Deer RP

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Yup! Rp with my newest char, Pain. (Bio is here: http://endlessforest.org/community/bleeding-heart-pain-progress) :3 Anyone can join!!!


Pain woke up, one early morning. She yawned and looked around, only to find that bright light from the sun flash in her eyes. "Oww!" she squeaked as she sprang to her feet, a sharp pain striking at her.
"Damnit!" the doe cursed.
Grunting in frustration, she stamped her hoof on the ground.
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the little doe disappered as

the little doe disappered as they heard a voice coming from behind ''well well...look who i found'' the voice belonged to a doe.


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EDIT: yay page 9 belongs to me
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Pain sighed. She couldn't

Pain sighed. She couldn't really run away now..

"Why did you come back for me?" Pain asked hoarsely. "You should find someone better for you..."

Pain watched him. Sure, she was glad to see him...But she couldn't get over the fact that she had hurt him. She could never live with that.

Pain chuckled a bit and said, "You know, I was going to stay at the bottom of the pond. Make it easy for you...Hm? It would be like I never existed..."
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Moon Theif stared at her in

Moon Theif stared at her in horror. "Of course I came back for you." he said firmly, gazing into her red eyes. "There's no one else I'd rather be with." And with that he continued on cleaning her wounds.

"I don't want you to be with me." He spoke. "Well, I don't want you to be with me if you don't want to. I don't want you doing anything that doesn't make you happy." He spoke softly.
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Pain shook her head and sat

Pain shook her head and sat up, not on her side.

"No, I..I do want to be with you," Pain objected. "But...This new feeling of love is just so different for me...Maybe.."

Pain's ears twitched as she looked away and thought for a moment. Then she looked at Moon and said, "Maybe you can teach me."
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Moon Theif smiled and stepped

Moon Theif smiled and stepped closer to her and nuzzled her. "Only if you want me to." He whispered in her ear.
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Pain smiled and with a bit of

Pain smiled and with a bit of effort, stood up and beside him. She nuzzled him and said, "I want you to."
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Moon Theif wrapped his head

Moon Theif wrapped his head around Pain's neck gently to support her. It was so strange how he had fallen for this doe almost instantly. Moon Theif then took his nuzzle and wiped her face from when she was crying and murmured. "I will be by your side for as long as you want me, and I will dry your every tear."

Edit : Does Pain ever go in the forest? (on the game that is)
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Pain nodded and licked him on

Pain nodded and licked him on the cheek and looked straight into his eyes. "And I will defend you for all time. I will always be her beside you to comfort and guide you when you need it- as your mate. Because I know that everytime I look at you my heart breaks..."

Pain pressed her head against his shoulder.
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Moon Theif's heart swelled at

Moon Theif's heart swelled at Pain's words and he pressed side against hers more. "I will always be here for you and care for you." He said licking her vain. "And stand by your side as a mate and a partner."

Moon Theif looked up at the full moon and smiled as it's strength flowed through him.
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''ohhhh happy ending'' Trick

''ohhhh happy ending'' Trick says and she come closer ''what do you expect now...killing me eh?...be rid of all enemys...like Hanuted and Me?...fine kill me what doe i care'' she says and comes closer to him. Haunted jumps in ''do not listing to her'' she says, she have a blottle in her claws. Jude and Baltazar comes in to hold her and as they hold Trick down Haunted walks to her and puts a claw on her neck ''remember whos stronger?'' she says and helds the silver liquid down Trick trought. Trick passed out but before she does that she throws up some black Liquid. ''do not touch'' Haunted says as they do something to Trick.

Monn theif sees in the liquid: him standing on a cliff with does alll around him whorshipping him and Pain to his side giving him a kiss. all the stags live in fear by him. Haunted lies dead to his side and he has the biggest antlers in the forest. his family is also there smilling to him...there proud of him


Pain sees in the liquid: herself running with no vain or pain. Moon theif is by her side smiling at her. they are just normal with no Haunted, Shadowland, Trick or jude. her family is there when they stop running and they hug her.

as Haunted, Jude and Baltazar carrys Trick away Moon theif and Pain passes ut and when they wakes Haunted, Jude, Baltazar and Trick is gone, and a a black fawn lies with a note a bottle....
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Last thing Pain remembered

Last thing Pain remembered was seeing Trick, cursing at them and then Haunted and a bunch of other deer carrying her away. Everything occured so fast that she barely had enough time for her brain to really connect the pieces.

It was the next morning now. Moon had collapsed next to her. She looked at Moon, his chest rising and falling.

Had Haunted or Baltazar put a sleeping spell on them or something?

Pain shook her head in confusion and then nuzzled Moon's cheek as he lay. She then took the rose he had recovered from the pond and put it back at her shoulder blade.
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Moon Theif woke up from

Moon Theif woke up from Pain's nudges and looked up at her before standing up. He shook his pelt and nuzzled Pain as good morning. "I barely remember last night." He spoke. Looking left and right he asked. "Was Haunted and the others here?" He asked crossly, not remembering anything but being happy with Pain as his mate.
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the fawn just said some

the fawn just said some little noises and turned around.

the note fell down from the bottle with silver liquid

Moon Theif eyed the fawn and

Moon Theif eyed the fawn and marked it as suspicious, he could no longer trust anyone but Pain and himself. He put his body between the fawn and Pain as he always did with someone new. "Who are you?" He demanded eyeing the note that fell from the ground. "If you're with Haunted or Trick, go away."
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Pain felt a little bad for

Pain felt a little bad for Moon to yell at the fawn. But, she too was suspicious of the little being. Pain cocked her head to the side, as if examining the fawn with curiousity. Pain stared intently at the fawn, without getting up.
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It's been very long since I

It's been very long since I replied. What has happened so far?
I have a Master's degree in Wumbology.

O.o haha much, VERY much

O.o haha much, VERY much hahaha. Idk how to sum it up. Lot's of stuff happened with Pain, Moon Theif n Haunted. In the end (whr we r now) I think Pain and Moon Theif are mates and now we're right here with the weird thing with the fawn XD
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What fawn? Frost?

What fawn? Frost?
I have a Master's degree in Wumbology.

noo idk about the othr rp in

noo idk about the othr rp in this, it just kinda stopped I guess. :| idk for sure though. I'm talking about the fawn in the RP with Pain and Moon Theif.
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the fawn don't answer is just

the fawn don't answer is just lays there. it turns around and lay on the other side. the note moves a little.



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just say whn they pich up the note and i will tell whar is writing there.

(alrightie) Moon Theif took

(alrightie)

Moon Theif took a step towards the fawn, causously. What was it doing? Moon Theif sort of shurgged and looked down at the note curiously to see what it said, but kept an eye on the fawn at the same time.
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the note was writing in

the note was writing in pink.


Dear Moon Theif and Pain.

so sorry for the Pain i might have course ya both.

as you can see theres a fawn lying by this note.

it's mine and was created shortly after i was cured and i coulden't take care of it cuz i have to go

somewhere else while i fully recover.

Her name is: Valkyrie.

she is a fully breed Siren and shapeshifter.

she is a mix of all of us.

but because we have Loreena, shes harmless as she have goodnees in her heart.

she will be fully grown in 12 weeks.

you two have 3 choices.

1: give her that bottle and she will die, then you two will be free uf her (and we will not take harm as she have never been awake).

2: you can take care of her and make a a sweet loving deer.

3: you can just leave her and she will raise herself (but she might get mad and evil using stags as her slaves).


it's your choice.


oh by the way, two things more if you will take care of her.

1. she may never know that she's in our bloodpack.

2. if you take care of her Moon theif has to drink the bottle or else he might fall in love with her as every stag will if she gets eye contact with them.


again so sorry.

Trick (of course i am the only one who can whrite)
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the fawn yawned and turned around again

"Pain." he called softly,

"Pain." he called softly, avioding eye contact with the fawn. "Come read this please." he said stepping to the side. Moon Theif sniffed the bottle and no scent seemed to come from it. He wasn't sure if they were going to raise the fawn or not, but he still would want to drink it incase if he saw the fawn as an adult later in life. He would not dare want to betray Pain by falling for another doe.

Moon Theif tipped the bottle over and the liquid spilled out onto the grass and he began lapping it up, the mixture having no taste. When he was done he looked over at the fawn and saw nothing more than a fawn. He then quickly turned his attention to Pain. "What do you think?" he asked. He didn't want to leave the fawn here, he was quite fond of them, but then again he didn't want to have a shapeshifter as a daughter. He sighed and awaited Pain's answer, allowing her to make the final decision.
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the fawned yawned again and

the fawned yawned again and turned around


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well she has a fully done bio (almost) now so she is here to stay
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Pain got to her hooves and

Pain got to her hooves and ambled over next to Moon. She looked down and read the note as Moon drank the odd liquid. Once she had finished the note, Pain's eyes were wide with shock. Pain lifted her head and whispered to Moon, "What do you think we should do? Should we keep her???"

Pain averted her eyes to watch the fawn and observed Valkryie. She had always had a soft spot for fawns. This one, she was still a bit suspicious about...
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Moon Theif looked at Pain.

Moon Theif looked at Pain. "Honestly, I don't know." He spoke truthfully. "I feel as if we should and hopefully she won't know she has her powers." He took a few steps closer to the fawn and sniffed her, and then turned his head back to Pain. "We could atleast raise her and then give her back to Trick or one of those wierdo's later." he said with a bit of a chuckle.
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Pain nodded. "Umm, sure,

Pain nodded. "Umm, sure, whatever you want to do, Moon," Pain said, moving closer to him. She looked down at the fawn and watched it.
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Moon Theif turned his head

Moon Theif turned his head and nudged Pain softly and lovingly, not too close to the vain though. "What do you think we should do?" He asked quietly.
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the little fawn start to

the little fawn start to opens is eyes. the first thing she does is jump to the side and looks at them with a odd look ''mommy?'' she says and looks at Pain ''Daddy?'' she says again and looks at Moon theif

Moon Theif felt shock as he

Moon Theif felt shock as he saw the fawn jump up, but his heart lurched when she called him daddy. He took a step towards the fawn. " y ... yeah." he said unsurely, and twitched his ears, unsure of what now to do, he had only one fawn and she seemed to be very independent and was adopted.
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she makes a kind smile to

she makes a kind smile to moon theif and then looks at pain ''Mommy?'' she says again and makes a little nod
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Pain glanced at Moon and then



Pain glanced at Moon and then back at Valkryie. Pain nodded and said with a nervous chuckled, "Uhh Yeah."
She lowered her head and extended her neck to Valkyrie's face and nuzzled her, cheek to cheek.
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Valkyrie leans against Pain

Valkyrie leans against Pain and starts to feel safe. she nuzzles back

Moon Theif smiled at the two,

Moon Theif smiled at the two, glad Pain was welcoming the young fawn. He licked the fawn's head and looked up at the morning sky. He looked down upon the fawn and asked, "Are you thirsty?" allthough it sounded harsh, he asked it sweetly and kindly.
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''little'' she says and

''little'' she says and shakes her head (like Loreena) so the long white silky hair moves away from her face

Moon Theif stretched his legs

Moon Theif stretched his legs a bit and said softly, "follow me." He flicked his tail for Pain to follow also as he made is way towards the pond.
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''ok'' she says and smiles

''ok'' she says and smiles while taking some steps. she walks a little unsecure as she haven't moved sp much

Moon Theif slowed his pace

Moon Theif slowed his pace and walked by her, making sure she was sure footed and allowing her to lean against him for support on her legs.
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she started to walk more

she started to walk more living feeling safe when her 'dad' suported her
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Pain a little bit in front of

Pain a little bit in front of them. She glanced back and saw Moon supporting Valkryie's weight on his leg. Her ears pricked up, noticing that she should be beside them too. Pain turned around and walked beside Valkryie.

(Btw guys, I'm going to change the title of the rp XD Just because.)
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Valkyrie felt more safe when

Valkyrie felt more safe when Pain also walked besides them. she smiles and said ''are we there yet''

Moon Theif lifted his head

Moon Theif lifted his head from Valkyrie and pricked his ears towards the pond. "Almost," he said, "Just a few more minutes and we'll be there." He then stretched his head up and scanned the forest around him to make sure everything was safe, and then continued on towards the pond.
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Attentive, keen eyes watched

Attentive, keen eyes watched them from behind a bush. They were a deep blue and very much wolf-eyes. When the figure moved to the right, she accidentally stepped on a twig, creating a loud SNAP.

The creature ducked under the bush, worried that she might be caught....
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DUN DUN DUHHH! XD ____ Moon

DUN DUN DUHHH! XD

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Moon Theif stopped dead in his tracks and a growl was rumbling in his chest. He smelled someone in the air, and the crack in the woods confirmed his suspicians. He flipped his eyes through the forest, keeping his body next to his family. He rattled his antlers to let the new comer know he wasn't afraid to fight, and he let out a bellow to hopefully scare whatever it was away.
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Pain's ears flickered toward

Pain's ears flickered toward the noise. She stared, wide-eyed in the direction. She also mooed to alert the newcomer. A bit of her antlers began to grow from her head as she prepared for danger. Pain then took a few steps towards the bush, looking at it curiously.

The other doe behind the bush began to tremble with trepidation. Now it was totally obvious someone was behind there....

When Pain was about to peer behind the now-shaking bush, the doe on the other side burst out of the bush, shouting, "BOO!"

She ran out of the bush. Pain, agitated, gave chase and ran after her.

The doe-wolf had a regular fawn pelt pattern, but it is a darker brown than a normal fawn's. She also has beautiful, soft feather antlers that bobbed in the wind. She has a permanent mark on her face which is the same as a cheetah has the black marks from their eye to the muzzle. Has wolf paws, very small teeth, wolfie ears, wolf tail.
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Moon Theif growled and wante

Moon Theif growled and wante to chase and attack the deer but knew he couldn't leave his daughter. He paced in a circle, not taking his eyes off of Pain and kept half an eye on his daughter. He bellowed anxiously and pawed the ground. He then forced himself to sit still and he kept his eyes on Pain and the fawn. What if that fawn, too, was dangerous?

Moon Theif nudged the fawn next to him. "we must go now." he told her, pushing her towards the pond. "Your mother will be safe but for now we must make our way to the pond."
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Valkyrie looked at her mother

Valkyrie looked at her mother ''ok'' she said quit and started walking not letting her eyes of her mother
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The stranger was looking back

The stranger was looking back over her shoulder, watching Pain chase after her. A sudden smirk went across Pain's face. Confused, the stranger looked ahead, but only to find herself crashing into the narrow creek, with water splashing everywhere.

Pain had already skidded to a stop only an inch from falling. Pain smiled with satifsaction....but she needed more.

Pain leapt down to where the stranger tossed in the creek and hit her on the head with her antlers.

The stranger lay there, partially floating in the water. Pain turned, preparing to leap back up to the ground and rejoin her mate and daughter. Suddenly, the other doe leapt on Pain, dragging her back to the water. The other doe was now a wolf, towering over Pain as she was back to the level ground. She was dark brown with creamy-white dots like a fawns pelt. The wolf snarling and growling at Pain who was stunned as she watched, wide-eyed.
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Valkyrie hears the wolf

Valkyrie hears the wolf snarls ad turns around. she gives herself small wings so she can run faster

Moon Theif jumped around when

Moon Theif jumped around when he heard the wolf, and he snarled, angry. He quickly fled towards Pain and jumped at the wolf, wolves were his specielty to kill ever since Wolf Country. He immidiatly slashed his antlers towards the wolf, keeping his hooves pinned in the water and making sure to not hit Pain. He then let out a low snarl which meant he was vicous and hungry, one wolves rarely used to other wolves only when they were going to kill you.