First of all I want to say that I really like this character. When I read his bio, I was impressed by his appearense. I always love to watch the embers, and I think he looks really cool. Also the mix of Jacobs ram sheep and a Gerenuk is very cute) ^^

But I fail with making the embers looks like they should. So it more like burning lava now.
I also did not know what to do with some ditales, that you have not notice in his bio (do you know how many tipes of onyx exist? A LOT).

I should ask you about it, but I decide to make it my own way.

So he probably looks not like you expected, Serendipity.
I can change some detailes, if you think there is something that really need to be changing.