I've been rattling this idea in my head for a while, and wanted to combine some ideas from previous stories into a new one.
The story would be a remake of my idea of Quad transforming into the
Supreme Talux (Thanks again to Terabetha for the artwork), and now unable to control himself, he creates havoc in the Endless Forest. It is up to the Endless Forest deer and a few unlikely heroes to come up with a plan to subdue the raging Supreme Talux.
I will most likely need volunteers for the story, but I will get to those when I have everything decided. Also there will be 7 chapters to the story, each inspired by 7 songs in which the title of each chapter is named after. I also will have a surprise ending
I need to decide if Noctuis will be in owl or boar form too. The last story I wrote with him, he had changed to boar form, but who knows...I know you guys kind of like him as an owl, so I may just stick with owl.
Anyway, I did want to share a few tidbits of the story. These are tentative and may not appear exactly in the story as I write them, but it will express a few parts of the story. Enjoy
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"Oh my Twin Gods, the prophecy! The comet has come! We are doomed! Doomed!!", the blind seer was crying. Pema ran to her side, holding Hex as she continued to stare at the sky, and continued to cry out,
"It's the end of the world! The comet has come! We are doomed!!" In the sky was a bright blue comet, streaking slowly and letting off a blue glow in the place.
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"Quad! It's Zephyr, shes--", someone said, and Quad ran in the direction they came from. He slid to a halt, staring and couldn't believe what he was seeing.
There, laying by the Pond, was Zephyr. She was not moving, not breathing...
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"You want revenge for the death of your daughter, yes?", the white infection spoke,
"You want to destroy Iugulare?"
Quad, shivering and grunting in anger, stared Noctuis in the eye,
"If she was the cause of this...I'll kill her!"
"Good, then...you will want this!", and with the words he spoke, Noctuis struck a blue radioactive crystal into Quad's forehead. It made him cry out in pain and stumble back, and almost immediately the transformation took form. He became bigger, his wings expanded, white feathers covering him as his body changed...
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"He just leveled an entire section of the First Forest...", one of the deer spoke as they looked out on what was now a disaster zone. The trees were knocked down and littered the area, and all around were deer who were walking around, shocked to see the damage to the Forest.
Even the Twin Gods were there, and they looked to one another. "Michael...we can't...we can't let this continue...", Auriea spoke.
Michael sighed, "Then we will use the relic. He is no longer our champion. Quad will have to die."
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Iugulare looked to her friends, and with a sigh, she spoke to them.
"I'm leaving, Nekumbra. There's nothing left for me here."
Anirapio's eye twitched, as she stepped forward,
"You can't leave us...you can't leave me here! I must go back to my home!"
"I'll come back for you, Ani...but right now, I can't be here...", the stoat replied, and looked to the stars,
"I'll...I'll find my place to rule somewhere else out there..."
I may give Noctuis a new form
If you need any characters,
Thanks Zerg, I'll definitely
Err...what would you guys think about Noctuis being an arctic/albino/white fox? XD
So far I do like Noctus as an
Yeah that's a good point, and
Thanks for the input.