The snow has fallen (poem)

quadraptor's picture

On this day
The snow has fallen
The land has been blanketed
I walk through it, leaving my trail
I see the tree limbs hold small mounds
And watch the birds stare back at me there
And for a moment, I thought I caught a glimpse
Thinking I saw you walking in the distance
And I suddenly feel your warmth flow
You left for me a trail of hoofprints
And I follow it willingly to you
The snow has fallen
For us two

Unplugged's picture

This caught my attention.

This caught my attention. Smiling The flow of the poem is great. I don't know the proper term for this but I love how you arranged it visually too.
shamiya's picture

This is sweet. I like the way

This is sweet. I like the way you've laid it out too.
quadraptor's picture

I've been very inspired by

I've been very inspired by the snow while up here visiting my brother and sister-in-law in Georgia. I've been wanting to write something and this is what I came up with.

Thank you Eye
Bayleen's picture

Awww, this is cute :3 I love

Awww, this is cute :3 I love it XD
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eyestrain's picture

Very visual in format and

Very visual in format and tone. Clever work.

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Chickenwhite's picture

Awwww, this one made me smile

Awwww, this one made me smile TwT
It's so sweet! >w<