Little literature; Make a fairy tale!

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Hello everyone c: I thought since this is a fantasy game, perhaps we could all write together to make fairy tales? I'd love to see what everyone can come up with. No, it doesn't have to be forest related. ((it can be, no shame in that)) I would also love it if we could keep them… simple and short. But yoou can still include as much detail and write for as long as you'd like. You can even continue someone else's story with a sequel or somewhat- keep things going. The only rule I have is that if you are to critique someone, please be constructive- as much as you give pros and cons, also give advice. And well, be kind to one another c: have fun! Here's one to start us off;


Title; A Fair Replacement

Once there was a beautiful princess, who was often pampered and got what she wanted whenever she asked for it. She was adored by her people and no one wanted her in a foul mood. Even when she threw a fit or cried she would get her way. However, one day a chambermaid was busy cleaning her room when the king said,
"You do not act like a princess. No, you act like a child." And thus, the chamber maid was brought forth. "If this chamber maiden can out perform you in your duties, you will lose right to be my daughter and the heiress to my throne."
And so it began. The chamber maiden was given a room of her own, had servants to tend to her, and was given fine clothes to dress in. The Princess was insulted by this gesture- how dare her father, the king, say she was not a princess! She would prove him wrong, and make that chamber maiden pay for even thinking she could out do her!

The chamber maiden appeared to be much kinder however, and did not complain if her duties were too much to be carried out or if she had issues with her clothes or room arrangements. Rather, she was focused on treating others kindly, and dealing with better arranging how things were done in the kingdom. Eventually she came to be much more adored than the real princess. And this made the princess boil with envy. How dare they pay more attention to her!

Rather than focus on her duties, the princess was focused on getting vengeance. She would take any opportunity she could to make a fool of the chamber maiden. Sabotaging her shoes to make her fall gracelessly, tying her hair to the bed post as she slept- yes, she would make that woman rue the day she dared to out perform her! However, one day the chamber maiden became very ill and had to stay in bed. The princess was infuriated. She stormed into the chamber maiden's room, saying she was faking and pulling her roughly out of the bed. However, the chamber maid was very limp in her hands and didn't put up much of a fight. She almost didn't seem to care. Some nurse maids were sent in to care for her and the princess was rushed out of the room....

"If she isn't gone by tomorrow, I'm never coming back to this place!"
screamed the teary eyed princess. And thus she rushed out of the castle, expecting everyone to stop what they were doing and get rid of the woman who was out performing her. But no one came to comfort her like they usually did. She stood out there for an hour and no one was bothered with her presence, nor did they come to see what was the matter.

This is stunning! You really

This is stunning! You really have a talent in writing!
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Thank you very much :3

Thank you very much :3
Sabel, Sam

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Trax:. ogmsjfihd I love to

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ogmsjfihd I love to see people write more ermagad
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I was immersed in this, as if

I was immersed in this, as if I was reading out of a printed book! You have a talent Smiling
How do you describe both the beginning and the end? We should have known better, but we didn't. What does it matter what we think we know? In the end, there's no denying the truth. - Left Behind --[Art by Aquilo]
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