the day
when your
heart
implodes
draws back
sweeps out
to search
and find
and lose
and grieve
and weep
then pause
and take a small step back
and a long stride forwards
until you've reached it
your peak
your all
your strength
you don't need it
nor the pain
nor the joy
nor romance nor lust
just take love
as it comes
so slow
and yet
you find it
keep it
in whatever form it gives itself as
and then
you know
you've found
a Valentine
no structure
no form
no purpose
just one, somehow
open-winged, we'll fly
in love or otherwise
whether ignorant or free
whether doomed or meant-to-be
yellow
rose
through your letterbox
or not
recognition or none, poetic or blunt
your
heart
remains
however shattered
keep your time
still your mind
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So this makes no sense whatsoever and all of my characters are rambling but in my own head it works auuuugh I need to stop spewwriting.
*speechless* o.o Mind=Blown
o.o
Mind=Blown
What are you talking about? I love spewwritings. :3
I didn't expect that
Thanks bunches, darling c: <3
Ah, very lovely written.
Love how this day can inspire people.
Thanks Mis ♥
It does make sense to me,
All the characters speaking their mind and yet it is combined into a perfect text.
Really if I could sing or compose melodies, I would try to make it a song for you.
This is really breath taking.
I had a video in my mind for this text by the words you wrote here alone.
Dear, you are the perfect writer and composer of lyrics.
For you see, everytime I think, what could be next, what could surpass what is written here, you manage to write another mind blowing piece.
What nature divides, the spirit unites.
Hnn Nishi ;A; Your comments
Interesting concept.
I don't strive to be the best, but instead I strive to do my best, and always give it my all every time.
-faunet
Thankyou.