Seed's Poetry Corner: White on White

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A little experimental with grammar here: I wrote it yesterday when I was sitting with Walter in the snow.

White on White

white dove fills sky
in flight
crystalline pristine
as the snow
falling away

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I finished your picture.. I

I finished your picture.. I posted it in the pictures section, but not sure if you missed it. I just wanted to make sure you got it. Smiling
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