Willows // A.K.A "Story" Ch.2

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Emiva dived consistently into the pond not caring that her coat was washed away in the now pungent water. Vessel looked at her impassive, and insipid. Rowan had heard the slashing and frustration in the water. Her ears flicked continuously, as if the splashing and frustrated cries where like lighting strikes. She ran up to Vessel, his face looked hardly worried.

Emiva dug with her hooves then plunged into the water once more.
Rowan felt uneasy and very befuddled. She cocked her head at Vessel “Vessel? What’s going on?”
Emiva splashed out of the water and flung herself to the dirt. She stood, but her knees wobbled. Her face showed of fear, and stresses “It took them! It took them all!”

“What took who,” Rowan coward.

“The wind of water! It sucked them up then it sucked them into the pond! The pond is only so deep! They couldn’t have drowned or I would see there bodies! It took them! It took them,” Emiva cried.

Rowan took two steps back from the deer. They smelled of fear, the whole pond did. Then she smelled something, it was different. It was not the wind, the two deer before her, or the pond, nor the forest. But somewhere else… It was a deep smell, of cold air, smoke, and salty water. No place for a deer.

Then she heard it too! The noise of it! The land spoke of hooves…There
Friends hooves they where traveling. Back home? Back here? There hooves pittered, pattered; But they where no where in the forest where she stood. The willows spoke to here of where they went they where heading to a place where great danger was ahead of them.

Rowan then knew what she must do “We have to find them…Before they are killed.”

Emiva, and Vessel turned and stared at her. Emiva shook her head getting rid of her spasmodic state. She lifted her head high and said “Assemble any deer that’s willing to help Rowan.”

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As the deer trudged threw the sand as they walked on the huge sand dune, the sky shown brilliant colors. The sun was sinking, the opposite way…It rose to the east, and set in the west. They could see the moon arising, the night was coming fast. Jen deer limped terribly and he chewed on some herbs that they found on the way.

Even though his hooves were healing with great pace it didn’t rid of the cramping pain. Quad would normally stop to look back and see if he was catching up.
He was always close behind, but he still had a limp in his step.
As time went by the sand became less thick, and became more smooth and easy to walk. The moon could be seen now, it floated above the surface of the land and awaited them. Mazey looked up to the sky, tired and hungry, she didn’t know if she could take much more.

Until a cry from Wind howler arose “The Sea!”

Everyone’s eyes focused on the blue water. It looked so deep, so dark. They ran to the water with great excitement. The deermuda triangle was out but it seemed as if it was far away. This was bad for there plan was to swim into the sea and maybe a portal would shine through the water where the deermuda triangle shined.
Wind howler gazed at the sea “We must go! We have no choice; if we don’t go into the water…could you imagine what would happen to us on land?”

Quad looked at Jen deer sadly, the poor tired stag had a long cramping trek. But he said nothing and he began to limpishly swim in the water. They all swam till there legs could no longer skim the ocean floor. Quad feeling uneasy looked at Mazy. Then he new that something was wrong “Stop! Everyone stop swimming!”

“What’s wrong Quad,”Taliene she and others turned there head.

“The water! That’s what! Theirs something wrong! Can’t you feel it,” The Quad splashed.

“Quad, where almost there we have to keep going,” Perplex said.

“No, we have to go back,” Quad barked.

While the deer yelled and fussed about the situation, Rutilus stared at the moon. He looked carefully, he saw something. A fin? Of what, the fin came higher and higher from the water. The fin was big and it pointed high to the heavens. Soon the fin covered the whole moon and sunk right back into the water.

Rutilus sutured and then he coughed his words while splashing an swimming with great speed “It’s a fish! It’s the Megladon! Get out of the water! Now!”

The deers asked no questions and began to swim.

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Rowan had gathered a few deer. She counted and called out the name of every deer who was willing to help. Others where to busy, or didn’t care. Rowan was upset by it and found it quit startling. She began to call out and count each deer “Jared, Drium, and Iris. All here and accounted for Emiva.”

Rowan would’ve included Vessels’ name if he wasn’t still standing in the water. He stood in complete shock. He stood there. “I have to thank you all for believing us. That not necessarily me and Vessels’ friends, but everyone’s friends have been sucked into a terrile place, so we believe! The deer who are either to afraid, or to so called busy to help us will soon wonder where have there friends gone and-,” Emiva was cut of by Iris’s cough.

“Emiva, try to calm down. If you think about it we are all afraid, for not only our friends lives but for ours. What is happening to them right now? And what will happen if we are to late,” Iris sniffled.

Emiva huffed an air of sorrow “I’m sorry, but I can’t help but to feel a tad bit angry. What if I never see them again?”

The crowd grew silent. Vessel walked over to the group of deer. His eyes filled with strong courage, and a strong will. “We will find them. We will save them, and we will bring them home alive. We must, because if it happened to them, it could happen again. And again, and again, and again, until it becomes a perennial state,” He stood high and proud.

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Suck at names for story right now, combinding some stuff...
third four chapter may include a drawing....I need more planning...
Call if any names are wrong and stuff Shocked

Sorry..If it's alot to read D:)
Blackhoof's picture

I don't know how the

I don't know how the sunrises normaly...so I guessed
and treid to swich it the best I could Sticking out tongue

is good! even if mazeys name

is good! even if mazeys name isnt correct i still absoulutly love this story! so si-fi realm-ish, i love ^.^
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GDADGADHAD I can't help

GDADGADHAD

I can't help it!!! My fingers really do all the
talking Laughing out loud

Sorry, next time I'll get it right for sure!

crazy me*

Amazing 8D I love the part

Amazing 8D I love the part where they're all arguing in the sea and Rutilus is like "Oh screw this. *looks at moon*" XD 8D Quad is so leaderly 8DDD

MOARRRR <3

-- Dannii <3
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I wanted someone to look at

I wanted someone to look at the moon
and say run peeeps run!!!
At first I thought Quad...But then I always
imagined Rutilus to have a loud roar so...


RUNNNN!!!!...or in there case swim.

Yeah the Quad is kinda of leaderly, but Mazy
is kinda like the govener and she yanks the
people to where she thinks would be the best choice...
which sometimes it can be....BLAH...everyone has a place...some you can't
see yet.

ROFL XDD 8D Cant wait for

ROFL XDD 8D Cant wait for the next chapterrrrrr.

-- Dannii <3
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I JUST FOUND THIS. OMG. MORE

I JUST FOUND THIS. OMG. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! XDDDD



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AWESOME x3 Wonderfully

AWESOME x3
Wonderfully written beb!

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