Decypher - The Midnight Man (S. 1 E. 3)

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The Midnight Man

(Season One. Episode Three)

Follow the Season

Mature - May contain brief vulgar language and gruesome scenes



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Giggles and high pitched squealing echoed through the large living room. The group of young high school girls crowded around the television, absorbed in the magical wonder of the drama unfolding before them. Their eyes wide with anticipation, glued to the glowing screen. Gossiping in between the romantic action, "Did you see Mark Johnson today!? He looked so dreamy in his football uniform." "I know right! Ooooh I hope he asks me to the dance next month!" "Are you crazy!?" one chimed in, "He's totally gonna ask Tiffany. Duh!"

Out of the group awing over the movie, one sat awkwardly quiet. Holding onto her knees as she forced a smile. Sam should have felt happy - being accepted into the popular girls' group and being invited to Tiffany's sixteen birthday party - but she felt uncomfortably out of place in the group of gorgeous, rich girls. She had always admired them from the distance like the rest of school and was often made fun of for her bland style, but if they invited her, then surely they liked her. Right...?

Tiffany sat near the back of the room on the floor, leaning up against the edge of the couch. Jenny, a third girl, sat on the couch cushion braiding Tiffany's hair as the two plotted, "Do you think she knows?"

"Naaaah," Tiffany coldly replied as she looked herself in the hand mirror she held. Dabbing a thin layer of foundation on her flush cheek, "She's too stupid to suspect something and is too high on life just being here to notice. You call Will and Nick, yet?"

Jenny snapped her cell phone shut, "Sent them a text."

"Good," Tiffany sneakily smiled as she stood up and began to make her way towards the front of the room. Weaving between the sitting the girls who grew quiet when they saw her. She stepped in front of the television and rose her arms, "Everyone! Ready for a little fun?" The crowd grew restless. "Ok! Ok! We're gonna play a little game. A scary game called the midnight game!" She turned quickly and turned the light off. At the same time, she flicked on the flashlight she held in her hand, casting an eerie shadow on her face as all the girls gasped. Sam grew intensely nervous; being terrified of the dark made it difficult to sit there but she had to like the game in order to be accepted by the other's.

"Everyone, follow me," Tiffany commanded; they followed her to the front door. There sat a table with a small box on it filled with an assortment of things: some paper, a pen, a pin with needles, a lighter, and candles.

Jenny now stood at her side holding onto a digital watch. The two girls looked at each other before explaining the rules of the midnight game, "Ok. so here's the deal. We're gonna summon the midnight man but to there's a few things you gotta know first. Like, in order to summon him we need to all write our names down on this paper and then put a droplet of our blood on it. Then after he shows up, we gotta walk around in the dark and avoid him. If the candle flickers or you hear whispering, it means he's by you. If the candle goes out, you have ten seconds to light it ago or you gotta sit in a circle of salt until he leaves. If he catches you, then you have to live through your worst nightmare. Is everyone ready?"

All the girls seemed intrigued as they took turns poking their fingers. At least, everyone but Sam. She stood silently for a moment holding the metal needle to her finger, pressing it slightly to her skin. She wanted to be liked by them, but the dark was horrifying. However, if she did not do it, they would make fun of her. Biting her lip, she poked herself. Red blood trickled out from fresh wound as she wrote her name down and took the candle Jenny gave her. Shaking slightly, she watched as Tiffany began to knock on the heavy wooden door, saying about how she was calling for the midnight man to show up. A few frantic moments passed and Sam found herself alone in a dark room with only the small candle light to protect her from the shadows closing in on her.

Mean while, Tiffany and Jenny had tiptoed into the kitchen. Nick and Will were waiting by the back door. The girls let them in where the next part of Tiffany's plan was put into action, "The closet is on the other side of the living room. Just toss her in there. It won't be a big deal, ok?"

(Just the first 25 seconds)


The boys nodded to each other as they obeyed her orders. Quietly, the slipped into the living room. Making sure to be careful to not bump into any of the other girls aimless wandering around the room. They hurried to where Sam stood shaking alone and grabbed her. Will blew out her candle as he and Nick picked her up. She screamed as they tossed her into the empty closet and locked the door behind her. She yelled for help as she banged heavily on the door; tears in her eyes. By now, the other girls had gathered around the commotion. The lights were turned on; Tiffany and Jenny stood before them, laughing but their laughter was cut short by the sound of yelling. Sam let out a bloodcurdling scream. The group of girls screamed with her and had a horrified look upon their faces. Confused, Tiffany turned around to see a pool of crimson blood begin to seep out from under the door.


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Cypher laid across the couch still partly dressed in his daily attire. His vest and tie had been removed and hung in the closest after returning home from the Agency; right before he went to lounged in the living room. His sleeves were rolled up to his elbows with the first few buttons of his shirt unbuttoned. Tired with sore eyes, he rested his right arm over his eyes while is left arm dangled onto the floor. Drifting off to sleep, the television softly humming in the background, playing one of his favorite black and white films. Meanwhile, Migisi explored the house. Glancing over once in awhile to look over at her temporary care-taker.

He was a strange creature. Barely ever speaking and often keeping to himself, which gave the off a cold impression. However, he seemed to be close to the opposite to her since he was not like the other two-legged creatures that kept her locked in a cage. He granted her freedom by allowing her to roam freely. She had spent most the day exploring through his home, gazing in awe at all the wonders it held. So many fascinating things to see and so many shinies she needed to collect and claim as "her's". She sat on kitchen counter with her legs spread out, slipping on the cool marble surface. Her head kept twisting as she tried to find a way to pick up a silver folk resting before her. Dropping it due to its weight, the folk made a soft cling as it hit the marble. As it refused to move, she began to grow bored with it.

'Tchyk' she angrily cawed at it, as if scolding it for failing to obey her. She hopped to the edge of the counter. Her head twitching side to side as she examined the room. Trying to find a new play thing to amuse her. Fluffing her feathers, her eyes fell onto the sight of the sleeping man lounging in the room opposite of her's. Her eyes seemed to twinkle with delight. Attention sounded like a good thing to her and despite only being his guest for a few days, Migisi knew how Cypher worked. She knew exactly what to do to get him to notice her.

She spread her wings wide. Pushing off of the edge with her twiggy legs, she took flight, gliding into the living room. Her legs stretched outward before her as she began to slow her speed. Resting herself down on his leg. Curiously, she looked up at him. Tchyak tchyak! She called up to him. The only response he gave her was an aggravated groan as he shifted the direction of his arm slightly. His lack of proper acknowledgement of her was unacceptable! Her feathers fluffed around her as she lowered her head, glaring at him with her blue-grayish eyes. It was alright though for she had another plan.

She hopped up long his body, going towards his head. Her body lifting and dropping with the steady movements of his chest as he exhaled and inhaled. As she made her way up him, she playfully pecked at his shirt buttons before reaching the 'V' shaped opening at his neck. The first three buttons of his shirt had been opened, exposing a part of his bare chest including the small, fine chest hairs that grew from beneath his skin. Her head twisted about as she examined them. Placing two or three close ones in her beak, she jerked her head quickly. Pulling them out.

"What the bloody hell!?" Cypher quickly sprung forward as he sat up. Causing Migisi to lose her balance and fall into his lap. He sat startled for a moment as he massaged the sore spot she had created, "What was that for?"

"Tchyak! Tch," she seemed to reply, looking up at him with innocent eyes. Clearly, she did nothing wrong.

Sighing with frustration, Cypher wiped his tired eyes and groaned. Gently, he began to scratch the side of her head with his index finger, sending shivers of delight down her tiny spine, "Happy now?"

(Ring Tone - Trivia: Also my ring tone in real life)


He let out a yawn before the silence between them was interrupted by the sound of his cell phone ringing. Its unique chime filling the air. The phone glowed blue as the screen light up. Vrrrrrrrrrb! The vibration of the phone shook the coffee table he had placed it on. Surprised and shocked by the instant loud noise, Migisi flinched. Tchyak! Her wings smacking Cypher in the face as she leaped over to the table and began pecking at the phone. Trying to stab the electronic monster as its punishment for disturbing her.

"Migs, stop!" Cypher gently pushed her away as he reached for the phone. Beep! "Yeah?... Yes, I am off duty, sir... Well that is a shame but as I just said I am off... -sigh- Yes, I am aware of that it is only on the other side of town but... Yes, of course... Yes, sir...I will be right there." Groaning again, he rose to his feet. Migisi intriguingly looked up at him, slanting her head to the side as he passed by, buttoning his shirt as he walked. He disappeared into the dimly lit bedroom attached to the living room. Reappearing a few moments later, fully dressed with his fedora in his hand. He smoothed his hair before placing it on his head; then motioned for Migisi to come to him, "Come on. We have a job to do."

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The red and blue lights flashed in the night in front of the two-story suburban home. The quiet neighborhood bustled with officers closing off entrance. Curious neighbors rubbernecked from their window. Their dull lives hungering for some action. Cypher sat behind the wheel of his silver Infiniti sports car. (An Agency owned vehicle, of course.) Migisi stood tall in the passenger seat. Cawing anxiously as she stretched her body full length in attempt to look out the window. She could see the reflections of the flashing lights and desperately wanted to see the source. Beside her, Cypher opened the driver door and stepped out. Slamming it behind him and leaving her behind. "Tch!? Tchayk!?," she leaped in the seat, scratching the leather material slightly with her claws.

"Calm down," Cypher said to himself as he walked around the vehicle to the other side. Pulling on the silver handle, he opened the door while standing tall next to it. He made a jester with his hand, mimicking a bellboy opening the door and speaking sarcastically, "Here you go, my dear."

Proudly she hopped out of the car onto the ground. Her head held high like royalty. As he closed the door behind her, she spread her wings and took to the air. Flying over towards the nearby police car to examine the bright lights closer. Cypher was close behind her until an officer stopped him near the yellow police tape, "Sorry, sir, only authorized personal are allowed pass this point."

"Oh but I am," He quickly answered as he pulled out his wallet. He held it before the officer, displaying a false I.D, identifying him as John Smith, detective. "Your chief granted me permission on my way here. "

The officer stood silently for a moment as he rubbed his chin, "Well, alright... The body has already been removed by the coroner. A CSI team is looking the place over and all the girls involved were sent home. They'll be questioned tomorrow morning when with their parents." He stepped aside, allowing Cypher to pass, but continued to walk beside him. After years of service, he had grown paranoid of new faces showing up on scenes and something about Cypher struck him as being odd.



The two men approached the front door. Before entering, Cypher turned to search for Migisi. Her black figure stood out against the red and blue lights she was perched beside. Drawing his lips close together, he gave a high pitched whistle beckoning her to come along. Her head twisted in his direction before she took off. Flapping her wings a few times, she soared over to him and perched on his shoulder. The officer gave him a strange look as he entered the home with a jackdaw on his shoulder, but the man said nothing. Instead, he pointed down the hall, "Samantha Turner was the victim. The body was found in the living room closet. Deformed and soaked with blood. "

Cypher cautiously walked into the living room. Looking around for any signs of paranormal activity, but he saw no movements in the shadows and had no feelings of being watched from a distance. However, the moment he stumbled into the living room, he knew the reason why the Agency called him in. Squoosh... Squoosh... The carpet beneath his feet felt softer and wet. He looked down to see that the beige fibers had turned crimson as blood soaked into it. The dried stream lead up to the closet door, which the CSI team left open. Inside, the walls were splattered. "What the bloody hell happened here?", he called back to the officer with no pun intended.

"Cause of death couldn't be determined here. Coroner said there was too much blood and the body was too cramped into the small space. So we should have an answer tomorrow. As for what happened, hell if I know! One of the girls - Tiffany Carter - said something about them summoning some demon that killed her. Ha! Can you believe that?"

The word 'demon' caused Cypher's head to spin. Startling Migisi who sat oblivious to the scene on his shoulder. He quickly looked the scene over again but saw no pentagrams or other demonic symbols written anywhere in the room, "Did she specify which one?"

The officer stood with his brow raised and a freshly lit cigarette dangling in his mouth, "Are you serious? Eh... Well if you're curious... Something called the midnight man."

"Ah, so they were playing the midnight game."

"The what?

"The midnight game. It is a Pagan ritual. No one is certain of where it exactly it originated from but it is believed to have been a punishment. As the victim laid asleep in their bed, those wishing for justice would summon the midnight man to the house unknowingly. The midnight man would then attack the victim in their sleep, forcing them to live through their worst nightmares vividly, almost as if it was real. Over the years, thrill seekers made a game of survival out of it."

"But how could a girl die from that...?"

"Have you never heard of the theories that if you die in a dream, you die in real life? This is one of the legends that spawned that theory."

The officer stared in a confused daze at him, "This is all crazy and impossible."

"Ah, but nothing is truly impossible."


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The silver pocket watch read 11:47pm in his hand; gin and tonic in the other. Running his thumb over its smooth, glass surface he stared straight ahead, deep in thought. Was the risk worth discovering the truth? To most, it probably would not be but for a man with almost nothing to lose, it was an acceptable challenge. Before him on the coffee table sat his supplies. One plain white sheet of paper, an ink pen, a single candle and lighter, and a needle the Migisi mischievously picked up. Eyeing his pocket watch while she played with the needle in her beak. Its shiny exterior sparkling like a silver diamond but it was always attached to Cypher; she would have to think of a plan in order to snag it from him.

11:49pm - He lifted the glass to his lips. Letting the cool liquor run down his dry throat and hoping the faint buzz would help counter the deep emotional pain he was preparing to face. The ice inside clinged softly on the sides of the glass as he placed the empty drink on the table. Rising to his feet, he placed his arm down near where Migisi stood, "Come on." He motioned for her to get on his arm. Thrilled by the fact that he was offering her attention, she dropped the needle and happily crawled onto him. Her claws holding her firmly in place as they stuck to his shirt sleeve.

11:51pm - "That's a good girl," he praised while scratching her under her chin. The jackdaw cooed with pleasure until she found herself being placed inside the metal cage. Tchayk tchayk! She scolded as she grabbed onto the cage's door with her feet. Flapping her wings wildly in attempts to pull it open and gazing up at him with furious, sad eyes.

"It is for your own good, my dear," Cypher said while knelling down. Sprinkling a circle of salt around the base of the cage. "Hate me all you want; you will thank me later." He flipped his pocket watch open - 11:54pm.

Quickly, he rushed back into the living room where he stopped at the table. Cypher he wrote in cursive on the sheet of paper before retrieving the needle from the floor where it fell after Migisi let it go. He pressed the sharp point to his skin, pushing into himself. Blood oozed from the tiny wound; the flow stopping as he pressed it against the paper. (11:57pm. Not much time was left to prepare.) He light the single candle upon which he left setting on the coffee table. He stepped into the kitchen where he grabbed one of the dining chairs from the table. He sat it near the coffee table, facing the front door. 11:59pm. It was time.



Cypher stood before the front door. Making a fist, he lifted his hand to the wood and began to knock. Knock knock knock... he kept rhythm for the twenty-two knocks within the minute to summon the midnight man. Finishing the final knock directly as the grandfather clock in the living room chimed for the last time at midnight. A devious smirk embraced his lips as he backed away, allowing himself to fall into the kitchen chair. He leaned back and waited in the darkness. A few brief moments passed before the candle light flickered. A minute later, it blew out.



Cypher found himself still sitting in the dark room, surrounded completely by blackness until bam! a spot light flashed on. Its hot ray beating down on him like an interrogation. Suddenly, straps appeared around him. Like lively vines that spawned from the wooden planks of the floor. They whipped around in the air before slapping themselves against him. One grabbing each of his wrists as they began to pull his arms down to his sides. His lean muscles tensing as he struggled against their force, but failing as the straps pinned him down to the arms of the chair. Two other strapped wrapped around his ankles, pulling his feet towards the chair legs before securing him. A final strap coiled around his abdomen. Wrapping itself over his arms above the elbows and his chest, holding him firmly in place.

He sat stunned with wide eyes and bangs dampened by a nervous sweat. Across from him stood a man, who at first, seemed to be indistinguishable, until he stepped into the light. A long, white lab coat hung down around his shoulders covering the strip suit he wore under it. His gray hair slicked back trying to hide the balding spot on his head. His elderly face held no emotion as he looked at the trapped man before him, "Hello, child of mine."

Immediately, Cypher's heart sank. A terrifying feeling engulfed the prisoner, "Dr. Hayes...?"

Dr. Hayes stepped closer. His expression never changing but his eyes swirling with an unseen evil, "What is wrong, Cypher? Are you feeling depressed again?" The doctor was now inches away from his prey. His icy hand lifted Cypher's chin in order to gaze directly into his eyes, "Dr. Heung seems to feel so strongly about rehabilitating through such passive means, but you and I know that those methods have no affects on a mind like your's. So broken it is almost beyond repair, but I know what will fix you right up."

"No... Please... I'm fine! Really..." Cypher's voice cracked as the man began to tremble. All sense of confidence disintegrating just by looking into the elder's eyes. They were hollow and soulless. Staring down at him like a wolf about to feast upon a dying deer, that was still alive enough to feel the pain of its flesh being ripprf right before giving its final breath.

"Do not be afraid, my child. I will be tender. I will be kind," His mouth curled into a malicious grin as he began to lower his hand. His fingers spreading out across the shivering young man's neck. Feeling the veins within it pulsating from his racing heart. Tightening his grip around it, enjoying the feel of power as he now controlled Cypher's fate. Should he let him die now? Or let him live to be tormented for amusement again later?

"No... No no no...Dr. Heung!"

"Heung can't save you this time, boy! You're mine... You're all mine..." Dr. Hayes was now choking him. His grasp tightening as his untrimmed finger nails began to dig into Cypher's neck. Around the pair, water began to fill the room. Raising rapidly as it reached their waists, only horrifying the poor man more, "Beg, boy! Beg because your damned life depends on it!"

The water was now to his chest. Cypher's heart pounded madly in his chest. He struggled with all of his might to break free, but the straps holding him in place were too powerful and his was losing oxygen as Dr. Hayes continued to choke him. His teeth clenched while he winced in pain, before finally allowing his body to go limp. The water had risen to his neck; being at the same level as Dr. Hayes' hand with no signs of stopping. This was it... This was the moment where he would die. There was no reason to fight any longer for if he did, it would only encourage Dr. Hayes' to be more cruel. Leaving him with nothing but more pain to live for and surely, that was not worth going on. He gazed up at his murderer with defeated eyes, waiting for either the strangulation or the water to kill him.


" Tch tch tchayk!," a familiar cry filled his ears but what was it...? He had heard it before but never in the asylum. " Tchayk tchayk!" It screeched again. The cries sounding like they in shock, striking Cypher with a stranger feeling of worry. While gasping for air he thought hard about where the source had come from, and then he remembered: Migisi. But what was she doing in a room filled with water and the sadistic doctor of his past? The idea made no sense to him but he lost his train of thought as she screamed once again. Confirming his suspicions that they were indeed cries for help.

"Migs!?" Cypher called out in return between his gasps. Adrenaline shot through him. Giving him an unusual sense of strength. He fought against the bonds as the water now almost covered him completely. Ignoring the doctor's commands to stop, he kept fighting. Something was wrong with Migisi and he had to get to her. "Do not worry, my dear, I'm coming for you!" He managed to break lose upon which he stood up. Instantly, the water disappeared. The room returned to normal and was completely dry as if it never happened. Dr. Hayes disappeared as well; not even the strangle marks were left on Cypher's neck. He was back in his living room; back in reality.

Still terrified and confused, he forced himself to run to the bedroom. There he could see a dark figure staring at the scared jackdaw in the shadows. It had a human-like body but was extremely thin and lengthy. It stood at the very edge of the salt circle, gazing at her with hungry red eyes. Migisi cawed madly, trying to chase it away as she flapped her wings violently behind the bars. The figured turned and faced Cypher when it realized he had entered the room. Glaring at him. It said nothing but only stared him down. Both out of anger and astonishment that he had managed to fight away the nightmare it had cursed him with. It remained motionless before disappearing into thin air, just as the pocket watch ticked away to 3:33am. Leaving the pair alone in the dark.

Turning quickly, Cypher turned on the bedroom light and hurried to Migisi. The moment he opened the cage door, she flew out and flew directly to his shoulder. Her feathers were a rustled mess as the tiny bird shook violently from the shock of seeing the midnight man herself. She pulled her wings in tightly around herself as she cuddled into the nape of Cypher's neck, taking refuge beneath his shirt collar. "Shh... Easy now," he whispered to her as he gently titled his head in her direction. Somewhat resting it upon her as she snuggled into him. He rose his hand around her, attempting to simulate a hug as he stroke her back to calm her.

There the two remained comforting each other. Even though she was just a bird, having another there with him helped ease him. It was nice to not be alone, but it was even nicer to feel a sense of being needed and wanted.

(Credits)


Mr.Sanguine's picture

awww Cyph' and Migs' are

awww
Cyph' and Migs' are adorable.
'dat pug

I like this one, me and some friends always wanted to do stupid midnightman/bloodymary/one man hide and seek games, but we always chickened out xD
Shiori's picture

Oh highschool girls... God

Oh highschool girls...


God judges you >8C

Yay! This is more like it! 83 I'm really loving the 'quiet' moments between these guys hehe, totally LOLed at the chest hair thing XD Totally would have done the same thing Migs -highfives- I thought you said he was nobody's bitch? ;D
Anywho, the creature was pretty intriguing, will we be seeing more of it? Seemed a bit silly to summon it like that and not have a back up plan. Do I need to have Cas facepalm again?
I wonder if this counts as animal abuse << hehe.
“What's her home life like?” “Oh you know...crime scenes, swallow-able sharp objects lying around, demon summonings...no big deal.”
Poor guy though...he needs a hug times ten ._.

-jams to theme song again-
Kumiko's picture

Sanguine - We tried it once

Sanguine - We tried it once back when I was in Girl Scouts. I didn't see anything but a few girls claimed that saw Bloody Mary in the mirror. It was freaky to do nonetheless!

Shi - You should know better than anyone that Migs has Cypher wrapped around her little finger. Eh... wing. :3

Anyway, I'm not sure if I'd bring the midnight man back but I do plan on using other myths in the future. In a way, that is pretty much what Cypher wanted to do, just confirm that the legend was true. He's still a rookie at this stuff don't forget. So he still has poor judgement and is going to make naive decisions since he still does not what to fully expect with most of the creatures he encounters.

And yes! The poor guy has it rough and probably isn't the greatest pet owner, but he does what he can to protect his precious Migs.
ShikaTale's picture

Oh yay I was waiting to read

Oh yay I was waiting to read this! This is exactly why I don't do that bloody mary/midnight man crap! Even though it could be fake, it's still scary, even more scary because I'm terribly afraid of the dark.

I was in the beginning of reading this until I had to get off the computer but I begged my mom I had to stay on because it was important reading, and luckily she let me stay on for a few more minutes ;D
I can't wait for the others!
GuardianGhost's picture

This one is really good, I

This one is really good, I love the way the subject focused on myths and legends. Even if at the end I was like "Nuuu where the midnight man is going? Come back coward!" D:
And where is the crimson bird eh? Do you think we forgot it? xD
Totally agree with Shiori about the chest hair thing: it's epic.

- is secretly very pleased that stupid high school girls have been scared by the midnight man -
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Kumiko's picture

Shika: Awww... I'm flattered

Shika: Awww... I'm flattered that you think my writing is worth staying up late for, but be careful. I'd feel bad if you got in trouble because of me.

Also, you're afraid of the dark? Would you say that Shika (your deer) is too? -rubs chin and brainstorms for next episode-

Guardian: The midnight man always disappears at 3:33am....

"Ahem... There are many legends and myths that surround the belief of the "Witching Hour" or "Devil's Hour", spawning from European folklore as it is referenced in Sleepy Hollow and even in the Shakespearean play, Hamlet. If I remember correctly. It is the hour upon which it is believed demons, ghosts, witches, etc... are more powerful and dark magic is the most effective, taking place between midnight and 3am or even 4am. Most ghost hunters - including myself - claim that this is the prime time to witness paranormal activity since a ghost's energy is at its strongest.

3:33 is believed to be a 'demonic' number since it appears twice in a day, equaling to 666 - the devil's number.
"

Thaaaaaaank you, Cyph, for the random clarification.

Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it. As for the crimson bird, I don't know... Maybe you'll just have to keep reading and wait to see. -smirk-
GuardianGhost's picture

Ahahah yes, thanks Cypher, I

Ahahah yes, thanks Cypher, I know it, I have some knowledge about as well xD
But it's anyway so D: Lol.
You're welcome... And I'm intrigued now ._.
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Kumiko's picture

Nothing I like more than

Nothing I like more than seeing people dragged on by suspense. >_>

Probably my favourite so

Probably my favourite so far~
Seemed to go slower than the last one - that's a good thing, just to let you know Eye
Very much enjoyed reading it!
ShikaTale's picture

Ah don't feel bad, if

Ah don't feel bad, if anything, I'd blame myself ^^

And yeah, I guess Shika would have to be scared of the dark because she is mostly based off of me
Kumiko's picture

So you guys want me to

So you guys want me to continue with longer, more in-depth pieces?
ShikaTale's picture

Yes, but I think you should

Yes, but I think you should work with ever you think is best and which is easier to do.

Do whatever you can, I don't want to feel like I am wasting all of your free time making longer stories :c
Shiori's picture

Yes! :3

Yes! :3
ocean's picture

I really enjoyed this, even

I really enjoyed this, even if it was mildly terrifying. Sticking out tongue
I gotta say, I love the inventive commercial break in the middle. Haha!
Do write more in-depth pieces!
GuardianGhost's picture

I think that you should write

I think that you should write as much as you feel like.
Personally, even if with a bit of difficult (because of the different language, you know), I had no real problems in reading this, and, since the plot is charming, I believe that you could write longer stories without worry about loosing readers.
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MissButterflyCaught's picture

Moar.

Moar.
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Kumiko's picture

I have no problems with

I have no problems with writing a lot. I love getting in depth into my descriptions and putting live into my characters. It's my goal to cause emotional connections within my reader towards the characters; I like trying to make the characters feel so real that you feel like you've known them.