June 10, 2010 - 8:52pm — faunet
Look into my eyes
And tell me what do you see
A soul worth saving
Or just a dark abiss
A soul that thinks with the heart
And rarely with the mind
It's easy to see
In my eyes
But it's other's perspectives
That make me wonder
If I disappeared would you miss me
Has my prescence meant anything to you
I feel lonely and forgotten
Here on this cloud of mine
I drift in and out
But it's hard to ever stay away
For very long
By know you must have turned the page
Leaving all the while
I commend you for staying this long
And listening to these words that I have to say
But this light grows dim
And the shadows are more pronounced
And the rest of my words
I'll save
For another day
This is sad...I only hope the
Your words are much
You are more than welcome,
That's a veryy good poem
it's okay to feel alone on a cloud because...lot's of people are jerk so they can't reach you ^^
Nobody deserve to feel alone,ever!
Thank you for your words
I felt pretty much the same
Wonderful writing , love it !!
Thanks sooo much:)