My boken heart needs mending.....-Jeremy-

BouncyDeer1's picture
Jeremy is dying,this is the story of the cause.
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-Events:...-Health:Mental ??% Physical ??%-

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"Hello...my name?It's Jeremy.How I look like?I have what is called the Orca pelt and Orca mask and the Key antlers.My height is#15 on here and a few feet taller My age?I am a young buck.How I am?Well I guess I'm playful,loyal,very steadfast,protective,somewhat possessive,and a little mature at times.
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-Relationships
-Reika:Mate,beloved-Zoro:Friend,admires-Allard:Friend,cuddle buddy-
(If your deer knows him or you want him/her to be added please tell me,thanks)
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My past you want to know?...Well first when I was born the name my mother gave me was Rascal because of my behavior.She told me that bad deer had killed my dad,but when I grew up I met him.He didn't die,my mother was I think protecting me from something.That something killed her.I then gave myself the name Jeremy for a fresh start.That's it really...
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I like...
Playing,drama,friends,birds,fights and spars,and cute fawns


I don't like....
Death,illness,depression,anything gloomy,and the dark

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Strength*****
Pain tolerance*****
Stamina*****
Will*****
Defense*****
Technique*****
Speed*****
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ShikaTale's picture

Reika closed her eyes and

Reika closed her eyes and softly said "I love you too, Rascal" and gave him a nuzzle and a kiss on his cheek.

EPIC drama bomb!!!
AHA 5TH PAGE IS MINE!
BouncyDeer1's picture

Lol NOO I CALL NEXT PAGE! =D

Lol NOO I CALL NEXT PAGE! =D


Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Gruffen's picture

Bouncy don't worry Zoro is

Bouncy don't worry Zoro is fine.

"No Gruffen! No I'm not fine!" Oh my gosh why did I just say that in front of everybody. Look happy for Rascal and Reika..."
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
ShikaTale's picture

Im so bored!! why'd my mom

Im so bored!! why'd my mom have to put a stupid time limit on my computer! its not school just YET.

Anyways what set would best fit Reika??
Gruffen's picture

Maybe real deer mask, that

Maybe real deer mask, that great argus pelt and the doe antlers?
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
BouncyDeer1's picture

Hmm yea I think the set

Hmm yea I think the set Gruffen said would suit her fine =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

Alright could someone help

Alright could someone help her get them tomorrow? She also needs a mini spell

BouncyDeer1's picture

Kk but it needs to be after

Kk but it needs to be after school though

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

When Rascal says Current

When Rascal says
Current thoughts-"Reika...I HAVE A MIGHTY NEED!To do you in your mini cute ass!""

Reika says this:
;A; O_O" *runs away*
BouncyDeer1's picture

LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL =D

*rascal does creepy smile and runs after* O.o

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Bylah's picture

I have tried very, very hard

I have tried very, very hard not to say anything about this deer. I've tried to look the other way about what I personally find a ridiculously offensive deer. But when I read this:

Current thoughts-"Reika your so fine...can I do you in the butt???Pretty please?" "BURD!!!!!"

I decided that I could not stand idly by and do nothing.

A few things:

1. You're eleven. Do you even know what that means? To 'do someone in the butt'?
2. If not, then chances are, you shouldn't be using it.
3. If so, the character you're referring to is a puppy.

Yes, I understand this is a game, but I, for one, think that's just sick.

Furthermore: I personally think that while there are some mature themes on this site - and I myself have written stories with mature themes? I think you're depiction of this character is not only over the top, but ridiculously offensive, sexist, and chauvinistic. If you're old enough to have your character act like an absolute horn dog, then you're old enough to know what all three of those words mean.

It also means you're adult enough(or so you think) to take criticism of this nature in an adult fashion.

I can't make you stop playing your character - I'm not even going to ask you to do so. But I do want you to think about some of the things you have your character say and do, and how other people - older, more mature people - might interpret those things.


Xemi's picture

^ You know I gotta admit, I

^ You know I gotta admit, I agree..

More than one of my characters is "perverted" or has a questionable sense of humor but they don't come across as offensive like Rascal does. He's so.. disturbingly blunt. I've wanted to say something for a while too but I don't know what TO say..

I also agree.. you're too young to be thinking about sex like this. I think it'd be okay to have a stag that is flirty and likes does a lot but this is way too sexual and blatant for someone your age. My characters don't even get near as blunt as Rascal does.

I know for a fact it's the #1 reason almost every deer (or at least in my group of friends) doesn't like him. They find him "gross", "nasty," "repulsive" and don't want to be near a creepy pervert like him. .___. He has zero regard for their personal space too.. it's just wrong.
ShikaTale's picture

^ ^ I agree too, Rascal has

^
^

I agree too, Rascal has gotten overboard.
Maybe tone down all the pervyness?
I mean, I don't think Reika wants..Rascal to uhm.. ._.

I don't think you guys are sounding mean here, just letting Bouncydeer to know and for her to be aware

EDIT: Also just because were 11 doesn't mean we don't know about all that stuff. I knew all about those things by time I was 9 :/. Kids these days are thinking way too many pervy thoughts, especially at my school; you can't say 1 sentence without someone saying something about it.
Xemi's picture

Let's just say the thought of

Let's just say the thought of 11 year olds having sex is utterly disgusting.
And it's not knowing about it, it's the *thinking* about it part. Honestly.. yeah, kids get pervy in high school but anytime before that is just so.. sick. It's gross to think about what humanity's coming to these days..
ShikaTale's picture

Hm the thoughts are

Hm the thoughts are disturbing, I'm not like all the immature kids in my school though.
The only reason why they know n stuff I guess because all the years of watching "Family guy" and "Southpark" etc. Also since kids are starting well puberty faster now and days they taught us about those things in class.
I understand how you feel, they also have a problem with calling things and other people "gay" just for humor. They don't understand how offensive it is.
Xemi's picture

My generation's the same

My generation's the same way.. just later on.
The same things are happening, just faster now.

The day I hear generic three years olds running around telling people to "fuck off" is the day I shoot myself..
... Maybe them first.
ShikaTale's picture

Thats what my baby brother

Thats what my baby brother says already..
x_x
Xemi's picture

He's gonna get beat up at

He's gonna get beat up at school so bad if he keeps that up. ono
BouncyDeer1's picture

I knew something like this

I knew something like this was bound to happen one day...but I'll make sure Rascal isn't all like he is right now if other players find him offensive.Also I didn't intend to make burd as a offensive way...if it even is it's just Rascal likes little birds and stuff and he was talking about Tandem..

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Xemi's picture

Oh, nah.. there was nothing

Oh, nah.. there was nothing wrong with "burd". I say it all the time.. it's got nothing to do with being perverted, I think she just copied all of his thoughts at the time xD
BouncyDeer1's picture

Oh ok lol :]

Oh ok lol :]

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Gruffen's picture

This one kid at my school is

This one kid at my school is such a pervert it's not even funny. And he's my age... He's a child!! It's just sad. I used to be clean and ignorant, bit now I know that and I blame him.
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
BouncyDeer1's picture

Oh that sucks...tell him to

Oh that sucks...tell him to back off and tell your teacher if your getting really annoyed at him.That's basically what I do when the guys that sit next to me start throwing spitballs and stuff -.-

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

The problem of what I have is

The problem of what I have is name calling and getting laughed and made fun of... I am highly emotional to it.
At my old school I was known as the "animal freak"
One time I slipped in the mud because I was trying to get a soccar ball but yet I slipped and was laughed at by the whole class, it was my first year at that school too, and I cried ;A;
I also get made fun of because kids make fun of me for loving wolves.. and even for drawing them.
Kids were all like "ooh your gonna marry a wolf, a lesbian one too" and all I was doing was trying to protect a friend because they made fun of her mom: which she dosn't have contact with her anymore.
Also at old apartments I lived at I was only 8 and I was thrown and beat up by possibly 13 year olds.

Sorry If I'm complaining too much about my life, I'll stop wasting the page now
BouncyDeer1's picture

That's bullying..also lots of

That's bullying..also lots of kids love wolves.Even some adults too and a lesbian one??I don't even think there's even a lesbian wolf....I have never been beaten up..mostly because I try to not make enemies.There's always some girl or guy looking for trouble though but I just ignore them.If they get REALLY bad and mean try putting your chin up and just walk away or tell your parents or teacher.That's just my advice though it's not really good advice since I don't really know how to take care of that stuff but don't let those kids hurt you.Their probably jealous of your drawing skillzz and who beats up a 8 year old anyway???Wish you good luck with those guys.(OMG this is soo long I didn't even try to make it this long it's like a short story or something O.o)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

Yes I know, some of my

Yes I know, some of my hero/role models are wolf-artists and they are the ones who inspire me<3
I actually do tell teachers but they barely do anything .
Another thing is that kids call me a 'stalker' well because theres a boy I really like and we walk the same route home, I don't stalk him I walk WITH him because unlike stalkers he likes to talk to me when hes in a good mood and tell jokes. He wouldnt make eye contact if it were a stalker. People need to read a book and learn FACTS about those things, and omg. We actually LEARNED about this so I was talking about one of the most common fears; arachnephobia(bad spelling sorry) and the kids didn't know what it was when we just learned about it a couple months ago!! And they complained because I didn't know what a "smarticle" was? Like I guess its from a show or something, but wtf?
Yeah I TRIED to run away from the older kids but one of them kept pulling my leg and throwing me.

I would also get treated like crap from my cousins and my aunt barely did anything. AND there boy cousins and one is 15 and they would hit me or shoot me with a BB gun for a stupid reason like having the TV volume on 8!! 8! not like it was 20!?!?
BouncyDeer1's picture

Ah well you know..haters will

Ah well you know..haters will always hate no matter what )= Don't let them get to you.If anyone if abusing you then do take action and actually tell them to stop and if they try to hold you back or something then just scream =) That's what I would do again I don't really know how to solve these problems very much -.-

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
quadraptor's picture

Shika - I was bullied in

Shika -

I was bullied in elementary school as well for being obsessed with velociraptors. I will admit I got angry and screamed at people often, but it didn't get anywhere. In fact, it made me look more 'weird' and so on. I used to play a violent video game back then and people were afraid I was going to bring a gun to my school and shoot up the place.

Anyway, over time, I figured out that instead of getting upset over it, I accepted the fact that they could call me names, but I'm not what they call me. Only I can decide that. It's like someone can tell me that I have black hair, but I know my hair is dirty blonde, so why fret over it?

I understand words can be hurtful, but honestly...these people that point their fingers and make fun of you, they're really saying "I have a problem myself but I'm too proud to admit it so I'm going to make fun of someone else." The person pointing the finger is generally the person who is having a problem with their life.

Trust me, when you get older, none of this will really matter, and you will be a better person than those people who made fun of you. And the reason why is that they're going to get picked on sometime in their life and they won't know what to do. But you'll be prepared and you'll know just to blow it off.
ShikaTale's picture

@quad Alright, I'll take some

@quad
Alright, I'll take some time to think on that.
Also I wanna thank you for having any concerns for me<3

It's like all the 'real' friends I have are people who are nice like you on sites like this.
It is the people like you who are nice to me and make me want to continue on trying to have a good life.
<3

I don't like to play outside too much, and for that my friend calls me a lazy bum, I'm not gonna take her crap anymore, not from her brother either. I am on the computer all the time is because I wanna talk to my "real" friends

I really like dinosaurs too, and my favorite was the Archaeopteryx, but the fact that I'm a girl to like dinosaurs people call me even "weirder" I don't care anyways I'm happy that I know a lot about animals, I could be a zoologist. Unlike them not paying attention in school but only care about drama and such, they won't do well in college will they?
BouncyDeer1's picture

No they won't =) Just wait

No they won't =) Just wait when your all driving in your fancy car and they are all on bikes and being addicts.Hope I kind of helped..probably not -.-...:]

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Gruffen's picture

hehe. some of these kids are

hehe. some of these kids are such perverts at my school. you cant say ANYTHING without them adding an inappropraite twist to it
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
BouncyDeer1's picture

Oh just ignore them they

Oh just ignore them they probably don't even know what those words mean or anything -.-

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
BouncyDeer1's picture

Well I'm thinking of changing

Well I'm thinking of changing Rascal's personality and yea..so he's going to be humorous and stuuff =D(Oh can you like suddenly change his personality since I don't really know how to keep him flirty yet not too flirty?Also I had this kind of personality set up for him but then I thought what if he was flirty and everything...)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Xemi's picture

Hmmm.. maybe Rascal had a

Hmmm.. maybe Rascal had a realization that he was being too much of a flirt maybe? If he's really in love with someone then usually you will stay devoted to the person you love.. so maybe him realizing he loves Reika makes him feel like he doesn't really have to be that flirty with other deer now? I dunno xD I'm rambling.
BouncyDeer1's picture

Ohh that's a good idea =]

Ohh that's a good idea =] Thanks Xemi I'll use it =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

I found out my mom's password

I found out my mom's password *evil grin*
I am now online again >:]
ShikaTale's picture

Maybe as he gets a older he

Maybe as he gets a older he becomes more mature? Just throwing the idea
BouncyDeer1's picture

Hm maybe but I like him

Hm maybe but I like him immature but I'll work that in too =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D

"I beg your pardon! But sir,

"I beg your pardon! But sir, I didn't mean any harm. I didn't noticed her in the shadows until it was kinda late. And the spell, I kinda got a bit spooked over the large crowd. :/"

Ah crap! Man sorry about that...sorry if Juniper happened to scare Reika a mite too much. My game was expierencing some lag when I went near the pond so it was hard to control the game. So yeah...sorry about that but of course Juniper meant no harm.
BouncyDeer1's picture

Oh lol that's okay try to

Oh lol that's okay try to explain that to a somebody over here -.-


"Pfft...Well I got my eyes on you...Juniper...."


.....lol....


Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D

*HUFFS* and I will keep my

*HUFFS* and I will keep my eyes out on you and her and make sure I don't get too close to comfort D:<"

ROFL

Yeah she'll make sure she'll watch out for them like a hawk for now on. Don't mind her, she's butthurting a bit atm. Kirins....XD
BouncyDeer1's picture

Lol

Lol Laughing out loud

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

I like the new CSS I found my

I like the new CSS
I found my moms password Laughing out loud I can go online now
BouncyDeer1's picture

Oh okay yay!!=]

Oh okay yay!!=]

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

I have a new character;hes

I have a new character;hes still a fawn but could you give him a set?

antelope antlers, orca pelt, secretary bird mask or orca mask
BouncyDeer1's picture

Sure lets meet at the Pond or

Sure lets meet at the Pond or something?By the way what's his pictogram look like?

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
ShikaTale's picture

I swear I just posted this I

I swear I just posted this

I was playing Shika but I got to go before mom wakes up (it's 3:36 AM and I am not supposed to be using the comp) maybe tomorrow?
BouncyDeer1's picture

Yea =] Okay wel I just got

Yea =] Okay wel I just got back from school (Yay for short days!) and I can help you with the set if someone else hasn't yet =)

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D
Gruffen's picture

I see rascal has taken a

I see rascal has taken a liking to the key antlers
The sky is not the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
~Gruffen thanks so much MidnightRose! He's so cute! http://endlessforest.org/community/rp-blog-9 RP with me please!
BouncyDeer1's picture

Yupp =] Sorry Rascal was all

Yupp =] Sorry Rascal was all boring -.- I was mostly AFK for something sorry )=

Thank you Kaoori for this drawing!Natali looks beautiful =D