[ a day ]

the day




when your
heart


implodes


draws back



sweeps out



to search



and find

and lose

and grieve

and weep


then pause

and take a small step back

and a long stride forwards

until you've reached it

your peak

your all

your strength

you don't need it

nor the pain

nor the joy

nor romance nor lust


just take love

as it comes

so slow

and yet

you find it

keep it

in whatever form it gives itself as

and then

you know

you've found


a Valentine

no structure

no form

no purpose

just one, somehow






open-winged, we'll fly







in love or otherwise





whether ignorant or free



whether doomed or meant-to-be








yellow

rose

through your letterbox









or not








recognition or none, poetic or blunt

your

heart

remains









however shattered










keep your time











still your mind







------------------------------------


So this makes no sense whatsoever and all of my characters are rambling but in my own head it works auuuugh I need to stop spewwriting.

*speechless* o.o Mind=Blown

*speechless*

o.o

Mind=Blown

What are you talking about? I love spewwritings. :3

I didn't expect that

I didn't expect that sdfsdf~

Thanks bunches, darling c: <3
Mis's picture

Ah, very lovely written.

Ah, very lovely written. Chaotic but you still feel a balance. Nice!
Love how this day can inspire people.

Thanks Mis &hearts;

Thanks Mis ♥
BrownLupine's picture

It does make sense to me,

It does make sense to me, perfectly.
All the characters speaking their mind and yet it is combined into a perfect text.
Really if I could sing or compose melodies, I would try to make it a song for you.
This is really breath taking.
I had a video in my mind for this text by the words you wrote here alone.
Dear, you are the perfect writer and composer of lyrics.

For you see, everytime I think, what could be next, what could surpass what is written here, you manage to write another mind blowing piece.


What nature divides, the spirit unites.

Hnn Nishi ;A; Your comments

Hnn Nishi ;A; Your comments never fail to make it feel like it's worthwhile posting things here. Thankyou so, so much, really <333
eyestrain's picture

Interesting concept.

Interesting concept.

I don't strive to be the best, but instead I strive to do my best, and always give it my all every time.
-faunet

Thankyou.

Thankyou.