FliLeaf: The Begining

FliLeaf was awkened by a sun ray. She opened her eyes, she smelled a faint smell of a female doe. FliLeaf not knowing that the smell was here mother, but her mother had left... The fawn pushed herself up, and carefilluy planted each hoof on the ground. She steped, one hoof after another, gradually her confidence grew. She was a very shy fawn.

She bleated, the bleat was tiny but you could here it. No one answered. All the deer were sleeping, she soon came upon some red flowers. She put some on her head, she liked the red flowers. She explored the forest, she soon came upon a statue. It was crying, she stared at it even though it was crying it had a certain beauty to it.

She wandered on, hearing the birds chirp she followed the birds music. She found herslef on a huge rock, she over looked the horizon. And saw a stag! She carefully hopped off the rock. She trotted to a tree, and spied the stag. He came close and bowed, she sniffed him collecting information she read in it that he was a nice stag. She bowed to him, the ran together for awhile until he sayed good bye.

She felt a great blanket of exhaustense drop on her. She traveled along a trail and past some ruins, then found herself at a red flower patch. She settled herself beside a tree, and drifted off to sleep...
Deer700's picture

Aww, that was a nice story.

Aww, that was a nice story. =) <3

"FliLeaf was awkened by a sun ray. She opened her eyes, she smelled a faint smell of a female doe. FliLeaf not knowing that the smell was here mother, but her mother had left... The fawn pushed herself up, and carefilluy planted each hoof on the ground. She steped, one hoof after another, gradually her confidence grew..."

I love the description of it. =0 Are you an author? =D

No, haha. =)

No, haha. =)
Kanter's picture

Care for an editor?

Care for an editor? *volunteers* Cute story! Needs some work in the area of spelling and grammar though.