Portrait of Niriya (Seeking opinions!)

Kamaya's picture
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So, this is a headshot of Niriya('s original form) with her (blue) snood.
I would like some opinions, constructive critics... I am trying to improve my skills in art, in particularly the shadings. Therefore, I need some advices from others in order to help me improve.

Thank you.
Comen's picture

I like how it's looking so

I like how it's looking so far!
It seems that the shading you've done is slightly contradicting itself, what I mean is you have the right ear shaded but the left side of the face shaded as well... Usually, shading tends to stick to one side.. Just a suggestion, Laughing out loud Keep up the good drawing skills
Kamaya's picture

Thank you! Well, actually,

Thank you! Well, actually, the shading on the other side is due to her hair, yet I think I messed up a little with this...

I will probably remake this portrait anyway once I will have the right colored pencils.
Comen's picture

I hope you do not take my

I hope you do not take my suggestions as criticizm because I don't want you to feel like I'm hating on your work. ~~I could never draw this good so don't take this to heart~~~ but I have another suggestion.

The space you have between the scarf and the nose seems a little large, kind of like Chris off of Family Guy how he has all that extra space between his mouth and nose. (lol) I wasn't going to say this but if you're going to redraw it maybe raise the scarf a little more or lower the nose some?

I LOVE YOU KAMAYA YOU NO HATE ME! D: <3
Kamaya's picture

I did not take as such, do

I did not take as such, do not worry. Eye

And yes, you are right. Now that you are mentioning it, the space looks larger than I thought. I could still edit a little the drawing but I would have to move the eyes as well and I fear it would mess up the drawing. Or I could move the snood too but...I do not want to. X3
But yes, I will pay more attention to this when I will remake it.

HAHA DO NOT WORRY I LIKE YOU TOO I DO NOT HATE YOU! :3<3

She looks so cute! I love the

She looks so cute! I love the soft shading ^^ I may give a critique later after classes, but for now I'll leave you with these compliments!
Kamaya's picture

Oh well, thank you! c:

Oh well, thank you! c:
Kamaya's picture

Bump. No more

Bump. No more opinions/critiques?