Seed's Poetry Corner: Haiku for a Snowy Day

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I had a very nice morning today, so I decided to write a few poems. They're nothing special, just reflections on a snowy day with a friend...Or something.
Haiku for a Snowy Day

The snow falls slowly,
settling over hoofprints
from two deer playing.

The still of the snow
reflected in the water
breaks while she's drinking.

And, hidden in snow,
the tiny seeds of flowers,
cradled in the cold.


((This has been another visit to Seed's Poetry Corner. Collect them all!))

Rouda's picture

Short, but pretty. C8

Short, but pretty. C8
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Seed's picture

Then the intent of haiku is

Then the intent of haiku is fulfilled.
Iaurdagnire's picture

... I'm strangely in love

... I'm strangely in love with the last stanza. Something about the last line being harsh with the word 'break'.

Hmm. More please! C; <3
Calypta's picture

It's lovely! I just love

It's lovely! I just love haikus! same as Iaurdagnire; the last stanza has something special <3
Seed's picture

I'll do my best to come up

I'll do my best to come up with some more haiku, then. ^^

Edit: Well, I added another stanza. But I couldn't for the life of me think of any more at the moment. Graaar!