Deer RP

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Yup! Rp with my newest char, Pain. (Bio is here: http://endlessforest.org/community/bleeding-heart-pain-progress) :3 Anyone can join!!!


Pain woke up, one early morning. She yawned and looked around, only to find that bright light from the sun flash in her eyes. "Oww!" she squeaked as she sprang to her feet, a sharp pain striking at her.
"Damnit!" the doe cursed.
Grunting in frustration, she stamped her hoof on the ground.

Moon Theif nodded

Moon Theif nodded understandingly and looked back at Pain and rubbed his cheek against hers, gazing deeply into her eyes, his warm breath on her ear. "we'll be fine." he said comfortingly, feeling glad the threat seemed to have passed.

Edit : OH! I GOT THE EIGHT PAGE! XDDDD be jealous XD jkjk
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Pain's fur rose a bit as she

Pain's fur rose a bit as she felt his breath on his ear. "Good," she sighed, looking up at him. She blushed a bit.

Her red eyes sort-of matched her fiery, stubborn personality. The red shined in the sunlight, little roses for eyes.


(FFFFFFFF NUUUUUUUUUU ' 3 ' XD JK )
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He smiled as he saw her face

He smiled as he saw her face blush and he felt butterflies in his stomach. He was never so captured by a doe as he was with Pain. He locked her gaze, seeming to not be able to look away from her beautiful, stunning eyes. He sighed calmingly and tore his eyes away from hers and layed down in the nest of flowers, and sneezed as a butterfly tickled his nose.

He then looked up at Pain to see if she'd join him.
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Pain trotted over to Moon and

Pain trotted over to Moon and lied down next to him. She observed the butterfly as it neared her face. She huffed and the butterfly flew a few inches away. Pain laughed and then looked at Moon. She smiled and carefully licked his cheek.
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Baltazar sighs and looks

Baltazar sighs and looks away.


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we have come farr with this rp

but just check Baltazars bio

it's a loong rp

Moon Theif eyes softened as

Moon Theif eyes softened as Pain licked his cheek and he leaned closer to her, and he licked her head lovingly.

He then curled his neck so he he could set his head onto her side protectively, he needed to remember even tho the situation seemed like it was over, who knew what would happen.

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hmm couldn't find his bio, what's the title?
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Pain rested her head on the

Pain rested her head on the ground as Moon placed his head around her. Pain let out a soft sigh as she said, "It's so easy..."
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Moon Theif pondered that for

Moon Theif pondered that for a moment. "What do you mean?" He asked, keeping his head round her.
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All was silent, not even the

All was silent, not even the wind could be heard or a blue-jay's song. Pain watched the trees' limbs sway along with the current of the air.

"...being with you," Pain said thoughtfully after a few moments, answering his question. "It's just effortless..."
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Moon Theif lifted his head

Moon Theif lifted his head and nuzzled her. "It's the same way with you." He whispered kindly and lovingly.
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Pain turned her head and

Pain turned her head and touched his nose to his. "I wish there was some place secluded from here. Quiet and alone...But in this forest, there are just rolling hills of amber or green. No caves or ditches or anything..."
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Moon Theif's ears twitched

Moon Theif's ears twitched wonderingly and stood up. "We've never searched this part of the forest though." He said.

He looked over at the stag. "We're going to go for a walk." He said curtly before turning his head to Pain. "Leade the way." He said with a half smile.
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Pain glanced back at Baltazar

Pain glanced back at Baltazar and then back at Moon. She nodded and said, "Okay."

Pain trotted forward and then a little to the left. "I'm just trying to search in random places," Pain said, slightly turning her head to Moon Thief. "We'll see if anything comes of it."
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Moon Theif nodded in

Moon Theif nodded in agreement and followed after her.
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Pain veered off to the right.



Pain veered off to the right. As they searched and wandered the amber part of the endless forest, Pain improvised with talking.

A little bit hesitantly, Pain asked, "H-Have you ever felt this weird...feeling? It complicated and hard to describe. But it's got that 'warm' touch to it..." Pain had a very focused, yet confused look on her face now. She was still very puzzled about that feeling that she had now felt very often..
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Moon Theif trotted after her.

Moon Theif trotted after her. "That addicting feeling that sends butterflies in your stomach?" He questioned as he swerved through the trees.
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Pain nodded. "Yeah! That's

Pain nodded. "Yeah! That's what it feels like. I feel that a lot sometimes. What is it? Is it a disease? What's it called?"

Pain weaved left and right and then accidentally banged her shoulder into Moon's shoulderblade. Pain blushed and said, "Gah, I'm sorry. I'm a clutts..."
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Baltazar raised up and

Baltazar raised up and followed them from behind.

his look, looked like he didn't care about anything.


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the Guardien Baltazaer's bit if i remember

Moon Theif stumbaled a bit

Moon Theif stumbaled a bit when Pain knocked into him and he laughed. "It's okay." He said with a grin on his face, but then turns serious again. "This feeling ... " He says. "Do you only have it with me?"
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alright I'll look for that
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Baltazar just turn around and

Baltazar just turn around and sits down. he don't want to see there love as he misses his own.
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Pain began to walk forward

Pain began to walk forward again as she said, "Well...I seem to feel like that with you here..Is it bad?"

(@MidRose~ Awww, poor Baltazar ;; Yeah, that sentence was sad...)
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Moon Theif smiled. "No," he

Moon Theif smiled. "No," he said. "not at all." he closely followed her, happy that she was feeling the same way for him.
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"Good," Pain said with a nod.

"Good," Pain said with a nod. But the whole feeling was still quite a puzzle piece for her. Since she had never felt it before, she didn't know its name or if it was something to be controlled. Pain had no knowledge of love, only pain.

Pain ambled onward with Moon Theif.
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Moon Theif followed Pain

Moon Theif followed Pain before he stopped dead in his path. He looked around cunfusedly. There were destinct antler marks on the trees. Suddenly Moon Theif rememberd.

(flashback XD)

Moon Thief was walking sadly and lonely, carving his first antlers into the tree's. He was making them as if they were tear drops symbolizing his mourning over his family lose. The distinct smell of roses in his nostrils.


Moon Theif popped back into reality. "I know where we are." He said sort of excited. This place was miles away from Wolf Country, were he was born, but it was one of the trails he took to get to the forest. "Follow me" he said taking off in a slow gallop.
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Confused, Pain galloped after



Confused, Pain galloped after Moon. "Where are we going?" she asked him.
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While galloping, Moon Theif

While galloping, Moon Theif heard Pain's question. "We're almost there, its --" Moon Theif almost finished what he said when he stumbled upon a rosebed, bigger than he'd ever remembered it. He looked back at Pain and smiled and bent down and picked a rose, offering it to her.

"Don't worry," He mumbled through the stem, "These don't have thorns."
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Pain smiled. As she took the

Pain smiled. As she took the rose in her mouth, she said, "Aww, thanks Moon!"

Pain hadn't really seen roses very often, but she's always loved the color red, so she loves roses. Pain bit down hard on the rose and broke the stem in half, making the green stem smaller. Pain retrieved the rose from the ground again and managed to tuck the remaining stem from the rose in her vein area on her shoulderblade. A sliver of blood ran down her front leg as she stuck the rose in her skin. It stang at first, but she was used to it.

The dainty rose coolly stuck out. She knew the pain would soon go away once it was there long enough for her body to adjust to.
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Moon Theif smiled and

Moon Theif smiled and nuzzeled her. "I know the word that you have the feeling off." He said rubbing his head against hers. He knew he had to tell her sooner or later, and with the rose bed here, it seemed as if it was the perfect time.
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"Oh yeah?" Pain said, cocking

"Oh yeah?" Pain said, cocking her head curiously to the side. "Well then, finally an answer to my anxiety!"

(XDDD You know what's funny? Last night, I was thinking of what I could draw for Pain and I thought about her holding a rose in her mouth! LOL And now she actually has one XP)
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(omg creepy!! lolz) Moon

(omg creepy!! lolz)

Moon Theif looked away unsure if he should actually tell her. He then looked at the ground and then back up at Pain. "Love." He said his voice almost a whisper. He looked away shyly for a moment and then peared at her. "And I feel it for you."
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Pain ears went back in

Pain ears went back in embarassment. She echoed the word, "L..L-love..?"

The foreign word felt funny on her tonque. Unusual, in a way.

She looked down at first and then looked back at Moon who was glancing at her. She took a step back, a bit fearfully. "I..I must confess, this feeling is very confusing...I'm sorry, I just need a bit more time to...think over my emotions..."

Pain looked a bit guiltily down at the ground. She didn't want to hurt him or drive him away; Moon was the only best friend she's ever had. Pain needed to explore this feeling more, but she still wanted to do that with Moon.

Perhaps something in her history was holding her back...But that is for her to discover.
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Moon Theif looked away. "I'm

Moon Theif looked away. "I'm sorry." He said. "I shouldn't have ... nevermind." He said dejectedly. He backed up and trotted away from the flower bed and headed a little away.

He sat beside a flat rock sticking out of the ground and rested his head on it. He blew it.
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Pain took a step forward as

Pain took a step forward as he trotted away, ready to go after him. But she stopped herself and decided to let him recollect himself.

But she felt horrible. She felt like she broke his heart and disappointed him. Her eyes welled up with tears. She looked straight ahead, the sun was setting.

~Wouldn't this be the romantic part where he'd ask me to be his mate?~ Pain thought a bit sadly and sarcastically.

Slowly, she followed his scent and stopped bit away so that way he couldn't see the doe. Pain went back to the rose bed and picked a rose. She returned to where she was near Moon. She set the rose carefully on the ground, careful not to make a sound. A tear from her red eyes spilled on the rose.

Pain let out a little shocked gasp when the tear fell onto the beautiful rose. She then ducked behind a tree in case Moon heard something.

After a few moments, Pain snuck away from the area. The tears dripped faster now. She sniffed and sniffed, wanting to forget the tears, forget what she did to him. It wasn't before long that she left the Amber Birch forest and ended up running towards the pond.

~I will end my misery...It will be as if I never existed for him..~ Pain thought.

Suddenly, she fell right into the pond at the high area. She had intended to enter the water through the shallow end, but perhaps this would be easier for her. Quick. No turning back.

The water rushed up to meet her as she crashed into the water. Quickly, she sank to the very bottom of the pond. Her heart was heavy. Literally.

She rested on the floor of the lake, watching the koi swirl and swim above her. She gazed at the lilypads laxly drifting over the water. The sunset-light sparkled over the water and over her.

But, Pain could breathe in water. She had forgotten that...

"Damn!" she cursed underwater while bubbled exited her mouth. She sighed and said, "Oh well. I'll just stay down here forever. I...I can do that..."

Then more tears fell from her lovely eyes. The salty tears blended with the pond water. "M-Maybe then," Pain said, sorrowful. "Maybe then..he can find someone better. Perhaps my old herd and family was right...I am useless...I don't deserve him and he deserves someone perfect for him..."

So the crying doe lied down on the floor of the pond...listening to the sounds of other deer run or moo. She listened to her own heartbeat...

T h u m p - t h u m p...


T h u m p - t h u m p...
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Moon Theif lifted his head as

Moon Theif lifted his head as he heard a gasp and he flashed up. He bent down to the memorial stone and murmured. "Goodbye mom and dad." and then returned to where he heard the noise. He looked across the forest and a single rose lay there, wet.

Moon Theif sniffed it. "Pain." He murmured to himself. He continued after her scent wearily, unsure if he should follow it.

Moon Theif jumped backwards as he stepped on something wet. Tears? He thought to himself. Was Pain crying? Moon Theif turned his steady walk into a gallop and a sprint as he followed her scent. What was she crying about? He hated the thought of something hurting her. He stopped by the pond where the tears ended.

His eyes opened with shock as he peared into the pond but the water seemed to murky to look around.

Oh no. He thought to himself panickly. oh no oh no oh no! What had he done? He paced the pond side. Where Pain's scent ended. Did she suicide? His heart speed went up and he felt the blood pounding in his ears.

"Pain?!" He cried out, more of sorrow then a call.

(gotta go to bed now! Bye! XP)
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Pain faintly heard a voice

Pain faintly heard a voice above water. She looked up and peered through the water. She barely made out the figure, but she would tell it was Moon from his voice. She wanted to go out of the water and tell him that she was stupid for doing such a thing. Instead, Pain craned her neck, grabbing the rose that was stuck in her vein.

She let go of the rose's stem and it floated to the top of the water. It reached the surface, little droplets of water rolling off of its delicate petals. The doe looked up and watched the rose bob there, her red eyes standing out in the dull-ish grey-green water.
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Baltazar raises up to tell

Baltazar raises up to tell Haunted.

meanwhile a little doe runs around and then she bumps into Moon Theif. she is really scared and says to Moon theif ''s-s-soo s-s-sorry Mr. i-i-i-i did-dn't se-e y-y-ou'' she was smaller than any doe he had ever seen and she had a big scar over acroos her face.



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i just brought Dawn into the picture cuz Baltazar had to go to Haunted to tell her about ther seperation.

aww poor Moon and Pain.

(haha okay) Moon Theif

(haha okay)

Moon Theif looked back at the water and saw a rose floating above it. Pain? He thought to himself. He backed away, ears flattened to his head.

"no, no" he murmured quickly to himself. "If she drowned I would've seen her body." he said aloud. As he reached for the rose almost his whole body off the edge he was bumped. Moon Theif stumbled but caught himself before falling into the pond.

He looked back at the small doe, his eyes full of pain and sorrow. "It's okay." He said quietly. As Moon Theif turned around to pluck the rose out of the water which was brought closer to the pond side from the small waves he asked, "what happened to your face?"
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Pain heard the soft doe's

Pain heard the soft doe's voice from above. Pain nodded and got up. Slowly, she moved through the dense water to the bridge. Her movements were firm as she trudged through the deep water.

The water curled around her legs and her sides. She made her way through the stream, right below the stone bridge. Then she made her way to the Crying Idol and got out of the water. She shook her body a bit to get rid of some of the water.

Pain looked left, then right, making sure that no one was around. She pressed up against the back of the Crying Idol and lied down in the pink flower bushes to cover her. The doe sighed and laid her head on the ground.
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Moon Theif jumped back from

Moon Theif jumped back from the pond when he was picking up the rose when he saw ripples come from the water. There must be an awful big fish in there. He thought to himself. He kept his eyes on the pond as he pressed his ears toward the small doe to hear if she'd respond.

He concentrated on the water and when he saw there was a deer in there, he was almost certain it was Pain. Confused he backed up, he was imagining things. He was now convinced he was crazy ... for Pain? Moon Theif shook his head to clear his mind.

(Imma add Airia if thats okay XP (she's a horse) )

Airia galloped through the forest unaware of what was going on around her when she stumbled upon a doe near the river. Trying her best to ecnore the doe, she went on the other side of the crying idol statue to take a drink from the river, but she couldn't help feeling uneased by the doe's emotions coming off of her.

Ears listenig tentivily towards the doe, Airia approuched the doe from behind, but snorted to show she was scared. She stopped several hoof steps away from the doe. "h-h-hello." Airia stammered unsure if she should run or not away from the doe.
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Pain huffed with annoyance,

Pain huffed with annoyance, but more tears spilled from her red eyes. "Ugh...oh god I thought those were gone already," Pain grunted as she wiped the tears on her side fur.

She sniffed and glared at Airia, "J...Just...just go away, okay? I'm not in the mood for your s-silly g-games. Seriously, l-leave m-me here..."
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Airia nearly jumped when Pain

Airia nearly jumped when Pain spoke and snorted of fear once more. "Are ... " She gulped. "Are you hurt ... ?" Airia asked sidestepping away a bit and shifting her head so no one was in her blind spots.
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Pain grunted again and gave a

Pain grunted again and gave a dark, cold laugh. "Ha! You can't cure a broken heart, 'deary.'" Pain avoided the horse's gaze. Her eyes were a bit sore and weary from crying so much. "Plus," Pain added with a sniff. "What's it to you?"

Pain achingly got to her hooves turned, and glared at Airia. "Tell me, how the hell would you be of ANY help at all? YOU'VE never felt the warmth of someone who would DIE for you, but end up dying for them!!!"

Pain took a hoof-step closer to the horse, almost right in front of her.

"My heart has shattered in millions and billions of microscopic pieces. You can never piece so many together perfectly."
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Airia froze of fear and her

Airia froze of fear and her eyes grew huge as Pain approuached her. Airia let out a screech of terror as she was spooked and veered towards the pond. She bumped into Moon Theif and reared fritenedly.

"whoa there." Moon Theif said calmly, he had obviously already delt with horses before.

Feeling the calm energy come off him Aira calmed down, before taking a step back from Moon Theif fore he had a DotD pelt which spooked her also.

Moon Theif continued to stay calm and spoke, "what's the matter."

Airia relaxed a bit. "A doe over yonder gave me a fright." She said, pointing her muzzle towards the crying idol statue.

"A doe you say?" Moon Theif spoke. "Did she happen to have a vain?"

Airia looked back at Moon Theif. "Yes, have you heard of her? She scares the heck out of me." Airia turned away from Moon Theif. "I must leave, I fear I will run into her again." And with that Airia whipped around and jetted into the forest.
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Pain sighed with anger and

Pain sighed with anger and watched the horse run away. But Pain's eyes widened as she saw Airia bump into Moon.

"Damn!" Pain cursed, stomping her hoof on the ground. "No doubt she'll blab to him about me..."

So, Pain once again ran and headed for the Ruins. She took a backward glance at the pond and then ran ahead.
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Moon Theif glanced at the

Moon Theif glanced at the Fountain. "I must leave." He told the doe. "You can come with me but when I find the doe please stay away, I must settle something to her." Moon Theif then galloped over to the fountain and smelt it. Pain had deffinetly been here. He looked around but didn't see her. "Pain?" he called, no answer. He had to findher trail. He breathed in and smelt her scent. Why must she keep running away?

Moon Theif followed her scent for a few feet before realizing where she was heading. He whipped around and galloped full speed.
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Pain ran as fast as she could

Pain ran as fast as she could to the Ancient Ruins. But she became weak and tired easily. Panting, she slowed to a stop, her body hurting more than ever. She began limping on her back left leg, but she forced herself to run.

But she pulled a muscle and she came tumbling to the ground. Pain clenched her teeth as the stinging kicked in. Slowly, she got to her hooves, desperate to get to the Ruins. An inch of skin tore at her vein on her shoulder. A bit of blood leaked from the wound.
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Moon Thief galloped, peircing

Moon Thief galloped, peircing through the air until he flung himself to the ruins. Where was Pain? He looked over to the horizon, the sun had just sunken and the stars were beginning to twinkle and the full moon showed high above his head. Moon Theif smiled at the Moon, it always gave him high hopes.

He walked into the Ruins, twitching his ears for any noises, there was none. He remembered the last time he was here was with Haunted. Now, suddenly wanting to leave the memory behind, Moon Theif emerged from the ruins and took a few steps away. There was something eery in the air. Moon Theif sniffed. Blood. His fur stood on end and he raked his antlers against a tree. Blood usually ment battle and he could deffinetly use the rage out on another stag. But then he rememberd his situationa and was brought back into viruality and Pain.

The thought came to him urgently. pain! Where was she? Was she near a battle? He galloped towards the scent and stopped a few feet away where Pain was laying, her body bleeding. "Pain?" He asked softly taking a step forward. Was it okay to approach her?
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Pain had been struggling to

Pain had been struggling to get up, her energy was slowly being drained from her. After a long time filled of grunts and "ow's," she finally gave up and lay there.

~Perhaps this is better..~ Pain thought. ~Just dying...like this.~

Pain sighed, but the agonizing pain just striked at her body. The blood flowed down her shoulder and onto the ground, oozing around her. She closed her eyes and waited...

Then she heard Moon's voice. It was soft and low. Slowly, Pain opened her red eyes and averted them to Moon who was standing before her. Once she saw him, she couldn't say anything. Her throat got all chocked up. Speechless, she closed her eyes, allowing a tear to slide over her cheek.

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the little doe was expecting

the little doe was expecting him to hit her so she covered herself ''i-i-i have b-been h-h-it'' she says stil scared and stil covering her body.

Moon Theif, who was focuing

Moon Theif, who was focuing more on Pain, walked over to her side, whiping her tear with his muzzle, and gently cleaning her wounds.