I don't normally much care for limericks, but something I saw tonight suggested one to me.
Limerick of a Clone-Dove
I'll tell you of a doe that I love,
whose picto' was shared by a dove.
We'd bow and we'd rear
and roar in its ear,
but it remained hovering above.
(I keep trying new variations on the ending; does this new one work better than "but it would just hover above," "it just kept hovering above," or "it stayed hovering above"? I like "remained" as a verb, but...)
((This has been an unusually limerick-y visit to
Seed's Poetry Corner, your stop for all of your "Poems Written By a Deer" needs.))
Hmm... I do rather like it
That's quite an adorable little limerick.
I actually agree; then
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Nelle Rovine
I am glad to see you have no
No fear; just usually very
I generally prefer free-verse poetry for my personal and class-based work; it's only when I'm writing stuff for Seed that I use forms frequently, though Seed's taste in what forms he likes are very much my own (I love me a pantoum, for example.)
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Nelle Rovine
I likes "but it would just
lol. Well, we can't all have
I tend to prefer reading free-verse. I never really understand most of the forms poetry can take on. I fail in it so never bothered to learn it. But I do like to read it.
You have lost me completely with pantuom, but I do have the internet. :searches: Ah! You know, I have to agree with you. That is a fun little style of poetry.
Indead; it's hilariously
@ocean: thanks ^^
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Nelle Rovine
lol, cheater. :)