.

Tracking.
Tuhka's picture

Yes I am so very

Yes I am so very disappointed in you. Understand that Aton is meant to be a Coppertone girl, it's his... DESTINY.
Whaaat the - ?
That's right, I'll send you to Coppertone school to learn the ways of the Coppertone girl. Exciting, is it not? CB

Lol, Aton and Emmy seems to enjoy omgpunching each others, it must be their most used emote combination 8D

-tracked- <:D

FALCO..

FALCO.. PAWWWWNCH!
(YES!)

Aton's dance-twitch made me laugh so hard I was crying xDD
..Coppertone school, you say? THIS IS A GOOD IDEA. I APPROVE :3

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Tuhka's picture

-totally pwn'd to some

-totally pwn'd to some far-away land-

White Aton is all blue/purple because of all the punching. I can't send him to Coppertone girl school with a swollen face and body like that D8< [though new color is kinda refreshing]
Didn't help that Emmy went in his guts and now he's having some digesting problems.
blameblameblame.
Well... maybe he didn't have enough guts to be a Coppertone girl anyways.... 8D

Twitch dance was impressing, yes.
Why my tef folder is full of improper screenshots of these two. Tell me why. .___.
x'D

to the MOON! -turns into a

to the MOON! -turns into a rocket-

crazy kids getting their kicks out of punching each other Dx
jeez, what a whiner. lol.

LOL I KNOW, RIGHT? I was kind of glad that only one fawn came up and was like "..what're you guys doing? -innocent Bambie eyes-"
Special adult things. Now beat it, kid >>;;

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Tuhka's picture

We go and build our own cute

We go and build our own cute little village there.

Since when did Aton turn into someone who would punch anyone, even if it was only a play.... 8D
daamn, this character is getting further and further away from my original plans, he was supposed to be somewhat refrained and calm and now look at him, punching a woman. How shameless!! D8<

*can't meet the innocent baby eyes and gazes elsewhere* You'll learn when you're older.
Go find some friends, we have serious adults business here.

And the baby shall be in deep confusement and wonder about what he saw tonight. Until he some years later actually learns what they were doing and takes some late brain damage.

I have village building

I have village building skills from 5th grade :3 cotton-ball cows and moss for trees~
We can say that they were.. uh.. "buddy-buddy" punching each other, y'know.. xD they were "frolicking."

It's kind of hard to stay in character in the Forest since we all wanna have fun, rather than have our serious deer be serious or our mean deer be mean and miss out on the dance parties and whatnot |D at least that's how I am.. It's a lot easier to be in character in an out of Forest roleplay.
... *totally feels like a nerd now* D:

Mm, I can just imagine the fawn as he grows up. There needs to be a Freud deer to psychoanalyze the traumatized young stag.

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Tuhka's picture

I has house building skills

I has house building skills from 3rd grade. Ice cream sticks.

Yeah, exactly. I'm not saying Aton can't have fun but he's not supposed to be so... crazy hyper, that's my Quamar's job. xD
I guess that's easier, I hate swapping my deer in and out of the forest so maybe little ooc:ing is a good way to go <:D
*puts a nerdy glasses on* What, did you say something?

Poor guy. Really. Freud would be good in this forest anyways, there are deer in a need of him it seems.

Life skills, right there!

Life skills, right there! Life skills.. -looks wistfully off into the nonexistent sunset-


He was channeling Quamar's energy..? |D The difficulty of staying in character must grow exponentially according to the amount of deer one has.
*breathes heavily. like a nerd. not a creeper.* Nawp, I didn't say nothing. *..okay maybe a little bit of a creeper*

But then he'd be going on about phallic imagery and stags' antlers.. I think I'd have to shoot myself in the foot and THEN jump off a cliff.
..that would be a very fun deer to have, though xD

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womanonfire's picture

these are lovely!

these are lovely!
Tuhka's picture

Thank you very much

Thank you very much Smiling
Sand's picture

I saw Atons (or Nemis) picto

I saw Atons (or Nemis) picto just for a sec today, but then he dissapeared...Rain was crushed)


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Tuhka's picture

Aww. Well, It wasn't actually

Aww. Well, It wasn't actually Aton/Nemesis because I had Leara in [who temporarily shares the picto with him along with Mitra. Too many deer using the same picto gah, gotta do something about that] aaand changed to another deer.
*pats Rain* Aww well maybe they shall have some funtime sometime soon again. I hope. c:
Sand's picture

Yeah me too) Maybe you'll get

Yeah me too) Maybe you'll get to meet my other deer too) Sand is now a grown up)))) I actually have to comment through his account. I have a terrible glitch(
Due to my commenting glitch I'm using Sands account. Sincerely yours,Rain. Rain Sand
Tuhka's picture

Congrats for Sand, then :

Congrats for Sand, then : D
Wargh yeah, I read about your problem. Have you told about it for M&A or anything? Maybe it should be mentioned so they could fix it asap.
Sand's picture

No I haven't... Didin't

No I haven't... Didin't really think of it... I guess since the option for displayed name is gone they are working on it already... I'll send Aurea an e-mail tomorrow... Don't really wanna bother them, they seem to have their hands full already)
Due to my commenting glitch I'm using Sands account. Sincerely yours,Rain. Rain Sand
Tuhka's picture

They're working to make this

They're working to make this site better, it's important to report any bugs and give them feedback in order to make the site and game more working so I don't think they'll be bothered at all, on the contrary bug reports are couraged. ^^
But I just noticed this problem already pointed out on the forums: X
Just have to wait for a while for either Michael or Auriea's reply. Hope they'll get things fixed for you guys soon. ;]
Sand's picture

Yeah, I also posted on Aureas

Yeah, I also posted on Aureas blog for this... really hope to speak from the name of Rain soon)
Due to my commenting glitch I'm using Sands account. Sincerely yours,Rain. Rain Sand
Tuhka's picture

Yeah... Actually I wish they

Yeah... Actually I wish they get the whole problem fixed soon so I could finally use the name Quamar again. Tuhka was just a random word I picked when creating my deer and I don't want to use it as my username. D: [plus, people always seem to spell it wrong xD]
Buuuut I'm happy all the errors are gone. Also eagerly waiting for the return of the forest live-map, I miss it terribly much. <8D
Sand's picture

When I came around the Map

When I came around the Map was already bugged so I didn't get to use it) Buy it'll be great to see how it works, it'll be more comfortable to find deer in the forest.)
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Tuhka's picture

Really? Aws, gotta say it was

Really? Aws, gotta say it was quite handy little thing. You could easily check out who all the people were and stuff. Bweeh~