This doesn't even look TEF related?
Your 'deers' needs some serious help. This looks more like an...abstract dog in my sense.
You could at least try and fit leg joints into it and study deer anatomy better.

It doesn't matter what kind of drawing program you have, MS Paint is actually a fairly good program to use.
You're just using the line tool and thick brush tool. No pencil, no anything...
With a long time of work people make masterpeices in Pain.

By the way, their is a lot of freeware on the internet.
such as:
GIMP
and OC 1.1

Nein, what the? I wish I could draw like her when I had her age. I mean, everyone needs practice yes? And that goes by drawing, yes? And Paint is pretty fine when you learn how to use it, and how does someone that? By PRACTICE. And I'm glad to see some of her own work!
So Dindra, I think it looks nice. You did become better allready Do keep on drawing, I like those designs! They're pretty unique deer.

--Stays a lonely Seele

Well atleast she is drawing her own stuff now like everyones been saying.
Theres no need to be so rude about her work D:
people need practise and i actually like the style in which she has drawn the legs thin and pointy :3
Btw dindra its realy nice that you are producing your own work and interesting designs to.

Sorry, now I kinda feel bad. I didn't know how old she was. @-@

aw it's ok Nein, it's an understandable mistake.
Though I like to think that people need 'constructive' comments, not negative ones
Also, Yay for someone on TEF that will actually give critique! If you ever comment on my art, pleeeaaase seriously critique it, I desperately want to get better