Forgive me if you do not understand everything, but I speak French and I am using a translator ...
read the text with music ...
must know that this text does not specifically deer in the forest is a personal story ...
sorry if this text seem sad ....^^
This day was different ...
The atsmosphère is different ..
Something was wrong ... something weighed ...
they were there ..
The birds stopped singing .. the light change to shades of purple to orange haze, the air becomes heavy, gray clouds rolled to the horizon ....
The colors of trees grow dark as if they were afraid of what will pass ...
They were there ...
Two majestic deer was moving slowly, raising clouds of dust with every step. They stood facing each other separated by a meter ... They seemed supernatural, so powerful, graceful, with a mixed force of spirituality that emanates from them ...
Both were the same size, but have own physical appearance.
One was red as fire and blood and the other is black as darkness and night ..
Their fur is silky and shiny.
The horns of red deer resembles that of an antelope who stood proudly to the sky ...
the black deer, had a skull lying on its head, where two teeth coming out of the upper jaw
his neck is a mane of a lion loose in the wind and his muscular legs with long claws that replace feets ...
The two deer are standing immobilent as if they explore the depths of the soul of his rival ...
time is stopped, an eerie silence reigns in the forest ....
The orange light is now focused around them in a circle while the surrounding area is plunged into darkness ...
when suddenly, the red deer begin his crie ... His voice resounds throughout the forest .. the black deer answers to the cries, his voice is deep breath ...
they flow over. their slap hooves, their echoes resound on every trunks of trees .. One might think that the forest weeps ..
The horns break ... The masks fall .. their fur in the bites turned into dark red ...
red deer plant his long horns in the belly of his rival, but this one had time to bite the jugular ..
Both deer collapse heavily to the ground ... opposite faces .. They are covered with mud and blood ... their end is near .. they roam ...
"I'm the one who pursues and kill you" said the black deer
"I'm the one that runs in your veins," said the red deer
weakens their breath and sometimes doing a rattle ...
"I'm the one who gives you your dreams," said the black stag
"I am who enlighten the night," said the red deer
their heart slows gradually they look at few second .
Waw... oO C'est vraiment beau O_O' C'est vachement bien écrit et on ressent bien les émotions. En tout cas, pour moi ça s'est passé comme ça. Et avec la musique, les impressions ressortent très bien. Bref, je me comprend xD
Je me suis vraiment imaginé les images dans la tête et j'étais plongée dans le récit ^^ Tu écris vraiment bien, tu devrais faire plus de textes x'D
Oooh! That last sentence was
That last sentence was especially good. ^^
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Waw... oO C'est vraiment beau
Je me suis vraiment imaginé les images dans la tête et j'étais plongée dans le récit ^^ Tu écris vraiment bien, tu devrais faire plus de textes x'D
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merci sa me touche beaucoup
C'est sincère
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Oh, je viend de relire !
Les cornes de gazelle, la crinière du lion, tout s'accorde...
En le relisant, j'ai pensé à deux parties de Siryah combattant pour ne former finalement plus qu'un seul être et qu'une seule "partie"...
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Solaya a tout compris
=D Pour une fois
http://endlessforest.org/community/deer-tef-updated
x3
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This is, EPIC!!! * Track * -
* Track * - TO come back and read it again, and again and...again.
Just.. Wow
thank you very much