Mother Redd (RP-open Christmas-story)

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Redd looked down in confusion.
The three little things were jumping around energetically and nibbing playfully at his hooves, leaving tiny little marks four-by-four in the snow as they went.
He never expected them to actually stay around after he’d kept them warm last night, but ever since waking up, they’d simply refused to leave him alone.
They spoke in a strange, japping language and their teeth stung sharply, but there was just something about them... He couldn’t just leave them here, his heart told him that’d be wrong. Also, if he moved they moved with him, so leaving them was out of the question anyway.
He sighed as he leaned his head down, slight distress imprinted on his face as he spoke.
“L-listen, I... I can’t keep you guys, you kn-know that, right?...” One of them japped in glee and bit his nose softly.
He sighed again.
“I’m not your m-mother!...” He exclaimed in a slightly raised voice, just as the two others sunk their sharp, little teeth into his one ear, tugging softly and playfully as if trying to turn him over.
“H-hey, that hurts...” He mumbled lowly, though he could not bare to move his head. He shook it gently to get them off.
“Listen.” He said, straightening up again.
“You gotta g-go back home. Y-your real mom is probably looking for y-you!” the three just tilted their heads simultaneously, sitting in a straight line as they did, looking like a perfect mirror image of the next one.
This did not amuse Redd, not one bit.
What was he going to do with these little... young things? – He assumed they were some kind of fawn from another species. He didn’t know how to take care of them, he couldn’t even feed them!
“Look, I’m not even a doe! I c-can’t give you milk!...” He said with a slight blush beneath the fur on his face. He’d only just entered adulthood and the subject of does and fawns and all such things was still a little sensitive to him. But the three... fawn-thingies just tilted their heads to the other side, looking utterly un-comprehending.
Redd gave a distressed, little sound and bent down to level with them yet again... only to be immediately attacked by them so suddenly, even, that he toppled over on the side with a small, slightly shrill squeak.
The fawns only found this highly amusing as they immediately attempted to crawl onto his back, one of them succeeding using its sharp little teeth and claws, which would have stung more, had Redd not had his thick winter-coat. He gave a futile, protesting noise as the two others followed quickly, landing all of them in biting-distance of his soft, sensitive ears.
And bite they did, making Redd give yet another squeak of pain, flicking his ears out of the way.
“stop that!” He protested, though the three wouldn’t listen and only happily continued their mayhem on his back, making chills run down his spine.
“I-if you don’t s-stop it, I’m gonna stand up!” He tried to threaten, making them listen for exactly one second... before going right back to what they were doing before.
Another distressed sigh-squeak.
“A-alright, y-you asked for it!” And, standing up (gently), he received three loud, startled japs and 12 pointy claws into his back, making him cringe in pain, which passed surprisingly quickly. He was, after all, used to minor stings and bumps, being related to Raleigh...
He frowned and looked back at the three, who’d gone quiet and still, looking at him with huge, round, blue eyes surrounded by brown-ish fur.
“Alright, alright...” He pouted, suddenly getting an idea.
-if they stay there, maybe I can find someone who can take care of them!
someone with udders...
He thought, starting a gentle trot slowly.
“Hang on, y-you guys...” He mumbled softly, still looking at them as he took the first steps, making sure they wouldn’t fall off.
And they didn’t!
They clung to his back with both teeth and claws and as he walked, one of them worked its way up his neck to bite his poor ears again, though he couldn’t flick it away, that would make the fawn fall... So he sighed and let it have its fun... for now!
“Alright, you can bite m-my ear, just... just d-don’t make a habit out of it...”
-now... where to find a pregnant doe or one with fawns of her own to give them milk?...
He thought as he began the search for a suitable mother.




Just my personal take on a Christmas-story to keep you guys entertained and... you shape it! It's RP-open!

So, now Redd is looking for a doe with fawns of her own or the like, so the cubs can get some milk. Please help him out and help me continue the story~

--------------------------EDIT!----------------------------
Just a few facts on this:

I'll keep the RP open for... as long as it takes to get a good part of the story down, then I'll close it and create a new entry with a new part of the story and a new picture, featuring the people I RP'd with in the previous blog. So if you want to be in the picture, jump right in and join us in the RP >w<

If I don't get any RPers, I'll just write the story following a pre-set storyline with guest-appearances.

In any case, this is my present to the community, so stay tuned for more art and story and most of all: Have fun!~
Midnightrose's picture

.....i like it (goddammit i

.....i like it (goddammit i don't have a doe with fawns i have a stag ''hmprh'' maybe my Spirit Loreena can help maybe...)
Chickenwhite's picture

It's okay, you don't have to

It's okay, you don't have to have a doe, just trying to help out Redd is enough >w< Realism is good for you, after all~ XD
Midnightrose's picture

XD oh you can ask Faunet her

XD oh you can ask Faunet her deer Sierra has a fawn (i know Baltazar(my deer) is the fawns father) ^^
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Nah, I don't wanna force

Nah, I don't wanna force anything, this is purely spontaneous and coincidental and if I don't get any RPers, I'm just gonna write a pre-set story with guest-appearances >w<
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i would like to rp if i had a

i would like to rp if i had a doe there have fawns (must get one of my does pregnant.....nah just kidding besides only my stags can get a mate)
Chickenwhite's picture

You don't have to have a

You don't have to have a pregnant doe to RP, just have a character who wants to help out >w<
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Loreena.....^^

Loreena.....^^
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Alright, go ahead and start

Alright, go ahead and start ^w^
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Loreena saw the stag stugling

Loreena saw the stag stugling with the fawn-things she walked realaxed to him ''gonna need some help'' she said with a kindly motherly voice


horrible starter
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Making Redd stop in his

Making Redd stop in his tracks as he had been busy trying to gently get his one antler-feather out of the mouth of one of the fawns on his back.
And with a sigh he turned very grateful eyes to this approaching doe.
"W-who're you?..." He asked, while one of the fawns bit down on his other antler-feather.
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''i'm Loreena'' she said and

''i'm Loreena'' she said and bows gently ''they look hungry'' she says and smiles
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And as if wanting to

And as if wanting to emphasise this point, one of the fawns starts gnawing eagerly on Redd's ear. Again.
"Y-yeah, I'm... I'm l-looking for s-something to - hold still, back there! - to feed them with..." says Redd, looking rather pathetic, struggling with the three fawns.
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''i think i have some milk''

''i think i have some milk'' she says and smiles to him and then at the fawns
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Making Redd blink in slight

Making Redd blink in slight confusion, taking a look at the doe in front of him... She didn't look pregnant.
"You d-do?... B-but... You don't look, uh... p-pregnant..." he said, tilting his head to one side... only to have his ear attacked by the fawns again.
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''have been but my fawn died

''have been but my fawn died before it was born'' she says and looks at her belly
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Making Redd frown at this

Making Redd frown at this sudden sadness, his heart giving a sting as he takes one step closer to her.
"I'm sorry..." He said, just as one of the fawns jumped down and made a rather comical attempt at striking her... landing it face-down in a deep pile of snow with a yelp.
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''it's ok it wasen't

''it's ok it wasen't planned....'' she says and makes a kinda smile
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Making Redd tilt his head,

Making Redd tilt his head, not quite understanding this, but still look in awe as the fawn jumps about Loreena's hooves, looking up at her hungrily, even giving a series of small, demanding japping-sounds, making the two others look out from Redd's back.
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she layed down ''i was

she layed down ''i was raped''she says and looks down
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Making Redd even give a jump

Making Redd even give a jump of surprise and his heart nearly stop from shock.
"W-what?!" He exclaims, just as the fawn hurries over to Loreena, sniffing her in eager, greedy interest, as the other two jump down, surprisingly nimble and robust for a couple of little fawns... Especially some this small.
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''he woulden't leave me

''he woulden't leave me alone'' she said and looks at the fawns and smiles ''it's all yours'' she says to them
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-Just as the first (and

-Just as the first (and biggest) one finds a place to suckle, its small, sharp teeth both greedy and uncomfortable, while the two others fight furiously for the second teat.
Still, Redd frowns, mortified.
"T-that's terrible!" He exclaims, feeling more awkward than ever before.
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she nods ''yeah'' she says,

she nods ''yeah'' she says, then she looks at the fawns ''theres enough for everybody'' she says, Redd can see that is not comfortable
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And it makes him

And it makes him frown.
"D-doesn't that... h-hurt?..." He asks just as one of the fawns wins the fight for the nearest teat, though the last one quickly finds one of its own.
More biting and nibbling ensued.
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''it's fine, but yeah'' she

''it's fine, but yeah'' she says and closes her eyes
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Making Redd give a small

Making Redd give a small frown as he decides to lay down in front of Loreena, trying very hard to not look at the suckling as he still finds it... rather embarrassing, to say the least, a blush growing on his face.
"Y-you sure?..."
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she chuckles ''yes i'm fine''

she chuckles ''yes i'm fine'' she smiles and looks at the fawns then at him again
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((I'll just wait for a good

((I'll just wait for a good spot to jump in at |D))
"The cruelest prison is one we make for ourselves out of fear and regret."
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All the while the blush on

All the while the blush on Redd's face is just growing deeper, only weakly concealed by his fur.
"..."
A small time of silence then ensued, before Redd pulled himself together and spoke again.
"So, w-what do you think t-they are?..." He asks, trying desperately to think of something else to talk about.

((Ooohh, Rainflower! So nice to see you here! >w< the more the merrier, feel free to jump in! : D))
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she looked at the weakly

she looked at the weakly blush-pinkish pelt from his cheek and chuckles, then she looks at the fawns ''i have no idear i have never seem them before''


Rainflower join as Chicken says the more wgo joins the better gets it
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Another frown from Redd, his

Another frown from Redd, his brow furrowed from deep thought as he too looked at them... for about a second before he remembered he was pretty much looking at a doe's udders. He then very quickly looked away, the awkward blush only growing deeper.
"They... They l-look a little like, uh... like squirrels, don't you t-think?..." He said, tilting his head slightly, thinking about their brown pelt, pointy ears and bushy tails.
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she chuckles and says

she chuckles and says ''maybe'' she says and looks at them
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Still, Redd gives another

Still, Redd gives another thoughtful expression, giving the fawns one, quick look, though almost immediately looking away.
"T-t-they're a b-bit too... b-big, though, aren't they?..." He said shyly, just as the biggest one gave a bit too forceful of a nib, hurting poor Loreena a little.
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''yeah they are'' she says

''yeah they are'' she says ''something wrong'' she says and makes little noises because it hurts
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Making Redd give an awkward

Making Redd give an awkward smile and shake his head immediately, the blush only growing redder... ironically matching his name.
"N-no! I'm... I'm f-f-fine!..." He says, just as one of the fawns pulls away and gives a burb, ending it with a big yawn, showing those two rows of small, pointy, white teeth that somehow invoke a strange sense of... fear in Redd.
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she looks at Redds blushing

she looks at Redds blushing and chuckles then she looks at the fawns ''done little fellows'' she says and smiles then she looks at Redd again
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-who smiles softly as the

-who smiles softly as the fawns all eventually pull away, yawning and making cosy, little sounds, cuddling closer to Loreena, their stomachs distended... though soon enough, the smallest one of them gets up drowsily and wobbles over to lie... right up against Redd, making him look down at it in utter surprise.
"wha?..."
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she chuckles ''they see you

she chuckles ''they see you as a mother or farther'' she says and chuckles again and looks at him

btw i have to go anwser tomorrow cya ^^
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Making Redd give a small,

Making Redd give a small, surprised jerk as the other two fawns too get up and lay next to him, a look of sheer surprise and a good deal of embarrassment on his face.
"W-what? I-I-I'm not their mother!... O-or father!..." He protests weakly, though the fawns don't give a damn as they just cuddle closer, one of them giving Loreena a lick as thanks before it closes its eyes and cuddles with the rest.

((okay, see ya tomorrow >w<))
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((I won't rp here, as I want

((I won't rp here, as I want it private, just reminding you we need to attempt that...))





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''i think you don't have a

''i think you don't have a choice'' she huckles and smiles
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Making Redd give a small,

Making Redd give a small, distressed sound as he beholds the fawns, his brow furrowed with worry and confusion.
"W-what do I do? I-I d-d-don't know how t-to take care of fawns!..." he squeaks, voice still cracking slightly, making him even more embarrassed.
He really is hopeless...

((Hi, Sentry! : D That's a shame, it would be nice to have you join; After all, this is a multi-social RP-based story, it gets better the more people join >w<))
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Bumping for the edit~

Bumping for the edit~
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''i don't think it's that

''i don't think it's that hard, just feed them and entertain them'' she says and lays the head dow she is a little trired
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Still, Redd sighed in

Still, Redd sighed in distress.
"But I don't know what they eat... b-besides milk, that is..." he said, already dreading for the entertaining-part, picturing his ears in ribbons after just a few "play"-sessions.
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''maybe meat...ot grass'' she

''maybe meat...ot grass'' she says and sighs and smiles

back ^^
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Making Redd frown and give a

Making Redd frown and give a small jump.
"I'm not having them eat meat, th-that's... that's just barbaric!..." He said, the very thought of something eating meat simply disgusting to him.
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''but what if they are meat

''but what if they are meat eaters... besides theres alot of meat eaters in this forest'' she says and looks away she raises up and looks at him again
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Though Redd still frowns.

Though Redd still frowns. "There are?..." He asks, looking down at the little ones, not being able to imagine them killing anything. They're... just too soft and cute!...
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''i don't know'' she sighs

''i don't know'' she sighs and grooms her legs