May 24, 2009 - 9:36pm — Topaz100
The deers eyes squinted from the sun
The shining light we had all wished would come
Brightly shone the forests below
All the deers shaded from the suns glow
They ran through the trees and swam in the stream
To cool themselves from the suns beem
And all of them wished that it would go away
But too soon they would wish for it to ever stay
It was sunny in the United Kingdom, wooooo, i actually had to go in the shade for a once, not dodging them because they were too cold. Hope it lasts Txx
cool. my i sugest that you
my i sugest that you start a book type blog like this blog of mine 'have a poem shre it if you share them and express them' this is one of my examples for you to see. you don't have to read the poems on it if you don't want but hopes it can give you an idea.
were you list all, or some poems in a area so people reading don't have to jump from all the blogs, or miss seeing a poem.
only a suggestion though.
and do you want to join the poem club that i made for the forest. if so look at my blog called 'poem club.'
but ether way keep up the good work.
inspirer writing and poems //// if you like dragon eggs you can look at mine. at http://dragcave.net/user/xhunter