Left Behind - Epiphany Abiogenesis

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Chenaniah's ear twitched and he slowly awoke. His eyes blinked drearily. A strange feeling was in the air. It was too busy. The birds were too excited. Why would...

The Epiphany! He remembered now. Today the twin gods would visit the forest. Today they would perform!

Chenan eagerly arose and trotted toward the statues. Then he stopped. Deer. Far too many deer.



Of course there would be a party. He was, after all, not the only deer in the forest. How many were there? Could they see him?

His heart jumped and he began to run... no. No, not this time. This time he would not be that stubborn. He wanted to see the gods. They had painted this forest. They had grown the flowers and shaped the rocks and gave the birds their voice. He HAD to see the gods. Nothing would stop him.



Chenaniah sat down by a tree. He was far enough away from the deer. He could see the statues... but the other deer wouldn't be able to see him. He hoped.

Time dragged on as more and more deer joined the dance. Chenan moved along the outskirts of the party, observing each deer. A fawn and a great green-scaled stag danced on the end. Eventually they moved off. A black skeleton doe with a grinning mask lay between two dancers. Another skeleton, a stag with trumpets instead of antlers, reared and laughed with a butterfly-pelted deer. A small party of stags stood off by themselves, bowing and nuzzling one another. Red, brown, gray, orange, black, white. Many deer. Many faces. Many stories and hopes and dreams. Such diversity painted by the gods. He was one of the many colors... if only he could join the dance.



Chenaniah began to droop and curled up on the edge of the hill... far from the nimble dancing hooves. He fell in and out of sleep... not sure what was dream and what was reality. Excitement pounded away in his heart. Today he would meet the twin gods.

A change in the air. Chen jerked awake.

Long red shadows swept over the land. The sun was setting. Fast. Then darkness. Bouncing pictograms in the night. They were coming.

THEY WERE COMING.

Chenaniah's pounding heart was deafening. He couldn't see the dancing deer now. All his fears were focused on the statues.

And then on the glowing light that arose from within them.



The deer erupted in what could only be cheers. Chenan burst into song. It was all he knew. He was a singer, and he would give the gods his song.

A bubble appeared around the statues. He dashed to them, amid the excited stampede. Lights flared as running and dancing deer brushed his side. He didn't care. He didn't care who touched him. The twin gods were here!



Colored walls of light rose around him. Rainbows zig-zagging through the forest. One of the paths of light went through him. Straight through his body. He leaped with joy at the sensation. He sung louder as lightning flashed from the sky. He raced towards it, his fear completely gone. His laughter and joy had escaped from their prison.

Yes. Yes! There was a giant deer behind the statues! He had to touch her... just to touch the gods...




Then something pulled at him. Tugged him back. He was moving away from the statues! Weariness began to overtake him. His legs quivered and his eyes began to close. He curled up on the ground.

"NO." He screamed silently, "Don't do this to me! Please let me... let me...!"

NOOOOOOOOOOO.

And then, in a puff of black smoke, Chenan had left the Epiphany. And the deer ran. And the gods rose into the sky. Chenaniah had been left behind.

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UMYEAH.

The Abiogenesis was at 10 AM in my part of the world. I was in school at the time, but I had my laptop with me... and my 2nd class was a study hall from 9:30 to 10. I decided to at least try to see something of the Abio in that study hall (I did my homework first, sillies.)

Chen has never seen an Abiogenesis. I thought maybe going to one would make him a bit more social. He seems to get easily excited.

Well...

All he got to see were rainbows and some lightning. And then the bell rang. IT WAS LIKE DEATH.


UUUUUGGGGHH.


I WILL NOT.

MISS.

THE NEXT ONE.

>:C
lemon's picture

Aww. :3 I was worried I

Aww. :3 I was worried I would oversleep and miss my first abio -- it was at 7 am, my time. Luckilly, I'm homeschooled, so I didn't have to worry about getting ready for school or anything, but I did end up sleeping through about 30 minutes of it. |D It was pretty cool, though. I think it scared the crap out of Lemon, but. <3

Sorry you had to miss it! :'( I love the way you narrated this, it adds a whole new dimension to the event. <3

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SaritaWolf's picture

Eh, yeah. Not very

Eh, yeah. Not very well-written; I rushed. >.<

GRRR. I wish I was still homeschooled. I have missed every abiogenesis for the 3+ years I've been playing this game. .____.

Ah, well. I hope Lemon enjoyed it, even if she was scared. [:
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Chenaniah seems just as shy

Chenaniah seems just as shy and anti-social as my ninja-deer is. ^^; He's the stag all the way at the left in the fourth pic, standing next to a tree (dark and white pelt, orca mask, butterfly antennae). He wasn't going to join the group until the Gods appeared. XD But in the after-party, he was in the middle of a dance-line, unusually social. o.o Abios really do make loners open up.

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Density's picture

Bawwww D: Sad day. I hope

Bawwww D:

Sad day.

I hope you can make it to the next one!

-Dense
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You know, my Ridc did see

You know, my Ridc did see you! He was wondering why you stayed your distance from the rest of the dancers.
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My Flyra was the butterfly

My Flyra was the butterfly pelted one that laughed with Raunun (the stag with the trumpet antlers) and Montie (the one with the skeleton pelt)! ^^
She saw you too and remembered your pictogram and recognized that it was you, Chenaniah, and she wondered why he didn't join the party, too. I feel sorry for you that you couldn't stay longer. Must have been horrible. -.- But you'll get the next one. =)


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What a bummer! Hope you'll

What a bummer! Hope you'll have better luck next time, or maybe be able to catch a mini-abio or something.

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SaritaWolf's picture

@ Pegasicorn: Aww, I’ve

@ Pegasicorn: Aww, I’ve seen Kinsha before, yepyep. I figured an Abio would have the same effect on Chen. Well… eventually. :[

@ Density: Indeed, I bawwww’d. :C Well thanks. :3

@ Neiko: Awwww, I’m glad someone saw him at least. <3 Well, maybe he’s not glad, but I am. XD

@ Flyra: Yeah, I hope so. C: Glad you recognized your deer from my description. XD I was just looking at my screenshots and describing the deer Chenan saw.

@ Ephra: Thanks, I hope I’ll see something eventually. XD