The Dark -Part 2 of Aegle's Story-

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Part 1
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A helpless doe opened her eyes. No deer cry out. The birds are silent. All the forest is quite. Something is wrong.





Aegle gradually lifted her body off the soft forest ground. She listened for any sound. Nothing sound back at her. She knew it came for her again.


Her body quivered in the paralyzing silence. As her eyes searched the distance for any movement, any living creature, she fellt something behind her. She stopped.

"G-Go... Away..."

She continued looking ahead, fearful as to what was behind her.


Silence echoed.


"I s-said go..." She slowly turned her head. And there she saw the darkness.

"I kn-knew you would come back." Her body trembled as she stared in the darkness.



She took in a deep breathe as she stepped into the dark, into the periless fog.



She was blinded. The dark echoed on. She continued on, not knowing where she was destined to go.



"I told you... You would hurt eveyone... You would come back to us. You have no hope."





Aegle awoke. Light filled the forest, fawns ran around, birds sang.


To be Continued.
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LIES. Your writing is

LIES. Your writing is spectacular!

You ended this at the peeeerfect cliffhanger. It surprised me as I could feel the tension build in the story, and now it leaves me wanting to read more! What's gonna happen! O_O
Great work, I look forward to seeing more from you. Smiling
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Oh my! I'm glad you liked

Oh my! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much!

Cliffhanger's are torturous aren't they?

Thanks so much!
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Agghh, don't leave me

Agghh, don't leave me hanging! I want to read the next part xD

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Haha! Oh the horror!

Haha! Oh the horror!