Make it through the fall~Natali~with me

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Thanks for the edit Sybil!!

Your...a bird??...
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Went to find Leviathann when she caught her scent,surprised when she found a levibird.
Sat with her,Harley,and Jorogumo.Caught another familiar scent,it was Astrid? followed it.Found a stag but not Astrid.Confused,went to sleep.
Name~Natali,
Age~Young doe,immortal
Gender~Female,doe
Orientation~Straight
Size~#3
Set~Mini spell,real deer antlers,real deer pelt (Light),real deer mask
Personality~Kind,caring,understanding,dramatic,slight
attention disorder,loveable,overreacting
Appearance~Light blue eyes and light brown fur.A few fawn spots still on her back.Fluffy tail and neck with a long pink scar.Neck is the most furry part of her body.Big huge real deer antlers.
A silver chain with a ruby heart-shaped pendant is worn on her neck,given by her mate.
Magic~Got healing powers from her deceased mother,can heal minor injuries.Moving objects takes lots of energy,but she is able to.
Family~LightBringer mate,loved and adored,Albion father,trusted
Friends~Rumen,Anjali,Shikatale,Big Bunny,
Curious of~Deimos,6,Tandem





FAN ART!<3
From MidnightRose
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From WolfHeart88
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~Diary~
Everyone I was hopping around with had a mate or loved one with them...WHERE IS MY LIGHT??
I haven't seen him since forever...I hope he's alright...
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(Thanks Butterbrot!!)




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Hmmm that sounds

Hmmm that sounds interesting...is there a story for it? Human world...what do you think Natali would look like human? Probably not related just curious.
-Tabby
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Good question,she would have

Good question,she would have soft straight hair,just lower than her shoulders and of course light blue eyes and she would be short lol and that's it I think =] Ohh wait and her skin would be lighter color of her fur

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Very nice! Hehehehe sorry its

Very nice! Hehehehe sorry its meh comics. They made me laugh. I've been working on my manga. Maybe I could draw her human form? If you want?
-Tabby
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Of course!Gift art is always

Of course!Gift art is always welcome =] *wonders what Natali as human would look like*


-Random-
Natali looks like me! Shocked
Only I have brown eyes )=

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Oh? >.< heh that's

Oh? >.< heh that's interesting. Well I'll get started k?
-Tabby
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Okay,thanks =)

Okay,thanks =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
AngelWings's picture

How old is Natali? Needed

How old is Natali?

Needed for reasons...curious? XD
-Tabby
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Hmm...let's see she's a young

Hmm...let's see she's a young adult here....about 19-20 is my guess =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Okey doke. Reasons unknown to

Okey doke. Reasons unknown to you! Jm one of them is a surprise but I also need to know for human manga. XD
-Tabby
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A mystery?-______-.....I will

A mystery?-______-.....I will find it out O.ooooo
*jking*
Okay =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Light footfalls made a soft

Light footfalls made a soft rustle in the grass as the young stag approached the little antlered doe.
He stopped a good distance from her, not wanting to intrude on her space—not after yesterday.

"Hello?" he called out tentatively, ears flicking. Silly me, he thought: I don't even know her name. But he hoped to remedy that—and much more—soon enough. It was why he had come.

Forgot to track. /headdesk

Forgot to track. /headdesk
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Her ears slid back and she

Her ears slid back and she quickly bowed.It's the stag from yesterday!I MUST say I am sorry.I was so rude... "Hello sir...Listen I am terribly sorry for yesterday.I don't really know personal space stuff and..I'm really sorry." She hung her head,ashamed at running away instead of saying sorry.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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He tilted his head slightly,

He tilted his head slightly, surprised at the doe's apologies, and then quickly walked forward to close the space between them.
"There's no need to be sorry." He was confused about what had happened the other day, and his need to make amends and apologize had compelled him to find the doe he had frightened—he hadn't expected her to be the one apologizing to him.

His green eyes were concerned as they flickered over the doe's body, searching for signs of injury.
"Did I...Did I hurt you yesterday?"

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Quickly the doe tried to hide

Quickly the doe tried to hide the hoof-like bruise on her flank.Not really...but it's okay nothing but a small bruise that will heal up in no time!" She smiled beneath her mask.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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He worriedly watched the

He worriedly watched the little deer shift as though she were trying to hide something.
"Are you certain?" Anjali's expression was difficult to read beneath his mask, but his voice betrayed his doubt. His ears fell limp with shame against the sides of his head: he had never wanted to harm anyone. Hadn't he made it his purpose to help and heal, not to hurt?

"Even it was just a bruise, I'm the one who needs to apologize." He bent down over one foreleg, and his bow was long, deep, and sincere. "After all, you did me no harm, miss...? Oh - forgive me, I never asked your name."

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She nuzzled him gently and

She nuzzled him gently and spoke softly and warmly."Aw you don't need to apologize..."She said with a slight blush.My name is Natali.What is your name sir?"

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Anjali blinked, startled by

Anjali blinked, startled by her nuzzle. Then a smile softened the features of his face; his ears lifted again, pricking up in an attentive, friendly manner.
"Natali."
He repeated her name aloud, for there was a lovely ring to it. "I'm Anjali. And please, don't call me sir," he added with a slight gentle laugh, suddenly embarrassed at the formality of the title.
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Natali giggled and beamed at

Natali giggled and beamed at him.Okay Mr.Anjali,I will not call you sir. She bowed respectfully at him.So your not upset that I invaded your personal space?She said gently and a worried expression crossed her face.She never would want to hurt anyone mentally...

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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OMG MY PRETEST IS ONLY 78

OMG MY PRETEST IS ONLY 78 PROBLEMS AND THEY'RE EASY!!! if this keeps being awesome I'll be done by today! *happy dance* wanna rp cuz I'm bored? Can i start?
-Tabby
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Lucky I still haven't even

Lucky I still haven't even done homework ;D ....I'm really lazy...and okay!

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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YAY! me

YAY! me start....

LightBringer walked through the forest for the first time in weeks. He'd been...doing something? He couldn't even remember. Maybe Light had been dreaming. A familiar scent hit hs nose, a smell of...Natali! he found her by a willow tree, deep in thougt.
-Tabby
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The doe heard hoofsteps

The doe heard hoofsteps coming towards her and turned her head.She jumped up and ran towards Lightrbinger.Light!I haven't seen you in WEEKS!Where have you been??..Ah that doesn't matter your here now!She reached up and gave him a quick kiss on his chin,the highest place in his face she could reach.She bounced around him overjoyed.Oh LightBringer!Come here you big lump of fluff!!Then she stepped back and suddenly ran towards him,just when she was going to crash into him she jumped and landed on his back.Happily she cuddled his neck and sank her head into his neck fur.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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He smiled, cocking his head

He smiled, cocking his head slightly to the left. "You don't have to call me Mr., either. Just Anjali will do." He dipped his head, acknowledging her graceful bow. "And no, I'm not upset," he assured her warmly. "I enjoyed your company very much." Indeed, he thought highly of the little doe's outgoing and playful nature - and he would be sure to take more care if they played together again.
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@Anjali Okay Angali Smiling

@Anjali
Okay Angali Smiling while she said that,Why thank you!You were very fun too.We should play more often Anjali.With that and a respectful bow and nuzzle she said a polite,Goodbyee!,then ran off to play with some fawns.

Heh I enjoyed our little RP there,hope to see your character in forest again and hopefully it'll be better =D

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Yes, hopefully. Thank you

Yes, hopefully. Smiling Thank you for giving Anjali a chance to clear things up a bit. <3
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Hehe he's all like OMG! XD

Hehe he's all like OMG! XD and sorry that unit was HARD! But I'm done now and my hw tomorrow won't take very long. I wish they wouldn't give homework for three day weekends!

LightBringer blushed a purplish color. He had left his mask with Zoro because she wanted to try it on. "Well, I'm actually not sure where I've been. It felt like a mist everywhere...but I'm really glad to see you again!" He kissed her forehead, not sure wether to do anything else. Light laid down, in case she wanted off. He felt a lot less awkward now. Maybe that had been the reason for his misty dream...
-Tabby
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Lol Natali is all like:YOUR

Lol Natali is all like:YOUR HERE!!WERE YOU BEEN LET ME LOVEEEEEE
Aw that sucks )= Yea school is like a huge black hole that sucks up all of your time D=


She didn't see him blush from his back but then suddenly felt all embarrassed by her outburst of joy.She nuzzled his fluff then got off his back.A mist?..That's strange.But your BACK!It's been so long!Oh gods so much has happened...Her voice trailed off and her eyes filled with tears.She buried her face in his fur to try and calm herself.Li-light!H-he came..BACK!HE CAME BACK...

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Lol yeah I think I'm gonna

Lol yeah I think I'm gonna make my mom postpone my current events report until Sunday when the paper comes.

"Who came Natali? Is he evil?" he asked urgently. He wished his gift would come in handy at this moment. His multicolored eyes closed for a moment.
-Tabby
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KK =] At first the small doe

KK =]

At first the small doe didn't reply,her eyes red and her face wet with tears.Finally she spoke in a quiet and raspy voice,My...father.Yes,he is evil.At least to me he is..Her head hung and she pressed her face into his chest.You don't have to worry about him...I have already told him to stay away.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Light almost started crying

Light almost started crying himself, seeing her so worried and sad. "What did he do to you to make you hate him so?" I wonder if my father will be nice...and this probably isn't a good time for my plan A...not until this is resolved. he thought to himself. Snuggling Natali closer into his fluffy winter coat, he said, "What does this deer look like?"
-Tabby
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She slunk to the ground,her

She slunk to the ground,her ribbon that held her mask on her face loose.He...he left me when I was a newborn fawn.Him and my mother.I didn't have parents and..Oh Light!It was horrible...No more tears were coming from her eyes,she had cried enough.Get a hold of yourself Natali!It's okay...he isn't here now....not with you anyway. Well...he is all white,my antlers,my eye color,and a skull mask.But promise me you won't go running after him okay?He's to strong...

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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"Oh all right, I won't. I...I

"Oh all right, I won't. I...I need to tell you something, and ask. I just found my true father, and he's very evil. My mother knew a...a prophecy. I must find three other Deer of Light to help me defeat him. I am wondering if you are one. Can I test?"

Just tell me if you don't want dragged into my action-packed story. Just say so and I'll edit!
-Tabby
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Ohh acutally this does sound

Ohh acutally this does sound interesting =) Please,continue with this plot =D


Alright,and stay safe okay? Her ears flickered up and she payed much attention to what he was going to say which sounded important.A prophecy?.....Me??Hm I don't think I could possibly be as special as these Deer of Light sound..but okay you may test. She forced a smile at him,almost sure it wouldn't work and of course she wouldn't be a Deer of Light.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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So U want in? Light fished

So U want in?

Light fished the crystal out of his fur, careful to hide the ___ still. (a surprise for the story) It dangled near her head and began to glow brighter. "I can't believe it. It was this easy to find one?" he murmured. "I'm finished. You...you are one of Them." he said.
-Tabby
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Of course =) She stared at

Of course =)

She stared at the crystal and its bright glow.This surely meant she wasn't a Deer of Light.She was shocked when she heard him say she was one of Them!ME?But..there's nothing special about me...How could that be?....Who are these Deer of Light anyway?

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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"Well, all Yar(affectionate

"Well, all Yar(affectionate nickname for mom) said was that they were the chosen ones. They would help me through the Quest. My father will infect everyone if we don't stop him. And you are special, and you can help..." he stared at a dead piece of ground shaped like a hoof. "that's what he does to nature..." his voice quavered. "And that's what he'll do to other deer..." he said.
-Tabby
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She listened patiently and

She listened patiently and was horrorfied such a deer could do that.Espically if its child was such a sweetheart!Don't worry,I'm with you.I'll guide you and help you on your quest okay?Trust me I know how difficult dad's can be.She nuzzled him gently and kissed his cheek.It'll be alright...okay?I'm here and I won't leave until this problem is solved.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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He blushed again, and decided

He blushed again, and decided to use some courage. He kissed her cheek back and said, "I wouldn't want anybody else to accompany me. I know you are trustworthy."

Short post had an idea.
-Tabby
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She blushed deeply and then

She blushed deeply and then she sucked in a lot of breath and found the courage to tell him what she thought of him.Light?....Well ugh...ummm....Don't know how to say this.....but....I...I kind of....have a crush on you?... She regretted saying that and instantly predictated he would explain he had no feelings for her.Of course who would love her?Probably no stag would ever love her.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Lights face redenned

Lights face redenned profucely, and he replied slowly at first. "Oh...well erm...." You can do it...tell her... I've had a really big crush on you for...I don't evn remember how long. I didn't tell you because I'm really shy.... He stared into her blue eyes, and got lost in the blue.
-Tabby
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Her ears perked up,WHAT?But

Her ears perked up,WHAT?But how could he like me?I don't even have proper parents!.....Is it true he likes me?.... ...Really?You like me back??Wow... Suddenly she leaped onto his back again,overwhelmed with joy.She nibbled his ears playfully and got lost in his furry neck.Oh LightBringer...you really have brought light into my life. She snuggled with his neck and lay there,warm and comfortable.

Aww cute =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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I need to draw a picture now

I need to draw a picture now heh! XD lol so cute!

She felt a whomp on his back and looked over to see Natali on his back again. "Yeah...I was always worried YOU didn't like ME back..." He laughed and groomed her head for a little bit.
-Tabby
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She giggled,her little laugh

She giggled,her little laugh sounding joyful and full of spirit.Not liking you back?But your such a sweetheart!Who wouldn't like you back? She groomed the top of his head and listened to the birds singing,happily she played with his ears.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Hand y u no draw my mind

Hand y u no draw my mind picture?

"Heh well I'm kind of paranoid..." he said shyly, but happily.
-Tabby
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here it is. its so ugly but I

here it is. its so ugly but I tried...
-Tabby
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Oh I sometimes feel like that

Oh I sometimes feel like that I'm all like:D= and my drawing look like this:>=O
But that drawing really is so cute!I love her tail it looks sooo fluffy and soft =D Her expression is all dreamy and like:I'm never getting off your back.Now love me.
Lol jkjkjk =]
They make such a cute couple <3

She smiled and gently got off his back and snuggled close to him.Brrr...the night sure is cold...Better snuggle to keep warm.She huddled as close as she could to his fur and looked into his eyes and sighed dreamily.

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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Lol thanks! He smiled as his

Lol thanks!

He smiled as his thick fur floofed out to keep Natali warm as the night wore on. Light laid his head down and watched the stars. One shot across the sky, and he made his wish.
-Tabby
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She opened her eyes and

She opened her eyes and stared at the night sky,a star shooting across the sky made her smile and she whispered,I wish all our time together will be like this... And dreaming of happy things she went to sleep,safe,warm,and loved.


=D *blows nose* OMG THEY HAVE HAPPY ENDING!!...Or begining or whatever =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
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*wipes tears away* I KNOW!

*wipes tears away* I KNOW! Next chapter I'm writing will include Natali...hopefully more deer.

"So do I Natali...so do I..." he fell asleep and dreamed of his dreams all night. My wish already came true he thought as he fell asleep.

THE END
-Tabby