August 12, 2008 - 7:50am — Anzel
Stood the deer, whose call read Four
A Quadriped, the Quad, no more
With antlers blessed upon by God
Twin Michael of the two, the odd
Down his pelt and down his face
Bled belly white and blue to waist
And o'er eyes and face, 'twas mask
Of "Reindeer"...querious face, why ask?
Stood atop the granite tall
Orben figure seemed so small
Leapt, they did, from rock to soil,
"Orb, oh sphere, your plan, we'll foil!"
"Shhhaaa," screamed heavens, fraught with fear
The dove of cage-stone froze the deer
Then shock released, the orb, they followed
Past floras blue, and oaken, hollowed
At Crying Rock, the sphere transformed
As Michael stood, and stunned deer, swarmed
The God, a deer! He danced and played
And Quad, the Four, he never strayed
At last, the God ran off, away
To Godly lands, with Godly play
And Quad stood silent, rest the day
And trotted, smiling, into fray
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Four = Quad
Quadriped = Four-legged animal (i think, heh)
Of "Raindeer"...querious face, why ask? = The deer have never met humans, nor "Real Deer"...why would they think that a "Normal" deer face is normal? To them, it's strange. Their human face is what they think of as a deer face, and the Real Deer/Reindeer mask is what they think of as a Reindeer face, and they think Reindeer have weird faces ;P (strange logic, i know)
Cage-stone = Metal...it's the only metal in the forest, isn't it? Why wouldn't they simply think of it as another type of stone?
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I hope you like it...
...I'm absolutely
I mentioned it in the bio page, but he got his antlers after a real abiogenesis, at the Pond.
Still, I don't know what to say about this. You are simply incredible, and I love how the poem flows!
Thanks for the compliment
The more poems I write, the better I get at the flow. It's as important as stressed and unstressed syllables :3
I need more words, mwahaha.
I understand 100% why poets make up words x3
...do you take requests for
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Fantastic, as ususal. Simply amazing. :3
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