Tally ^^

Imp's picture
Under the cut (large image)

Tally was my unfortunate tester using shimmys Tutorial Critiques?

Beautiful~ Love the

Beautiful~

Love the background :3
Imp's picture

-sheepish- Thanks. ^^' I

-sheepish- Thanks. ^^'
I still am not happy with this. D8
She feels likes she's not apart of the image. ;^;
PLK217's picture

If you seek critique... Maybe

If you seek critique... Maybe it don't fits for the shading.

Look at the objects in the background. And look how are they shaded (the small grave in the center is nice example). The front side is brighter and the edges with the back are shaded darker. Ergo the light source is somewhere behind you (as observer).

And now look at the thrown shadows you made. They go directly TO the light source.
Kiraki's picture

This is gorgeous ^^ Maybe

This is gorgeous ^^

Maybe try making the shadows closest to her feet a bit darker to make them more noticeable, since still looks a bit floaty? :3 *flails*
Imp's picture

Please! Keep up the

Please! Keep up the critiques. 8D I love them, thank you for contributing them Kiraki & PLK217

Perhaps shift Tally down a

Perhaps shift Tally down a couple inches as well; it would make her seem to fit in more I think (:

The shading as well, as the others said; I still love it :3
Tally's picture

Hurrrr. -insert bombardment

Hurrrr.

-insert bombardment of affection from earlier-

This is quite spooky looking.


This is quite spooky looking. I like it~!
I agree with the idea of possibly creating a different light source for this image. Keep in mind where the light is coming from when you take your screenshots to edit!
Great job, nonetheless!
Apparanza's picture

Oh my goodness, this is

Oh my goodness, this is absolutely stunning @.@ I love her pose, and this whole edit is so well done <333

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