This Honey-Furred Doe (for Honeyfur)

Seed's picture
I'm not as familliar with the character, so tell me if I need to re-do it. Hope you like it, Honeyfur.


This Honey-Furred Doe

This doe, who switches
with honey smoothness between
earnest and game, between laughter
and tears, flowers and bare antlers,
dancing out of reach all the while;

Who blends in with poppies,
with her long green stalks,
with her slender neck, her festooned antlers
with all the glowing red, softening the tips,
with the fields and flowers reflected in her eyes.

Who'd run to shield precious things
until there's no running left,
until the ground breaks,
until the stilt-like legs fall away:
She if needed, Would keep running.



((This was a Gift-Poem for Honeyfur.))
quadraptor's picture

This is lovely!



This is lovely!
uwharrie's picture

mhmm, I must say, this fits

mhmm, I must say, this fits HoneyFur very well : )

Mm, lovely

Mm, lovely <3
wingeddeer's picture

Very lovely! I think she will

Very lovely! I think she will love it ^^


Honeyfur's picture

FFFF This is amazing, Seed!

Shocked FFFF This is amazing, Seed! It fits her perfectly! Thank you sooo much! ;3;

Would you mind if I put this in her bio (and credit you, of course)? =]
Seed's picture

Of course I don't mind ^^

Of course I don't mind ^^
Thank you for the compliments, everyone.