A Smile in the Night





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The night is young.

Alone in the center of a cluster of purple flowers, a young fawn yawns silently.

Like most his age, he is alone.

He is motherless.

New to the world.

So young, so naive.

Prey.

While the clutches of sleep still hold him tightly,

a false mother settles itself by his side.

A gentle breathing brings the fawn slowly back from his dream.

He rises reluctantly, attempting to locate the source of the sudden warmth by his side.

His sleepy eyes locate his companion, and drink the strange creature in.

A blood red mask stands out from his coat,

which is of the purest white.

Suddenly, the strange deer's head swivels around to face his little friend.

The mask has an odd canine grin, which causes the fawn to shrink away in fear.

The fawn struggles to find the words to greet his strange sleeping partner.

Before the right words can reach the fawn's tongue, his partner stands.

Soon, the fur and skin on the creature's neck begins to peel back, revealing

row
upon
row

of

sharp,
glistening
white
teeth.

"Run."

The fawn heeds his command without hesitation.

He tears through the forest at top speed, not bothering to look back.

But,

He doesn't hear hoofsteps behind him.

Cautiously, he stops and looks over his shoulder.

All he can see in the distance

is
that
damned
smile.

He tears off again, running until his legs are numb, and his lungs burn for air.

He crashes to a stop in the stream below the Crying Idol, where he clings to its base.

His tears mix with the Idol's as he seeks it's protection.

The rest of his night is sleepless,

and in the coming week,

whenever he reluctantly succumbs to sleep,

The smile is always there.

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In the distance,

back in the patch of purple flowers,

the smile turns to a frown.

A dejected voice mumbles from the inside of the mask.

"I just wanted to play tag..."

The white creature falls onto the ground with a sigh.

"They always do this...

Why doesn't anyone want to have fun with me?"


"They just don't understand you yet, Jinny."

"You always say that."

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-giggle- That was such an

-giggle-
That was such an amusing conclusion.

Thanks, that was my

Thanks, that was my intention. Glad to see you thought so. :>

Yes

Yes <333333

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<333333
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oh god XD I love it XD

oh god XD
I love it XD

Haha, thank you!

Haha, thank you! <3
Serenai's picture

This Is So Cute.

This

Is

So

Cute.

<33333

I love your writing. And how... afSGZHd I love it. <33
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<33333

/squish

Thank you very muchly. <33333
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Oh, you've more than earned

Oh, you've more than earned it. I love this. It... Has a nice feel to it that I don't find enough. <3
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<3333
I wanted something different, and I found that I can't really right something dark and scary without some humor. C:

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Fff, dark and scary here...

Fff, dark and scary here... Is way too common. xD I like this a lot better. It's deeper, too. There's something behind it, and it also alludes to common misinterpretations, assumptions. It's more...

Meaningful, in ways. Not to be mean to evil characters; I love them.

But this...

I dunno.

It was just sweet. I have a couple pictures that remind me of this and everything. Big monsters that are actually sweethearts. ♥
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Yes, it can be sometimes.

Yes, it can be sometimes. xD
I really enjoy writing things with meaning behind them, and being misunderstood is a large theme underlying Jin.

I love big monsters who are sweethearts. <333
They make my life complete. :>
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c: I do the same thing.

c: I do the same thing. Symbolism, meaning in everything. And I admire your use.

I wholeheartedly agree.Maybe they even simply make life.
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I try to find meaning and

I try to find meaning and symbolism in just about everything. One of my many pleasures. <3

Sometimes though, I look to deeply into things, and then I miss the point. xD

Oh, so true. <3
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Same here. xD I think the

Same here. xD I think the point is often in itself up for interpretation. > >

But yes, I know all too well what you mean. |D <33

-Dances in a circle.- I wish MSN worked for you. I debate going on my livestream to talk when people don't have IMs, even though I'm not streaming. xD I actually have done it before.

xDD''

<33
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Haha, I think so. xD Someone

Haha, I think so. xD

Someone who feels my pain. xD

I think it is right now! What was your MSN again?
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Oh, I feel it all the time. >

Oh, I feel it all the time. > >

OOOOOOOOOOOO:



I have you added already. > >'

-Gives cookies.-
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Yeah, but it won't show up

Yeah, but it won't show up for some reason. :I
Humf, stupid hotmail. /kick

Is it weird that I was eating cookie dough as I read that? xD
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Fff. It's okay, it works.

Fff. It's okay, it works. xD
-Licks everything.-

Yes and no. It's cool, and a bit odd, but after all that's happened to me, not weird. xD <3
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