Drifting memory

Look into my eyes
And tell me what do you see
A soul worth saving
Or just a dark abiss


A soul that thinks with the heart
And rarely with the mind
It's easy to see
In my eyes
But it's other's perspectives
That make me wonder

If I disappeared would you miss me
Has my prescence meant anything to you
I feel lonely and forgotten
Here on this cloud of mine



I drift in and out
But it's hard to ever stay away
For very long


By know you must have turned the page
Leaving all the while
I commend you for staying this long
And listening to these words that I have to say

But this light grows dim
And the shadows are more pronounced
And the rest of my words
I'll save
For another day
Zeekii's picture

This is sad...I only hope the

This is sad...I only hope the words you write in your poem aren't true. However, it was brilliantly written <3

Your words are much

Your words are much appreciated Zeekii.Thank you Smiling
Zeekii's picture

You are more than welcome,

You are more than welcome, what I said is true anyway <3
PleasureLine7's picture

That's a veryy good poem

That's a veryy good poem indeed you made me loose some tears :o^^'
it's okay to feel alone on a cloud because...lot's of people are jerk so they can't reach you ^^
Nobody deserve to feel alone,ever!
Stop wasting your time and praise the sun god damnit

Thank you for your words

Thank you for your words PleasureLine7:)
Flyleaf's picture

I felt pretty much the same

I felt pretty much the same when my girlfriend left me !!!
Wonderful writing , love it !!
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Thanks sooo much:)

Thanks sooo much:)