as little Serena raised from the the comfort of her mothers warmth and the hollow where she was born, she wandered around but suddenly from the peaceful forest, there was a crack!

CRACK!
and again,
CRACK! as she turned to look round a fur-less being grabbed her! She struggled and let out a huge cry. her mother came as swift as the wind to rescue her,with a strong kick the fur-less being dropped Serena on the ground and ran.
"I told you not to wander,Serena!" as her mother scolded her but there was a sign of relief on her face. they went back to the hollow but from that day on her mother kept a close eye on her, a very close eye.

THE END.

well thats all I could think of!! please tell me it's a good story! someone please tell me how good it is!!!!!