Poem

Amazon's picture



forest

..smiling through the trees, rose-faced children are dancing,
and bobbing and swaying, or romping and rousing,
and they are golden like

..blazing through the birch, lofty red hill grasses are leaning,
and rolling and waving, or rippling and surging
and they are whistling like

..weaving through the branches, crested cardinals are waiting,
and watching and surveying, or perching and shadowing
and they are patient like

..peering through the lichens, pale god-rocks are defending,
and preserving and presiding, or regarding and defying
and they are still like

..gazing through its river-tears, the stone-mouth is gaping,
and knowing and perceiving, or noting and understanding
and it is calm like

..rising through the honeyed air, the noble oak is chanting,
and droning and rustling, or grasping and securing
and it is wild with life like

..the forest with all of its everythings
the forest is a festival.

Serendipity's picture

♥ This is beautiful, I


This is beautiful, I don't even have words...♥
Munkel's picture

So clever, so wonderful...

So clever, so wonderful...
Bayleen's picture

Absolutely beautiful use of

Absolutely beautiful use of verbs and adjectives :3 Well-written too! This really paints a picture in my mind, it's soooo vivid! Keep. Writing. Poetry!!! XD ♥
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Reyy's picture

I love this so much... so

I love this so much... so warm, lovely...
<3
Serenai's picture

I kept getting goosebumps.

I kept getting goosebumps. ♥
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Amazon's picture

You guys are amazing...

You guys are amazing... ♥
Your comments absolutely made my night. Thank you so much!

&hearts; Wonderful writing.


Wonderful writing.

Anjali's picture

This is gorgeous!

This is gorgeous! <3
Amazon's picture

Made me smile. Thank you very

Made me smile. Thank you very much! ♥

This is so charming, it's

This is so charming, it's really well-written and fluid. Mad props, Amazon. c: <3
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so true, so animating)

so true, so animating) swaying.
brightens up my day every time I read it.
Skatmat's picture

This should become a song

This should become a song ♥ Very very beautiful... I don't have enough to say. Just brilliant.
Kaoori's picture

told you you were epic.

told you you were epic.
Amazon's picture

Thank you, all of you... Such

Thank you, all of you...
Such a surprise to see these comments this morning! ♥

...and omg, kimi. you've forced me to extreme limits. i'm so sorry.

Kaoori's picture

wat WAT

wat

WAT