i now call my deer ShadowX but on the sight it's xhunter
please tell me what you think!
A apprentice for ShadowX


ShadowX lie within the tangle of tall grass that made up the Blue Berries. He’d chosen the spot so he could watch the other deer go about there lives without them seeing him. For his entire life he’s been alone. Looking over at his fur he saw the strange symbols on him. His fur was white with a large Black spot that reached out at some red bots. His antlers where made of blue and red feathers that stood up above a long piece of normal antler. His legs were long and black. For days he’d sat there watching The others go about there lives.
In truth he was cursed when he was a fawn, he was born with the strange antlers that allowed him to change his appearance. His gift was to see the future of the forest. ShadowX in the past was taught by seven deer and the twin gods themselves, so he was in no need of training. His job to the forest was to see the other futures and chase off evil, sickness, and the likes. He did not need to eat or drink because he was immortal, but he did anyway. Looking up he yawned and got up. His mask got pulled on by his hooves and he flinched. He twitched his head and fallowed the path closest to the trees to the river, making shore the others did not see him. He stopped at the side of a young willow and walked quickly over to tall grass and looked at a group of sleeping deer. ShadowX stood for five minutes then walked to the water and drank.
“ShadowX?” said a voice from behind. He stopped and looked up and over his shoulder. He saw a young grey fawn standing looking at him. “what are you doing?” “Nothing, go away,” he said and turned away to leave. “You were drinking, I thought you did not need to drink or eat,” the fawn said running up to him and fallowed on his heels. “normally I don’t, go away,” he said with his ears back.
“I’ve be watching you, Your job is so cool, can I be one?” The fawn asked again. ShadowX looked up and said, “No.” He continued walking ahead satisfied the fawn wasn’t following. “Then I will tell someone I saw you, drinking and all, that’s not what you supposed to do!” the fawn said. ShadowX stopped and waited a moment and said, “au, come on then, what’s your name?” “Nim,” the fawn said. “Nim the apprentice, then,” ShadowX said and walked on.
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