Hmmm, this is really geat. I love the colours a lot, and the detail of the building in the back is great. It's awesome how the clothes look all soggy and wet.
Only thing I could think of is to move the main object (aka sith and the table) from the center more to the right. I also would remove that bar far on the right, or darken it/blend it more with the background, it's distracting. Maybe make the whole picture slightly darker, too?
Will add more if I'll come up with anything else and forgive my horrible describing skills. c8
I'm awful at compositional critique o3o but I agree with Unplugged and I would shift Sithy to the right. In doing so our instinct is to look in the direction the subject is looking in, wondering what he's looking at. It also makes the image more interesting. While some things can be pulled off looking awesome in the center, in my opinion I don't think this one makes the cut.
For proportional critique, one thing I learned that was super helpful in my figure drawing class, is that you can get proper proportions by head size! Yay! So his left arm is a little too long. It should just be a head length from top to bottom, starting at the shoulder and ending at the crook of the elbow. Same with the forearm, but that looks okay :D
Thank you everyone for the critiques...
For the proportions.. it's a bit difficult 'cuz Sithrim is offly tall and so his arms have to be longer, as well as his legs..
And I can't really move the subject to the right; unless I get some more space on the canvas at the left to continue..
I'll see what I can do. <3 Any ideas for what I could add in this scene?
-no words- This is gorgeous
This is gorgeous o__o There's something odd about the crook of his elbow, but I think that's just me c: <333 Wonderful work.
His arm looks too long. ;x;
seekritly I love this.
/slinks off.
She will be loved,
Oh she will be loved.
Hmmm, this is really geat. I
Only thing I could think of is to move the main object (aka sith and the table) from the center more to the right. I also would remove that bar far on the right, or darken it/blend it more with the background, it's distracting. Maybe make the whole picture slightly darker, too?
Will add more if I'll come up with anything else and forgive my horrible describing skills. c8
This is SO GORGEOUS.
Really. I love the glow in all of your pictures. It's just soo beautiful. <3
I'm awful at compositional
For proportional critique, one thing I learned that was super helpful in my figure drawing class, is that you can get proper proportions by head size! Yay! So his left arm is a little too long. It should just be a head length from top to bottom, starting at the shoulder and ending at the crook of the elbow. Same with the forearm, but that looks okay :D
Here's the figure I used x
I hope that helped! This is awesome *3* The building in the background. Huuwaaaahhhh <333
Thank you everyone for the
For the proportions.. it's a bit difficult 'cuz Sithrim is offly tall and so his arms have to be longer, as well as his legs..
And I can't really move the subject to the right; unless I get some more space on the canvas at the left to continue..
I'll see what I can do. <3 Any ideas for what I could add in this scene?
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Drunk people staggering home
She will be loved,
Oh she will be loved.
I like it Is the bar there
Is the bar there for a reason? ^^
I actually don't think it needs much more, it might be too distracting I love it like this
PSSTT...I think it's the
o_o I'm no critique. xD All
I'm no critique.
xD All I can say is that this is gorgeous <33 I LOVE yellow