July 5, 2008 - 9:39pm — Anzel
Alright...here's my try at a poem about Ephra's deer, Twenty-One...
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--- Twenty-One reasons to fly ---
Before the fawn
Before the mate
The stags ran high and low
For when the male
Nipped hoof and tail
There was no prize to show
And then one day
There came a fae
A doe, of softest pelt
No need for quarrel
Amongst the laurel
Of anger, she never felt
She drove them mad;
Though she was glad,
She was not welcome here
For stags, confused
Were not amused
That a doe had come so near
But still, she nuzzled,
Sweet and kind
And befriended some of the others
And when the fawns
Felt lost, alone,
She stood high as the Mother
And slowly did
The males give way
To let her be, for now
For others stepped
Into the sun
As does, so calm and proud
Her gentle ways
Her kindest heart
Let stags before her know
That there were
Twenty-One good reasons
For to be a doe
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Rhyming =/= My best attribute.
I tried, heh. You can probably tell where I struggled for words :3
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE.
And once again, so true!
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Thank you :3 It's nice to
It's nice to know someone likes reading my...brain spews. (since i normally just type these poems up as the ideas spew from my head, and i fix it up afterwards)
Hehe, I love this! I think
This is so pretty! You are a