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stimp24's picture

iiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaccccck

im was gone for such a long time because I was busy having fun on my days and studying and yesterday I was at seaworld with my family!!!
my gosh it was hilarious when the shows make a joke out of shamu "shamu can you do this " x3x3x3
x3 another reason is that ever since my parents got the family a new computer they are not really into the downloads of games.... so they let me only have 1 month to play a game that was donloaed like this game for example and when the month ended they took the game off but now im trying to convinvce my dad to download the game and he says maybe ok so I might see you guys soon!!!!





forget about the misspelling (:I
Halfen's picture

Mighty

Clear air whipped through the leaves and tussled the animals who stirred in their holes and warm beds of leaves. A hushed silence swept through the forest, as if waiting in a shushed silence. Colorful leaves on the trees slowly balanced on their thin stems and as the wind blew, fell off sailing on the currents of air. a shadow fell on these leaves on the ground, and the great figure of a deer appeared.

The stag's antlers towered on his head like the branches of an ancient oak tree. Th bark of these great antlers was covered in silk, and the deer's fur was long hugging his massive body, a warm winter coat. The deers powerful legs stood straight and muscles bulged beneath the silky dark brown fur. It shined and rippled in the fall sun, as the animals stood to watch the mighty deer walk across the forest path.

The deer's humanoid face was stern, his eyebrows furrowed. His eyes were a deep blue, thick layers of clear ponds rippled in them and they reflected the sadness that came with fall, the trees going to sleep and the chirping sound of the bird quieting down. The deer quickened his pace and crunched through the leaves. He looked down.

It seemed as if the world was coming to an end. His family was gone for the fun of the game. The sharp sound of bullets echoed in his ears, a never ending chorus.

He remembered it clearly.

It was midmorning- he was sitting on the edge of a small rock cliff. Dirt was piled up on top of it and grass grew creating a soft cushion. Below him was a small pool of water- perfectly clear with not even a ripple. Smooth, long, flat rocks made up the bottom of the pool. There were two deer standing across from him, looking in.

One, was a light brown speckled with white, the sign of a fawn growing to become a stag. His eyes were green, and his mouth was turned upwards into a smile. He quickly looked to his brother. He was black, with chocolate brown eyes like mud, he was smaller with studs of antlers.
JinxedSecrets's picture

Milo

There once was a deer named Milo. Milo was strange he had a Magpie pelt on and a skull mask! And he also had Kirin horns. Milo was a sad deer he had no friends. All he wanted to say was ''hi!'' But all he got were screams. All the other deer were afraid of him. Milo felt like he didn't belong. He went down a dirt path to were his herd was. All the other plain deer stared at him. They whispered back and forth to each other. Some of the deer looked away when he glanced at them. Others would hide from him. One day the buck of the herd Moon came up to Milo. And he said he didn't want Milo in the herd anymore. He kicked Milo out of the herd. Milo felt alone.......badly alone. It started to rain. Milo trotted in the rain with his head down. He then found a big oak tree to sleep in. He went into the big Oak tree. He slept until the sun came up. He woke up and thought ''Oh I'll never find another herd no one likes me'' Milo traveled for miles and days until he reached another forest. There was a sign and it said The Endless Forest. ''Maybe I can find a herd here!'' He said. He wondered out searching for a herd. There he saw some odd looking deer eating some flowers! One of the deer's glanced over at him. Milo waved his hoof and said ''Hi!'' All the deer lift there heads up and glanced at him. One deer came close to him and said: ''You must be new here do you have a herd?'' Milo smiled. ''No I don't have a herd..'' He said. ''Would you like to join ours?'' He said. ''OH YES YES YES!'' Milo cheered! ''What's your name? My name is Milo.'' Milo said. ''My name is Willow.'' He said. Milo and the rest of the herd know travel the places of The Endless Forest everyday.



''Today you are you,
that is truer than true.
There is no one alive who is
youer than you.''
-Dr. Seuss
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Uh....don't know what to put here! XD

So I finally became a doe yesterday, in the afternoon. I logged off the computer in the morning as a fawn wearing the full magpie costume. When I came back on later, I saw, before I got up, a big deer was laying next to me. I thought it was kind of strange, because I didn't know of any deers who liked me that much, except for DeerLover777' deer, Beorn. But it wasn't her. She wasn't wearing a magpie costume, like me.......OH, IT'S ME!!! So I got up and tryed out my new deer body, but only for a minute or two, because my time was up on the computer. I will be in the forest today. You'll see me in a full magpie costume.

Sadly, I tryed all of your suggestions, but none of them seemed to work for getting those pictures I took to show up. They were good suggestions, too. If only I could get those pictures.....I took about a million great pictures, some of giant crows, giant rabbits, and even a giant fawn! And that one day last week where it was still partially nighttime in the forest and everything had a purple hue to it. I know these pictures are lost somewhere in my computer, and I'm going to try just about anything that will work to get them back. Sad

~Nireda the fawn....er, excuse me...DOE
Dampir's picture

[IV] Will you?

deathbydeer's picture

the dream

last night i had a dream
about a forest without end
it was covered in sunbeams
and full of possible friends

there there was no sorrow
or fear, or pain
there i could trot to and fro
and everything is humane

but with much grief
i eventually awoke
and i wept at how brief,
was my visit to the oaks
and the other trees
deathbydeer's picture

the wolves song

deep in the forest there is a meadow. tonight it is bathed in the light of a full moon. out of the shade of the trees a pure white wolf appears, its snow white pelt gleams in the moonlight. all is quiet. everything listens. the wolf lets out a howl. at first it is tuneless but soon it takes on a melody unheard for thousands of years. in the middle of the howl a second wolf appears. this wolf is pitch black and bigger than the other. the black wolf now begins to howl and both of the melodies intertwine creating a song so beautiful that even the bird's hymns could not compare. now the song comes to a end and the two wolves approach each other and sniff. now they return to the forest once again shadows in the night.

plate

where can i find a plate can some one please help me Puzzled
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