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Tangled (Critique requested)

Exactly why Pema avoids trees...

So I'd like to be able to add more to my art, especially adding in finer details and maybe doing better for backgrounds. This took about 10 minutes, but I know I could do more with it.

Do you mind critiquing this? What could I do to improve my artworks?

I think the first thing I plan to do is work with a bigger canvas.

Edit Here is version #2, taking Terabetha's suggestions into consideration:



I realized her spots are not there in this version, because I had added them in on the wrong version (the PNG version, not the SAI version that I can edit), so please just ignore that they are missing.

Edit #2 Version #3, taking Dannii's suggestion into consideration. I really like how goofy she looks, especially her facial expession.




Thanks for any suggestions and help.
Apeldille's picture

Frozen




If I had I heart I would love you, if I had a voice I would sing


Before the forest, he had known only the cold.

No... that was a lie. It was not the only thing he had known; he had known many other things too – warm, colourful things, things and people and gentle landscapes, rolling hills and teeming cities, but the thought of them had made the cold so much bitter.
He had tried not to dwell on far-away warmth and joy, for here, at the end of all things, there was none.

Eventually the thoughts of warmth had fled his mind. Fate is an unkind mistress, and woe to those who rebel against her – and so, slowly, a small thought had trickled into his mind. Had he deserved this? What had he done wrong?
He had searched for someone to ask, and in the dark backwaters of his mind he had found Mother. At last, someone to share the loneliness with! It did not matter that she never answered him, it did not matter that the stone he had carved for her was cold. Someone to talk to, someone to beg forgiveness from, in this land of barren rock and icy winds.

A frozen land for a frozen heart.




Oh look, how depressing. Emo Eph. But yeah, I think he is a bit messed up in the head.
I wanted to write stuff here but I don't know what. Thanks to all of you who watched me livestream this. Blobrocks!
parrotsnpineapple's picture

Samba Deer

My OOC deer Rett if she were to look more like a Samba Blissta

Drumsticks for antlers : )
This was lots of fun to paint. I feel Ive found something good here.
And certainly no play on words for a Sambar deer.

Have some photos of my latest gig.
SilverBells's picture

childish

Brehach smiled faintly, watching as his fawn flitted to and fro across the meadow, first in front, then behind.
“How far is it? How much longer?” she piped.
He chuckled, his voice rumbling in his shaggy throat. “Just over the ridge darlin’.”
Her knobby legs tripped together as she skipped around him in circles. “What does it look like daddy?”
The red stag glanced at her in amusement. “Och ye’ll see it in a moment.” He sighed, content from his tines to hooves. Home. It was just over the ridge. “Not far lass, not far...”


Just Élodie and her adopted father Brehach in Bambi style. lol And some random writing. ♥ I call him Brehach in his deer form, and Uncle Charlie in his human form. (:

Oh, and by the way... Élodie is the black variety of Fallow deer. Which is why she has spots even as an adult. - http://www.flickr.com/photos/kristavandervoorden/4722718096/

Brehach is a Scottish Red deer. (: - http://www.safecapture.com/New/images/deerelkexotic/13-DeerRedStag.jpg
Mr.Sanguine's picture

Deceit in a bottle


eat me up drink me down
Blank bottle by KiwiesRuleXD on DA
eyestrain's picture

unfinished

i found this, it must have been made back in ths spring. I ended up not finishing it.
But it's a kind of diary of brd's interactions then.
Hart's picture

Little Red

Xylv's doe. (:
Zergarikiaka's picture

Touch the sky.

Wings are not needed to fly.

Under cut, big picture.
Mr.Sanguine's picture

I'll blend up that rainbow above you and shoot it through your veins


We were the crashing whitecaps On the ocean
And what lovely sea-side holiday, away
A palm tree in Christmas lights
My emotion Struck a sparkling tone like a xylophone
As we spent the day alone
- Owl city, Rainbow Veins

Beloved (c) me
Hum (c) Serenai
parrotsnpineapple's picture

Kenzu

Ive been in a generous mood of late, and I felt like making some giftart. Might make some more too.

Decided to make Kenzu my victim. A sort of welcome back/happy birthday/you are pretty cool/AUSTRALIAN present.

That and I wanted to draw fronty-forward antlers.


I failed 8(
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