Bald Deer Birding;; a poem for Atiq

Anzel's picture
Glazed upon thigh and should'
Lie golden blades of word
Stars flicker down like teardrops
Splain and spilled, I am furred

Query to the bald deer birding
Foot by foot o'er old bridge
Lonely, sin relativelies
Sitting to stare and to quiv'

Chipping the leaflets with nips
Standing tall, regal, unfurl
Grandfather Atiq to all
Lest there be seen a squirrel


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should' = shoulder
bald deer birding = bald monks walking on only two feet like a bird
o'er = over
sin = without (said like 'seen'; spanish...i wish it was an english word)
relativelies = relatives
quiv' = quiver
lest = unless

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Hope you like it :3 I was in "my groove", hehe, the words flowed from my fingertips.
phantomhelsing's picture

do I win? your metaphor is

do I win?

your metaphor is cutting into my cankles! >:C



I haven't gone insane......I've gone awesome.
Lacey's picture

lol Atiq is the winner!

lol Atiq is the winner! Laughing out loud
bubblywums's picture

Noo, fail. --- Learn about

Noo, fail. Laughing out loud

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Learn about the stag.
Anzel's picture

Okay, Atiq, what do you want

Okay, Atiq, what do you want a poem about?

(if you can give me a biography link if you want it about your deer, or anything else, it would help)
phantomhelsing's picture

http://www.endlessforest.org/

http://www.endlessforest.org/community/atiqs-bio-7-28-08

that's his biography, any subject matter could probably fit him. though something about memories or the unknown would fit best. Nobody knows anything about who he used to be.

Usually, any inspiration I get for him comes from this song

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your metaphor is cutting into my cankles! >:C



I haven't gone insane......I've gone awesome.
Hubalaboo's picture

That is a cool poem... And I

That is a cool poem... And I agree, the 'sin' that you say should be a word.
Woah, 'words flowed from my fingertips' gives me such a weird but awesome image... Laughing out loud

PS: I've sent you a PM

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phantomhelsing's picture

wow O-O you are a true

wow O-O you are a true master of the written word. thank you that is excellent X3


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your metaphor is cutting into my cankles! >:C



I haven't gone insane......I've gone awesome.
Anzel's picture

*is still lonely*

*is still lonely* <<;

...*stabs main server*