When Love Leaves *story*

squeegie's picture
...Fine. I've decided to put it back up. It's about Squeegie, and his mate is leaving the forest. It's horrible. I don't suggest reading it.

My heart, my soul, my love...I could feel a strong, powerful feeling pulling at me, somewhere from deep within me. My lover stood before me. His face concealed inside a dreary skull mask. A few moments ago, the face inside the eerie mask had told me something that tore at my heart. He told me he was leaving. He was going far away, over the mountains, away from the forest. My throat became very dry. A lump was beginning to form in my throat. I painfully swallowed. He was leaving? I calmed myself down to ask the simple question, 'why?' My love took a step closer to me. He said he did not know. But he knew he had to go. I was so confused. My heart was slowly breaking. I cleared my tightening throat, and asked when he would return. For a moment, he was silent. I took in a shaky breath, awaiting his reply. He lowered his head. 'I don't know.' He had said. 'But, I will return to you my love.' I then felt his bone cheek rest against mine. I cherished the minutes of just standing there with him. I couldn't move. My legs were stiff. I didn't want to part from him. The chilling winds and the clouds above, threatening to release rain, could not move me from him. I was brought back to reality when I could no longer feel his touch. Through the holes in his mask, he stared at me with equally depressed eyes. I could not stop from looking at him, as I knew it could be my last for a very long time. Once more, I felt his touch for a brief time. We broke away. 'I will be back, my love.' He whispered softly to me. Before I knew it, he had begun his journey away from the forest. I watched as he walked away. As I watched him leave, something inside me broke. I felt as if someone had plunged a knife into my heart. My eyes glazed over with tears. I could not hold them back. I screamed his name, and ran as fast as my weak legs would carry me. He turned around, and we collided. I cried and buried my face into his chest. I loved him. The pain in my heart was unbearable. He whispered my name, trying to calm me down. I shook all over and sobbed. Again we stood together, he doing his best to comfort me. He again told me this was important, and he had to do this. My eyes released more tears. I tried to speak, but my throat was hoarse. I motioned at his mask. It took him a minute to understand before he finally removed his mask. I moved forward, raising my head to meet his. The two of us gazed deeply at each other. Everything around me was forgotten. The two of us moved closer, and we kissed. It was a while before we parted. Now, it was time for him to go. He placed the mask back on his head, looked at me, and told me he loved me. I told him I loved him. And with that, he again set off. I forced myself to not run after him again. It was the hardest thing for me, to watch my lover go. Soon the mists enveloped him, and he was hidden from sight. I stood there for what seemed an enternity. I heard a deafening crack from above as a flash of lightening whipped the sky. It was as if the lightning was a signal, for the freezing rain began to fall afterwards. My eyes sore from crying, my whole body weak, I turned around, and slowly made my way back into the forest...
Emiva's picture

Awww

Awww Sad
quadraptor's picture

You did a really cool job!

You did a really cool job! I know you don't think so, but actually I enjoyed reading it. You really captured the emotion, and as I said earlier, first-person stories are always cool!

Never forget, everyone is their own worst critic! Keep up the good work! Eye
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Thanks Quad. (: But there

Thanks Quad. (: But there is so many things wrong with it. I'm not sure if I should post it again...

NUU i was about to read

NUU i was about to read dat!! nuuuu D:
squeegie's picture

Are you sure I should put it

Are you sure I should put it back up?
Her's picture

This is better than Captain

This is better than Captain Jack Sparrow himself.

[reads a third time]
[short comment because you already know how much I bloody love this]
squeegie's picture

Dude, this story isn't even

Dude, this story isn't even close to how awesome Jack Sparrow is.

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though I still don't understand why.

OMg thats wonderful, in a sd

OMg thats wonderful, in a sd way. i felt like i completely understood wat was happeneing and how it must have felt.

NEVER PUT YOUR WRITING DOWN
squeegie's picture

Thanks. :3 It's hard not to

Thanks. :3 It's hard not to put my stuff down, though.
DragonEyes's picture

Dragon misses him, too. he

Dragon misses him, too. Sad
he cannot wait to rejoin the only one who can see him past that cold shell.
The original Dragon of the Forest
squeegie's picture

<3 Squeegie loves Dragon so

<3 Squeegie loves Dragon so much. He cannot wait for his return.

He, He? xD

He, He?

xD
squeegie's picture

Yep. Both are boys.

Yep. Both are boys.
Fenqua's picture

Awww, it's so sad.. But I

Awww, it's so sad.. But I really like it though, you described her feelings so well!

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul

wow u learn sometin new

wow u learn sometin new everyday!!

kool! thats so cute!
squeegie's picture

Fenqua, he's a boy. xD Lol,

Fenqua, he's a boy. xD Lol, thanks you guys.
DragonEyes's picture

Dragon cannot wait to run to

Dragon cannot wait to run to Squeegie and snuggle.

I miss running about in the forest with you.
The original Dragon of the Forest
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Daww, same here. <333

Daww, same here. <333