Seed's Poetry Corner: Endless Oak

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Something I penned in my absence this fall.


Endless Oak

The Oak divides worlds:
The world of

the leaves browning evening
At the edges
Like smoldering paper.
Green incense drifts down into
The world of

The squirrel gnawing at
the bitter yellow innards
of the never-born.
A deer runs through with a blue mist
And the noise is
The world of

thundering gods, who
watch the oak to tell them messages,who
hang from the oak to teach them spells.
They drink from the water at the roots
On a ground that seems miles below.

An oak makes worlds.
There is space for our forest
Between them all.


((This has been another visit to Seed's Poetry Corner, brought to you today by my final for my poetry workshop.))

This almost comes off as a

This almost comes off as a chant to me, something that one might actually find carved somewhere in the forest by the hoofs of the Gods...

"And the noise is
The world of

thundering gods, who
watch the oak to tell them messages,who
hang from the oak to teach them spells.
They drink from the water at the roots
On a ground that seems miles below.

An oak makes worlds.
There is space for our forest
Between them all."


Very nice ♥

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You still keep amazing me

You still keep amazing me with these. Everytime. Every single time.
You really are talented. <3
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@Kittyo8: Thank you very much

@Kittyo8: Thank you very much for the lovely compliments! The chantlike elements are intentional; I originally wrote this for my final project, a small book of poems-as-spells, and only now repurposed it to share here.

@Rouda: I aim to amaze. Thanks!