Bo, est creare angelus

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Amazing Bo by Starfox



Statistics

Physical: 100% Lean and healthy / Mental: 100% sane / Emotional: 100% Baffled over the dramatic change of her once seared angel wings

In this fateful hour,
All Heaven with its power,
The sun with its brightness,
The snow with its whiteness,
The fire with all the strength it hath,
The lightning with its rapid wrath,
The winds with their swiftness,
The sea with its deepness,
The rocks with their steepness,
The earth with its starkness,
All these I place
Between myself and the powers of darkness.
-Patrick's Rune


  • Updates...

    July 5, 2014

    Seems to be quite a lot of orphaned young ones around; watched over a tiny on as she slept in the grass near the ruins. I would hate to see any of them be attacked by anything. Curiosity got the better of me then, and I had to check with the Twin Gods to see what was happening.




Biography
Name: Bo, the {former} angel of life, prosperity, and nature {pronounced "boh"}
Forest Sign:

Gender: female; doe
Age: roughly over a few thousand years
Voice: one who has heard Bo's voice cannot describe what it sounds like with words, but with feelings. Her voice is a melody that echoes when she speaks, a certain music that is more tangible than form or sight. The melody has essence, structure, and peace, and when spoken a blessing over one, may travel with them through even some of the darkest places in the universe.
Time Entered Forest: It is only known to her.
Orientation: Unknown (a good chance that she is naturally barren, since all angels were produced from her god Cybele).
Items of Possession: Bark leaf mask; made in the first few weeks she was sent down (butterfly antlers and mask). This mask covers most of her face, and has two strips of the bark that stretch out and away from her head, making her look like she has antlers.
Species: Appointed angel (different from fallen angel, in which the appointed have one or more tasks to do).





Appearance
Bo does not appear unusual for a cervine at first glance; although the only major body part Cybele had neglected to change was Bo's face. Realizing that this would be a clue to identify her for others; she made a mask for herself, covering three-fourths of her head and face. Bo will not take off her mask for anyone, for the sake of protecting her identity.

Depicted Appearances:

*Angel of life; ancient Rome, 793 B.C.
*Angel of life; late Rome, 1247 B.C.


Awesome art of Bo's mask by AlisonRobin








Relations
Name:
Good Lord there are a ton of people she's seen. So I guess I'll have to start over because I accidently deleted the whole list. Ah well. If she sees you, you will most likely be noted.
Ird: {interested in the little green creature, thanks It tremendously for using the Twin Gods' power to heal her burnt and broken wings}
Jennie: {knows this strange glitchmaster since she fell onto their world from heaven; respects highly as the first inhabitant that was not afraid to speak to her}
Lem: {didn't know who he was until the buck made himself known in an odd fashion; circling her tightly with his own body. was he interested in her? it seemed impossible to be sure...}
"Cloves": {there is really no name for the small, friendly doe, so Bo decided to call her that because of the garlic cloves sprouting from her body and the aromatic smell she gives off}
Hated
Name: Mortal enemy, blah de blah blah.



Other Information

*Bo's enormous wings were taken from her by the Earth goddess Cybele, and from there Bo was cast down to earth in the form of a deer, one of her secondary creatures
*Bo was sent to earth with 3 tasks, or purposes from Cybele: guard the 'sacred tree' (the Old Oak), protect against destructive (anti-earth) angels, and supervise lesser animals (such as rodents or birds).
*Bo does not harbor or use magic like the other deer, however, she may project it off of herself onto another when in contact
*Doesn't enjoy how magic feels on her skin; will sneeze it off or rub it off against a tree
*Capable of performing a greater evil or a greater good than she herself knows; the ignorance of her abilities keeps her from creating a great chaos
*Acts as an intermediary for Cybele and many of the lesser creatures
*Seems to be a fawn magnet; they just walk up and stare at her
*This angel was specifically created for sensing energy currents that only she can see moving through space and time. She may not interfere with other higher beings (deer), but may alter the energy slightly so that the number of lesser beings stays within the equilibrium level. Bo relays the information of her actions back to Cybele, and receives credit for them. The more credit she has earned for completing tasks, the less of them she will have to do; and eventually she may be taken back up.
*When Bo disobeys Cybele by worshipping the twin gods, she looses a life energy unit and will have to start over again.

behavior:
*She may act strangely towards others; still adjusting to the world in which Cybele has sent her, including its inhabitants' behaviors
*Has protective tendencies and may watch over nearby fawns as they sleep
*Bo does not know 'awkward' and will look you directly in the eye upon acquaintance
*If and when Bo leaves your deer to go somewhere else without acknowledging a goodbye, it means a unit of life energy has caught her attention; she must attend to it. Please do not get offended; she may or may not come back to your character depending on her tasks.
*When Bo feels it necessary to escape someone, she may turn into a dove and fly off

places of dwelling:
*the Old Oak ('sacred tree')
*wherever life energy may lead her to
*the tall, peaceful grasses of the birch forest
*sometimes near acquaintances or friends

stamina: |||||||||
strength: |||||||||
speed: |||||||||
life energy: |||||||||| (no longer catches life energy)

*Bo is able to run long distances without getting weary just to catch up to life energy radicals.
*Again, Bo is unaware of how strong or intelligent she really is; this information was concealed from her by Cybele.
*The amount of life energy Bo has collected determines her credits and the time she has remaining to be on earth.
*When Bo senses a life energy radical, she puts all other current situations aside to chase and capture it; it is her main priority. These current situations may be with long time acquaintances or recently met ones; it won't matter until she tracks the free radical down. Again, please do not be offended if Bo suddenly switches attention from your deer to chase a radical.
*Upon tracking down a radical of life energy, Bo may:
-stomp the ground to keep it from rising too far into the air
-show some aggressiveness towards the radical to keep it in place
-run in tight circles around the radical to round it up
-finally, she will sit on the radical to absorb it into her 'storage', which will later be used to equally distribute to other lesser animals who need life energy



Art
Insert art here, links or icons! Icons would probably look pretty nifty.


Fakeout
Thank you to Ireth for the amosome code and to Jennie, for helping me get some things straight. :] Thank you also to Starfox and AlisonRobin for the amazing art of Bo! ♥
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test test

test test
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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test; something glitchy with

test; something glitchy with the box... -_-
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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Tracking! Very interesting c:

Tracking! Very interesting c: ♥
Player & Character Hub
Discord: Gulonine#4267
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thank you Aquilo~ it's not

Redface thank you Aquilo~
it's not quite finished, but I couldn't wait any longer..;;
x3
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Track! B) I'd love to

Track! B) I'd love to interact with her sometime.. ♥
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in the forest, or an rp?

Sticking out tongue in the forest, or an rp?
thank you, Jennie! :]
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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..oooh..burn on me. double

..oooh..burn on me. double comment X|
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

I do prefer in-game

I do prefer in-game interactions. Feel free to approach, but I have to be in bed in.. 5 mins? It's 2 in the morning here!
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Jennie! what are you doing

Jennie! what are you doing playing games at 2 in the morning?! :0
you need to get to bed, sister! xD
I could say the forest would be that interesting, I suppose..
goodnight!
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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Oh! very intriguing

Oh! very intriguing character, yes! Have I seen her before? I must trak this :3
How do you describe both the beginning and the end? We should have known better, but we didn't. What does it matter what we think we know? In the end, there's no denying the truth. - Left Behind --[Art by Aquilo]

That's because almost

That's because almost everyone I know is there from 19:00 to maybe 05:00?
My best hour is 14:00, that's my day, but sadly everyone seems to have opposite timezone and I seem to have problem with falling asleep. I always fall asleep near 03:00 or so... Even though I go to bed soon. Which I have to unless it's weekend, that's why you see me so rarely.
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stupid timezones. -_- yea, I

stupid timezones. -_- yea, I miss gobs of things from being in my timezone, also. I, too, have problems falling asleep when I get on the computer before going to sleep. Freakiness dreams.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Stupid timezones. >

Stupid timezones. ><
But I'm so glad you have came now, for me it's 14:00 riight noow! What the time is it in your timezone?
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wow! Here, it's 7:00 in the

wow! Here, it's 7:00 in the morning! xD I'm glad I'm used to waking up early, I would have missed this :3
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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<33 hi Bo
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Hi Kio I wanted to thank you

Hi Kio Laughing out loud
I wanted to thank you for this character by making her a good one...unlike some of my evils. :|
I won't be able to stay long here, but Bo and I enjoy your company and would love to see you more on this site! <33
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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hehe you're welcome sweet

hehe you're welcome sweet :3
I sent you an email
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Glad to see this angelic

Glad to see this angelic being this day
*nuzzles for you my friend*

ps. if you need to talk you know I'm just a mail away :3
xoxo
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Hi ..so this was you Good

Hi ..so this was you Smiling
Good night to you Eye
Avatar @ Sluggs Siggy @ Amazegenalo
Bouncing Fly by Mary13
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Great to see both of my

Great to see both of my friends! ^^
I apologize for not being on the site so much anymore; I have a job and I'm busier now.
Interesting things are happening in the forest; so I keep it running through the night. In case one of your time zones is slightly different and you want someone to snuggle up against, one of my deer will be there. Smiling

Note: Although Bo came from a different god, she's really curious of the twin gods now, and will try everything in her power as an earth angel to stay in the forest. On the 7th, when it began to randomly rain before one of the gods came, she cut off her line of connection with Cybele...
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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Howdy! La had fun playing

Howdy! La had fun playing with Bo and some others around a tulip a few days ago. He seems like a super cool guy. Smiling
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La? that's a very unique

La? that's a very unique name! Bo also has only two letters in it! ^^
Nice to meet you and La Smiling
(Bo was originally meant to be a female, but Cybele could have made her a male if she wanted to)
The others in the picture:
Blue Luchador mask - Flyleaf
Brown butterfly/whistling mask - Jennie
Other random but cute fawn - I have no idea

I'll be sure to add La as an acquaintance in Bo's list! She was very nice C:
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

"Ird wants to know what you

"Ird wants to know what you see in them." It stares at the two statues taking in the weathered stone and moss filled features. Only statues, there were no Twins it could see there. They never were here when it needed them and it couldn't fathom why the other kept looking as if something was actually there. What if they were, what if they were there for her and not for it.
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The voice seemed calm, yet

The voice seemed calm, yet blocky. Turning her head to where the noise was coming from, Bo caught sight of the familiar small, green figure behind her. "I see. . .love. A peace I never had. Even if they are not there, I can feel them," she replied. "It took me a long time to realize that these gods are better than the one that I came from. She never cared about me like they do." Staring at the dainty, polished hooves that were hers, she stated, "Why? Do you not feel that they are here with us?"
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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I've finished the picture.

I've finished the picture. Hope I got the mask close to what you were thinking.
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It squashed down a bit and

It squashed down a bit and mumbled something unintelligible. Even if the Idol spirit didn't look like it, the creature is listening carefully to what she's saying. Some of her words seemed true enough, there were many second chancers after all and sometimes the Twins did care...hadn't Kettu said that? "There other gods out there? Wha?" It stared at the curving mask she always wore then swiveled to see the statues. "Ird sees....statues. Nice looking old ones. Ird knows sometimes they here but...they don't really like Ird anymore. Never talk to Ird anymore."

(OMG this is such a late reply, I'm so sorry! Lost track of this bio)
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.
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AlisonRobin 0-0 It was so

AlisonRobin 0-0
It was so beautiful I cried. I just sat there and stared at it and cried. You are AMAZING. It's so beautamous, thank you so much.
I know that I'm not good at arts and crafts, but is there anything I can do for you?!
*-* ;-;
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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(No, it's totally fine! So

(No, it's totally fine! So did I for awhile...)

The angel sadly forced herself to meet Ird's eyes. "Yes. There are other gods out there. Whole worlds, even." She paused for a moment, head tilted slightly to the side as if in deep thought. "It's strange, feeling love for the first time. Cybele never showed it to me. I assumed the closest she got to showing love was moving us up ranks. We'd get bigger wings, stronger bodies, better weapons. But she could take all that away if we disobeyed her. Emotion is one thing Cybele refused to reveal to us; it made her weak, and her angels would start to flee to different gods because she would loose power." A faint glowing green light started to emanate from her eyes as she reminisced the past, shining through the eye holes her carved wooden mask.
"I guess what I'm trying to say is...I can feel emotion coming from them," she says, turning her head towards the statues, "and could feel none from my own goddess."
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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"Ird knew other worlds before

"Ird knew other worlds before this, should have realized there where other gods too." That was kind of unobservant on its part honestly, it had seen some pretty strange things in this forest after all. But well...now it had made her sad. And making others sad always made it sad too. "Love....maybe she didn't know how to or....some people are scared to love others. Because they got hurt somehow or lost someone important. Wings? Like Akhen but not quite right? Ird always sort of though you were...an angel, you seemed like it Ird guesses. People get scared of being left alone, abandoned like ya know? Maybe she was afraid of losing any of you." The green light surprised the forest spirit, did she know that she could make something that beautiful? Did she miss her home? It nudged her gently. "This Cybele should've known that love of all things is no weakness." It looked at the statues again. "It makes them more...human right? You feel like you could actually get to know them one day and that's important too. They aren't usually unreachable. For most Ird means."
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.
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For a moment, Bo stared

For a moment, Bo stared unblinkingly at the mossy patch of grass between her hooves. Green. She could see all kinds of shades and shapes and types of green. It was the only color she was allowed to see. "I'm not sure, Ird. I can't be sure that I am anymore...I rebelled against my creator. I left her...I'm not even sure that I can feel my wings anymore." At this, the large doe started to have what seemed like the beginning of a panic attack; her furry chest rising and falling swiftly with sharp intake of breaths, human face concealed by wooden mask swiveling around every few seconds to look at her back and shoulder bones.
And then, "Maybe she was afraid of losing any of you."
When she heard this, her eyes widened on the other side of her mask, and slowly, her breathing returned to normal.
"There were millions of us, Ird. Brothers and sisters and cousins and friends that I never got to know. But I'm not sure any of them felt the same way about Cybele as I did. She could sense that I refused her control on me, through my thoughts. It was how we communicated.
Now exhausted from the inner struggle, Bo stopped trying to hold her head up and let it droop, so that the tip of wood covering her nose was now touching a blade of grass. Seemingly all at once, the soft green light glowing from her eyes faded, and the round eye holes in the carved mask were dark and vacant again. "The only emotion she would allow me to feel was happiness. But it was for her. And it was fake. I did not really feel happy. Inside, while I was still under her control, I felt angry...frustrated. Cybele could sense that I felt this way, and she gave me a choice. I was either to do what she asked of me on this planet, or be destroyed in her presence."
The few last words of her sentence came out strained, and small, clear drops of liquid started running out of the wood sockets in her mask.
"I...I chose to--chose to do the tasks she assigned to me here, on your planet. I knew that she knew I knew I was different. We both knew. I think she was afraid of me. Afraid that...I could overpower her?"
The drops were falling faster now, dripping out of the mask, onto the grass at the doe's surprisingly large forelegs, built for speed, for running long distances.
"I don't think...that I have ever felt something as warm and comfortable as love, if that is what you call it. I have felt it from your gods, and I have felt it from you. But never from my own kind, let alone my own goddess. But--she, she is not my goddess anymore. I do not belong to her...anymore..." And the angel finally relaxed, resting her head on top Ird's back.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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I'm so glad you liked it so

I'm so glad you liked it so much. I've liked Bo since La met her months and months ago and I loved the mask idea. /nuzzles

You don't have to do anything for me in return, it was a gift and I was happy to give it. Smiling
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It reacts imeadiatly,

It reacts imeadiatly, snuggling as close as It could possibly get. Trying to give as much comfort as a strange mismatched green thing could possible give. How could someone never ever love something like her? Not love anyone? Was that kind of existance even worth keeping? How could that god live with herself? Maybe she couldn't. Why else was there a reason to surrond yourself with millions of people, angels, if there wasn't some kind of void you needed to fill in. It thought about what Kettu told him about her mother, how they hadn't told her about what had happened to her mother, what it'd told her, maybe they wanted to but they didn't know, couldn't know everything. Gods seemed to still have a lot of learning to do. It heated up like a safety blanket, warmth did make things better after all.

"I think you are. But...Ird thinks it matters more who you are then what you are. Ird flew once, with Ahken and even if Ird has never had wings...well Ird thinks it knows how hard it would be to lose them. Still you never know really and truely what you have untill you don't anymore. Ird's not sure but, Ird wouldn't give up on miricales yet. The Twins are here and just the fact that we're both here talking together right now is a mirical in itself ya? And that's hope, hope for the flowers." The creature watched her drop like a tired flower, sighing inside at seeing that green light go. A family, millions of angels. Millions. But this doe still sounded lonely. Was her creator lonely amoung all these millions too? It would have to talk to Kettu about this, and Akhen. Anyone that would be willing to listen to it talk. That wasn't many honestly, a different kind of loneliness. Loneliness without all those many people around. The spirit tsked softly at the mention of controling someone's emotions, forcing someone else to love you made them hate you. And hate tore everything it touched up, turned it into a forest fire without the regrowth after. She shouldn't have had to make that choice, destruction or lose everything you've known. It got mad at that, how could ANYONE do that to someone else? Fear made people do terrible things but...what the hell? How could you stop fear?

"There ain't no way you can hold onto something that wants to go. You can only love what you got while you got it. SHE should have known that. Maybe she was scared of you but that's no excuse! There never been excuses for that kind of thing!" It touched it's nose to her cheek, feeling the wetness there. It's own eye streams started to slow, a sure sign that it was upset too. "You chose right. Because you're here now. In this forest with Ird and all the others. Now you can feel everything, anything you want to. And-and-and Ird swears that you WILL feel love. That Ird thinks you already have from the Twins. Kinda anyway, they're a bit weird but don't tell them Ird said that! And most important is that you're just you know. Not her's not anyone's. You're your own. Remember that. All flowers need to grow again is a little bit of rain."
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.
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Bo shifted her weight

Bo shifted her weight dreamily in the indescribable comfort that the strange-looking little creature was giving to her.
"Yes. Yes, I believe you are right. I do not think that any of them loved me. But I wanted to love them. I was always the strange one. But I did not always know it, until it started to become her problem. We all had great bodies, all of us. The looks other angels would give me, though. It made me hurt inside. And then I looked at myself. I was more beautiful than any of them, even half of the most important archangels, who worked very hard to get their bodies as toned and as bronzed as I had mine, could not compare themselves to me. I had no idea I appeared this way, even for the shortest time of about 300 years. I had caused other problems, too, most of them I had not even realized I created. Cybele summoned me from my training in the city of Rome on the planet of Earth one day, seeming very pleased with me. But I could sense that she was trying to block me from reading her emotions. It scared me, to see such a fire in her eyes. She forced me to look at her, and that is when I lost my wings. She set them on fire, and I remember falling for a long time after that. An angel can do close to nothing if they cannot keep themselves in the air. I fell onto this planet after I made the choice, and my wings have not come out since. I wonder if...," she turned around, and started flexing her shoulder bones up and down. Puffing from the effort, a massive set of scorched, burning wings unfolded themselves from her back. Screaming, Bo jumped to her feet and started running around, rolling on the ground to try to put out the patches of fire that were burning holes into her once white wings. Leaving a trail of large sizzling feathers behind her, the big doe frantically leaped into the pond, creating a huge splash and sending fish flying into the air. A flock of ducks, startled by the sudden activity, flew noisily away, quacking to each other. The intensity of the splash had knocked Bo's wooden mask off, and it was floating in the water next to her. Swiftly, she ducked her head so that no one would see her face, and dove into the water to retrieve it. With mask now securely fit on her face, Bo trotted out of the pond towards Ird, giant burned wings drooping painfully at her sides, dripping water and still more feathers as she made her way towards It.
"I--I am sorry. It was foolish of me to see if I still had them. I know I will never be able to lift off of this planet, anyway."
Wet, soft down was all that clung to the blackened wing bones now as Bo tried to shake the water off her wings with awkward jerking movements.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Hi &hearts; Track!

Hi ♥
Track!

Sig: Aihnna

Hello....are you playing that

Hello....are you playing that devilishly handsome stag who sits next to Bo at this moment?

Yes, haha XD

Yes, haha XD

Sig: Aihnna

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Wow. What a nice bio! I wish

Wow. What a nice bio! I wish I were that skillful with css. But then, I guess I'm more of an old-fashioned kind of person. I get confused with css sometimes; I'm still learning. x)
Very interesting character. His name reminds me of a character from a medieval movie...I can't place it.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Thank you &hearts; And yes I

Thank you ♥
And yes I was very CSS challenged when I first arrived. Much practice and help later and I seem to have a bit of hang to it ;u;

Sig: Aihnna

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It reacted to her words with

It reacted to her words with confused, openmouthed amazement. There went the word as it knew it. She was 300 years old. 300 YEARS OLD! Ird was only...what was it? Oh yes, around ten months. Not impresive at all really, most of the grass here was older. And deer ate that. The way she talked of beauty was confusing, everything was just as beutiful as everything else. Everything had its own type of radiance if you looked closely enough. Rain, pinecones, bones, wings, birds, predators, all those things were wonderfully pretty. The only thing that wasn't really was the little thing itself. But most of all, the idol spirit could not understand why anyone would ever do something so terrible to another person. There was no face to be put on this women, it simply couldn't imagine what this lady might look like. If they ever meet...Ird was going to set her straighter than a stick and possibly hit her with one.
The sudden apperance of those burning bright wings sent it running. Faster than it had ever gone in its short life in the forest. It had no clue what the hell had happened, it just needed to get as far away as it possibly could. Headed towards the safty of the crying stone, screaming like a leaking balloon. The creature never made it there. A hoof connected with the sumbmerged log and sent it face first into the mud where it got further tangled in the pond plants. Fish went whistling past like birds, what the heck was going on? Now that its panic had been halted, the creature strained its neck looking for the angel. Was she alright? It saw the wooden mask bobing around on the surface of the pond and whatched her retrive it. That was good right? Well-she wasn't on FIRE anymore.
Ird puffed at her words and shook its head. "You get back in that pond RIGHT NOW! Maybe water will help more, you should've just done that in the POND. In the first place Ird means. For the love of Twins! Warn Ird before you do stuff like that, almost...almost ran up a tree! Are you kay? Can Ird do anything? Hold on...." It concentrated its energy and hummed. The plants that caught it untangled and spread in different directions. The little thing imediatly began shoving bright fish back to their home and calling to the ducks, making sure they were alright. That task done, it charged over to the angel to make sure she was alright too. "Oh dear, oh dear, look at those. What can Ird do? Umm...the water at the crying stone is clearer, fresher, it'll help those heal. And can find plants there, those might help too. Can you make it there? Ird so so sorry, why would anyone DO this? What the fucks wrong with her? Nevermind, don't answer that. Will you be okay? Maybe the twins can help?"
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.
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Bo lowered her masked head as

Bo lowered her masked head as Ird scolded. Pawing at the wet ground with a hoof, she replied slowly, "Can I be of...some help?" Noticing a shiny blue fish on the ground at her feet, she carefully bent down and picked it up with her mouth. The tall doe carried it over to the edge of the pond and dropped the wriggling fish into the water.
Turning back to the little green creature again to listen, the young angel tried to tuck her charred wings against her body, but collapsed from the effort and immense pain of her burns. Upon hitting the ground, a blackened, bony wing was trapped under the soft brown flank of the doe, bent and suppressed at an awkward angle under her body. Stifling a scream, Bo tried to jerk the wing out from under her to free it from the pressure. But through the weak struggling, a loud crack was heard, and the large doe's body went rigid for a moment.
Then all of the tightened muscles relaxed themselves, and she passed out on the ground.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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It smiled at her effort to

It smiled at her effort to save the bright fish, some wouldn't have thought such a small life mattered. It knew better than that. "Nah, that's enough right there. That fish'll help ya one day now ya know." Well maybe it would....who knows?
The grin turned into worry when she fell though. "NO no no no, don't move! Don't move Ird's coming! Don't mo-" It heard the snap. It's brain automatically connected the noise with the word broken and with pain. Lots and lots of pain. And now...it had no clue what to do. "Aurhg! Now look what you did, oh dear. Now what to do? What to do? Umm...Twins? Gonna need some help for this. First should unstick wing...." The creature ran forward, trying to plow into her at the right angle to get the wing free without hitting anything else. That didn't work. Neither did using its shoulders as a lever. That left only one thing it could do. Grow. It glanced at the Twins Stones and hunkered down, gathering energy from the surrounding area. The plants that grew on its back erupted into bloom and it grew bigger, stoping when it was around her size. Gently, slowly it pushed her over. Yep. The wing was broken, sticking out in a weird angle. Still not exactly sure what to do, the little creature continued to chatter nervously to itself. "Oooo...ow that's bad. Broken. Not know what to do with broken, maybe birds'll know? Ird thinks so...first things first though, gotta move er. Crying stone should help, need pond to do that though. Lotsa magic stuff-can Ird do that? Well...Ird is life of forest so THERE! Its doing it."
Getting the water to do what it wanted would be a lot harder. Water didn't care what anyone did to use it anyway, what if it thought the angel was a plaything? Wouldn't be good at all. Still...how else could this work? The humming changed tenor, becoming more liquidly and the water rose. Sweeping the angel gently off the bank, keeping her on a cushion of current, head above the surface. It waded into the pond with her, directing the water in the right direction to the crying idol. Once there Ird beached her, softening the ground around her first. So now she had fresh water but still wasn't awake.
It had another idea now, the Twins Blessing! That should help some of the injuries, maybe it would heal them all. It charged back to the statues and quickly bowed, feeling the crackling white filling it. Fully charged it bolted back, shrieking to birds to gather. It cast the spell on her, watching her turn white and waited. There wasn't much it could do now until she woke up.
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.
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Slowly, the glowing white

Slowly, the glowing white light of the Twin Gods faded away from the deer's body; the last of the mesmerizing aura traveled up her toasted black wings and stayed for a moment, until it finally disappeared. The doe lifted her head up from the wet ground, wood mask dripping with water. "W-wha..? huh?" She noticed Ird staring at her anxiously with its empty, yet emotional black eyes. Turning her head the other way, she met the stare of the crying idol. The old mossy statue seemed to be glaring down at her, too. Feeling heavy, she glanced down at herself. Her short brown fur was soaked, and her body was in an awkward position on the ground; long legs muddled beneath her on the soft grass. But for some strange reason, she felt completely and utterly comfortable. It was as if the burden of pain had lifted off of her as swiftly as if a little bird were there instead. "Ird...wha...did you do this? My wing, I thought it was--"
Bo lifted a shoulder and clumsily got up from the ground. Shaking the water from her like a dog, she started to flex her wings, now new and soft with down like a baby birds'. The doe started laughing excitedly, running up and down the riverbank, opening and folding her fuzzy wings as if it were the first time she'd had them. Then turning back suddenly, she trotted over to Ird, stopped in front of the little green guy, and bent down and kissed him lightly on top of his head. "Thank you... I don't know how I should repay you; it is an angel's custom to repay equally for good actions bestowed upon them. Anything. What would you like?"
Bo's face stayed close to Ird's in anticipation, the smell of damp cedar wood present in the air between them.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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Quick sudden relief. Thank

Quick sudden relief. Thank the Twins! It breathed a sigh of relief, "Ohhh, thank goodness, that could've-would've been bad." The creature simply thought that the magic had taken some of the pain away so she could move around again and that she'd still have to get the wing set. That's why it had called a bunch of those teeny noisy birds over, maybe one of them had had a broken wing once?
That's why it was startled to see her being so loose with her wings, waving them all over and stuff. "Be carefull! What if somewhat happens again? The current's kinda naughty you know!" The running and laughing finally showed the stag that she was completely fine now. It let out a loud whoop and started clumsy dancing, spinning around every once and a while. Look at this! The residue white glow drained out and Ird returned once more to its normal, rather small size. It stoped when she made her way back. It peeped like a baby bird at the kiss and blushed. "The Twins helped too...anyone would've ya know? The right thing. Uh-ah-um...Ird don't know how-what what right now. That you're fines enough really. Could Ird think about it an tell you latter? If that's okay Ird means." It nuzzled her chest and purr-hummed happily. "Ird thought it'd have to talk ta birds! Ya know...Ird don't know your name yet Miss."

(Look what Starfox drew <3)
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.
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The pleasant smile

The pleasant smile disappeared from her lips as she realized she hadn't even given her new friend her own name yet. "Oh, how rude of me. I'm sorry; it's Bo. My name is Bo. It means 'I will' in Latin. I know that is the language my goddess spoke to us, but she also called me by my other five conjugated names; Bis, Bit, Bimus, Bitis, and..." The doe cut herself short, embarrassed. "I'm confusing you, aren't I? I apologize...it sounds to you that I am speaking your language, but it is the only help Cybele would give me besides morphing me to look more like your kind."

(I love it! Its so awesome ^-^ I had no idea you guys had something planned; I would've flipped out xD)
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

This looks great! Shall any

This looks great!
Shall any problems with code arise, the Glitchmaster is here for you. I'm actually in the mood to build coding now, so I could perhaps make a whole simple original CSS if you'd like for you.
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Ah, thank you Jennie! I

Ah, thank you Jennie! I actually do have a problem with my disclaimer; it seems to be hiding in the bottom box! And I'm still trying to figure out how to change the color of the boxes themselves...
XD It's a tricky code, but I decided to challenge myself because I had become rusty in that area ever since work and school bogged me down.
Would you be able to help me, O Glitchmaster? Sticking out tongue
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Yeeah, but this may come in

Yeeah, but this may come in handy... *gives you a random anti-rust spray*
Try to put another < / div> [without the spaces] just above the disclaimer. The boxes are kind of messed up as well to me :'D
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*takes anti-rust spray. takes

*takes anti-rust spray. takes out brain. sprays it on the css part of brain.*
ahhhh....that's better.
Of course, < / div> worked! I really must be rusty at this to forget that, thank you!

It's kind of strange, the boxes. I put the link to her bio on them, but there is still something wrong. ;-;
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

I could fix them if you lend

I could fix them if you lend me the code on email, it's kinda complicated.
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It didn't mind rudeness. Not

It didn't mind rudeness. Not that she was being rude anyway though, Ird was often rude. "Ird thinks deer only knows Irds name cause Ird says it so much. Don't worry." It tilted its head interest and hummed excitedly. "You got five names? Cool! Can Ird call you all of them or only one huh? Interesting, interesting, interesting! Ird's namesake was a demon cousin of the moon. Kinda weird if you think too much about it really. And more languages? Yes! Ird knows um...what was it called? English! And whatever this is deer speak here. At least she gave ya some help yah?"

(Glad you like it! Suprise! ^^)
Oh, I'm just a girl, trying to find a place in this world.