Dog attempt, plase tell me how to improve

Topaz100's picture
I got a tablet YAY and am just starting to get the hang of it, i would really like your advice. Tell me how improve, if you think it's rubbish, just say as well! x3

1) Practice! Everyone starts

1) Practice! Everyone starts somewhere and you only get better with time, if you keep at it.
2) Look at photo references. Try to avoid drawing something from another art reference, because there may be hidden anatomical flaws. :3

That is all. &hearts
This is very nice, by the way! I really like the tail for some reason..

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Ookani's picture

I'd possibly say, check your

I'd possibly say, check your hind leg anatomy.
Take a look at this http://www.kingdomofpets.com/dog_health/images/dog-bones.jpg
and don't be afraid to trace pictures to practice the correct joint position.

In anycase, it's not too bad. Also, the tail is upside down =P It'd look better if it was bent into a backwards J shape.

Also, this is a very good tutorial for basic dog anatomy from an artist's point of view http://bonz847.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Canine-Anatomy-37102097
Topaz100's picture

Thank you, and yes, i hate

Thank you, and yes, i hate the back end.... Also, the tail, that was just fun lol xDDDD I did do a big bushy one but it looked like a horses so i just rubbed it out, and then.... nothing, but thank you both for your replies -now goes on link to look- Thanks

The neck/chest looks slightly

The neck/chest looks slightly off somehow to me, and I can't quite pinpoint why D8 But otherwise I think this is amazing :3 Keep it up~! -snugs + feeds lovemuffins-
Rainflower's picture

Try making the chest a bit

Try making the chest a bit bigger.It looks a bit chunky when it's stomach is bigger than it's chest XD
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fayne's picture

There you are. o3o I did my



There you are. o3o I did my best! You're doing great for a first-time tablet user. <3
Topaz100's picture

Thank you all of you for your

Thank you all of you for your tips, taken on board, and thank you for your notes fayne! - Goes of to look at them on Gimp!-
onyxsoulclaw's picture

I love it i dont see nay

I love it i dont see nay major probs cause at the end of the day u had a go so a big well done. Theres not much i can say cause everyone elses hints and tips are really good and constructive. so please keep it up don't lose heart and happy drawing.
root's picture

Well, first thing I noticed

Well, first thing I noticed is his/her back could use some more shape (the spine that is), have it protrude a bit where the front legs' shoulders should be. Well, I guess fayne sums it all up better than I could.

It helps if you draw a quick skeleton/shape to get the anatomy correct before you start drawing, I do it everytime I have to draw a human character anyway.

Also, the eyes are bigger then they should be, depending on if you're going for a realistic style or more cartoony. But try to keep in mind there's eyeballs in there, and if the eyes are that big, the eyeballs wouldn't fit in a head that size.

As for the coloring/shading, if you make your brushstrokes in the direction of the fur, it'll look like fur ^^ (like you did on the head and legs, but not the neck). Use the coloring not just to fill the linework with color, but to create texture as well by thinking about the direction of brush strokes for example.

(hope this helps Smiling )
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Kinsmate's picture

Over all I think it's a very

Over all I think it's a very impressive drawing, way better then the wolves I was drawing just a few months ago.
~Random tip that may or may not help, sometimes just watching a dog running/jumping (Videos off youtube and such) Can give you a feel as to how they're shapped and how the move, it can make posing a lot easyer. <3
Topaz100's picture

Thankyou....Everyone! I am

Thankyou....Everyone! I am taking in all your views and advice,I do need to improve! when I do I'll post up a new drawing lol!!!