Father - 1 - Desertion

Freyja's picture


Where are we going?...

....

Somewhere I know that you'll never be found

Hah. I found you, and that was easy.

That was different. Now, you'll never be able to find your way back.

And explain how you'll do that?

You'll discover, in due time.

......


Halt.

Where are- how? HOW? WH-why are we here? You don't plan to kill me by pushing me off a cliff now, do you? Th-think, of her.

Be quiet boy....of course I wouldn't do that. Shut u-

You...think you can dispose of me? Like this?

Quite simply, yes. I just had to....think. Differently.

.......

You do realise I could of stopped following you long ago, and just turned around?

You could try, but look behind you.


........

H-how?

Like I said. Don't bother trying to guilt-trip me, boy; your mother is gone.

She's here.

But not for you....

Pah. Pathetic, you are....what are you going to do with me, hmm? You could kill me, but then what? Just admit it; you've lost yourself in this godforsaken place. Perhaps you, mentally, lead me here.

You understand now.

So now what will YOU do? Perhaps I shall wear your skin and antlers around my neck to warm me if this desert is so cold at night. If there is a night out here....

I'm starting again...

Impossible.

Maybe some day, you will realise the faults you have made. And maybe....someone else is out here. Someone like you.

Now you taunt me?

No boy......this is for you.

...Nuf....Why do you mark me?

So you cannot try to follow me back...here, look. In the distance, a cave. There is some hope out here for you.

But you're lost too!

Ahh...again, turn around.


The Forest is only Endless, if you believe it to be.

Wretched thing, you are.

How could it end? I never found an end, ever. This desert was never here. The cliff, this cave....

It is. And now...before I lose my temper...

No-

......


Goodbye, my son.
for now


Freyja's picture

Critic or just normal

Critic or just normal comments.......please?
ocean's picture

Oh, curious. o: Enjoyable,

Oh, curious. o:
Enjoyable, though. ^^
Freyja's picture

Thanks Ocean :] I'd really

Thanks Ocean :]

I'd really love to turn this into a plot; but i'd need help to get it started. I only have a few peoples contacts, and i'd like to use this to get out there and meet more people.

I've said this all 50 times but, really.
Anyone interested in a new plot?
Sonata's picture

curiousity, it burnzzz I

curiousity, it burnzzz

I would love to be involved in a plot<3

and fff you can spam me anytime<3
Kiraki's picture

*Curiosity take over* Of

*Curiosity take over*

Of course, plot's can be fun ^^

GingerNut's picture

I'd be interested. This is

I'd be interested. This is really REALLY good. Doing dialouge-only stories can be really hard, and there's often a lot of problems with getting what's across to the reader. This is perfect though, I loves it :3
Freyja's picture

Thank you three

Thank you three <3 Hmm...i'm just wondering what I should do.
I think I might put up another blog soon explaining things better; for now, this'll remain a mystery xD How I intended it to, until yeah, I explained it. Very glad to see some interest! I will need help too, with both progressing the plot and further ideas.