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The legend deer,Arneck.Chapter three...

Chapter three From hunter to animal lover.

Paul had seen a fawn about ten minutes ago and now instead of being a hunter,he acted like the deer were his mom!And Mark was to shocked to say to snap out of it.Mean while Arnecks dad finally gave in to the question he asked at sunset.Son.Said Dresterwet.That glimmer of green was a way enter the human world.Like those hunters we saw earlier?Yes im afraid so Arneck.Just then a deer that could talk to the twin gods said...Dresterwet I have some great news!One of the hunters is petting the deer and hugging them!Thats great news Marinny! Arneck said...Who is Marinny?But a pause of silence shushed every one.And without another word the ground seemed to shake the trees shook dangerously.The ground started to crack!Whats happening?!?!Said Arneck.The gods must be upset and angry that humans are here and have killed 50 deer in the past two hours!

This chapter was a little more short because I dont have much ideas for this one. Sad
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The legend deer, Arneck.Chapter two...

Chapter two Endless forest is in the bad time of death.

When the startled hunters realized they had not been hurt they too realized,they were in a place they never seen.As scared and shaking as they were,they decided they were only in another forest.The hunters walked until they saw a deer that would scare any human as much as it scared them,the deer looked like,a zombie!It looked like bite wounds were on its fur yet those wounds would have killed that standing alive deer.Its antlers were red and looked like no antlers they have ever seen.Its mask was like an animal skull.He,Mark loaded his gun quietly,then aimed.He pulled the trigger but he missed.Unlucky for him (the hunter)the hunter tried to shoot a warrior deer.The deer,Aresle told his fellow warriors and passing fawns and stags.When by mistake mask less Arneck and his dad headed the hunters way.when Arneck was seen by the hiding hunter,Paul he told Mark that,the fawns face looked like a humans face!They walked off and when a almost-normal-looking-deer wandered by Paul hit the deer with the bullet,in the heart.Every deer we see we kill.said Paul and thats when it was going to be the worst time.In about One hour they killed ten deer every hour they passed was ten killed deer.After being two hours there instead they killed,40 deer.

Plz if you read this click on its title so i know if I should make another chapter depending on how many people read the chapters.Im trying to make a good story for the first time.So i dont want my story to fail!
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The legend deer, Arneck.Chapter one...

Chapter one The discovery.
As the sun fell in the west,Arneck watched the blushing cheek pink wave around the golden orange circle he breathed in the smell of the flowers.Arneck was about to ask a loving stag he met that offered him to be his dad that said he would lead him through the life of a fawn about where they should sleep to night in the forest when,all of a sudden he noticed a glimmer of green.Even though the grass hid it most, his fawn eyes could see it.Dad.He said to his father Dresterwet who was a protector of the forest.Dresterwet protected the balance of life and death when they heard from a deer who had the power to contact the gods that the balance was falling more to death or life.If it was far from life they did the spell they were gifted with to cure a sick deer,keep one from dieing of old age and more.When the balance was far from death they used there powers to not have any fawns enter the world.Yes said his father.What is that glimmer?His dad hesitated for a moment.Unlucky for his dad he could tell when he tried to hide something.He knew his dad knew something about it,but he didnt talk about it any more.When they were sleeping in the human world it was only 10 A.M.Two hunters went to hunt some game.They went to hunt in there favorite spot which they liked to call game rock.The hunter who had asked his friend,Paul to come with saw a picture carving of a deer bowing at a statue they hadnt seen before.(The statue was the one were the deer bowed at the twin gods)Thats when he touched the statue and so did Pauls friend Mark,had ended up some where they never heard of.

To be continued in chapter two Endless forest is in the bad time of death.

Every day here a new chapter i make after school.No rude comments.I worked hard on this!If you want to add an idea for the next chapter.
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Get to know me.

Im a bat. (at the moment I wrote this)I want to say a few more questions before we start to learn about me and my stag.
1.How do you get the Day Of The Dead costume?(ANSWER VERY VERY SOON!)
2.When is the ABGINIESES prefomince?(the closest one to the 31 of october)
3.My computer wont take screen shots!plz help!


Thats all my questions answer soon!All right my stag is often a fawn.I rp im a warrior, a protecter of the forest.I often hang around the spot the zombie-dressed-god is.My lil pictrogram will be shown on here later like when i take a photo.(with a camera)Yes at the moment im a girl.(in my mind)If you want to know more please say in the comments.
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im new here at the lil blog thingy but not on the actual 3-D game. help plz!
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