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Words in the Mist (poem)

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January 23, 2011 - 6:37am — quadraptor
I stand in the snow on a winter's night
Lingering from my mouth are the words I speak
On clouds of warm mist that flow and spread
Vanishing before my eyes as the frigid air overtakes them
Even then I hope the message reaches their destination
You step outside and listen to the quiet night
Only to hear a slight whisper traveling in the wind
Unsaid words meant only for your ears
January 23, 2011 - 6:54am — Kaoori
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wow. I could draw a picture

wow.
I could draw a picture to this.

I love this one, quad. It really stuck to me.
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January 23, 2011 - 10:19pm — quadraptor
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Thanks, I've always loved

Thanks, I've always loved blowing hot air out of my mouth in the winter and watching the mist flow out and vanish, and while taking the dogs outside I came up with this one.

Did you find what the message was? It's in the poem. Eye
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January 23, 2011 - 10:22pm — Ryff

I found it.

I found it. <3 Beautiful poem, quaddle.

(yes, my nickname for you is now quaddle and you will be my quaddle FOREVAR AND EVAR)
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January 24, 2011 - 12:19am — eyestrain
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This is superb.

This is superb.
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January 24, 2011 - 12:26am — Kaoori
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Quad- I just got it! xD

Quad- I just got it! xD
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