The Broken Deer (WIP)

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Click. (But be warned, it contains violence)



Once upon a time there was a brother and sister that loved each other very much. Their mother loved them very much. All seemed well. But bad things happen, you see... A stag, angry with their mother who gave birth to his children, beat and battered her to near death. The children, with their innocent eyes bearing witness to this tragedy, ran to a large hollowed out tree to hide from him. Their father searched for a long while before finally giving up. The shaky brother and sister went to their mothers side. "Kon," Their mother said, "Take care of your sister, she is all you have." She turned her head and looked at the sister, "Kya, listen to your brother, and be good to him." Their mother died. The horrified fawns went off, and listened to their mothers dying words...

Once upon a time there was a brother that loved his sister very much. His sister was all he had in this lonely world. He took care of her. All seemed well. But bad things happen, you see... A stag, jealous with his sister for talking to another male... a male that might hurt his beloved sister, beat and battered the male to near death. His antlers broke in several places. The sister with her innocent eyes bearing witness to such tragedy, ran to a large hollowed out tree to hide from her brother. The brother knew where she hid. "Dear sister..." He spoke in a twisted voice, "I am all you have... and I must take care of you... mother said." He walked to her side, still angry with his sister, he softly nudged his antlers into her side, to punish her for acting foolishly. "You're not to talk to anyone, sister. I love you. They might hurt you.... I love you....."

Once upon a time there was a sister, that loved her brother very much. All seemed well. But bad things happen, you see... A doe was loved so much by her brother, that he wouldn't share her love with anyone. The doe, fearful of everyone's lives, stayed far from any other soul. She often received punishment for even looking... But she was curious, and her brother was jealous. She was beaten by her brother every night. She developed a hatred for her brother... but even with the hatred... She still loved her brother. She had to listen to him. Mother told her that she had to listen to him. She was after all, all he had in this world. Their bond was strong, but deathly unhealthy. She laid her head across his neck while he slept, he seemed peaceful only when he slept. "I love you, dear brother."



((I'll add in their actual bio's In a bit... This was more of an introduction. I've had this account for a while, but didn't know what to do with it. I only use the account for Kon and I didn't really develop his personality or anything until a couple days ago when I was taking a shower LOL. Kya, was also created soon after Kon. This account "KyaKon" will be used for them both while in the forest. Anyway, thats all for my rambling. I'll finish this soon. n.n))
gglidden's picture

Really? 42 reads and yet no

Really? 42 reads and yet no comment...what is up with that?
I'm definitaley tracking this Smiling
Ring The Bells That Still Can Ring.
Forget Your Perfect Offering.
There Is A Crack In Everything.
That's How The Light Gets In.

(A part of the lyrics of Leonard Cohen's Song "Anthem")
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Yeah, I dunno. ^^;; But

Yeah, I dunno. ^^;;

But thank you =)
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Sorry that you've got no

Sorry that you've got no comment on this Exclaim
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Dark story ( I Love them ) beautiful written Exclaim
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Tracking!

Tracking!
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Thank you both ^^;

Thank you both ^^;