Prance about the skies

Anzel's picture
Soft twitters all aflutter
Bouncing off the rockside, scatter
Tapping hooves, clicking like fire
Silvern eyes with playless desires

Burning, scorching woodless trails
Dusty sheddings wafting, flails
Stature high of grass and stone
The deer is tall, the deer is grown

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Off the top of my head.

Yeah, today should be the day my fawn turns into a stag/doe, but...nothing seems to be happening.

Oh well :/

It's the one thing I'm looking forward to that I know of when it will happen XD;

Because I don't know when I'll be able to communicate with other deer :/ If I'll ever be able to.
Blackfeathr's picture

That poem is beautiful. You

That poem is beautiful.
You are very talented!


I'm really sorry about this unfortunate glitch... GoldenWinged would have loved to meet you! I hope they fix this soon. :/
Anzel's picture

I attribute my 'talent' to

I attribute my 'talent' to knowing pretty words. *evil grin* ^^; But thanks, heh.

If I find your deer in the forest by chance, I'll pretend-play XD;...running circles around you and stuff :3
Kelvana's picture

Anyone can know pretty

Anyone can know pretty words, it's putting them together well that makes something. It's a wonderful poem. I especially love the last two lines of the final stanza, they would make a nice signature.

Also I must commend you for hanging in there despite the glitches, hope everything gets sorted out for you soon.
Anzel's picture

Thanks, I hope so, too...I

Thanks, I hope so, too...I log on once a day to find out if I've grown up and if I can see anyone, heh Sticking out tongue

One day, world! I SHALL FIND YE!