Hey guys, I know that this isn't the Endless Problems but I have a problem that I could use some advice for.

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A while ago I drew this girl with green hair who's been floating in my mind forever. And I've been wanting to do something with her, but I can't seem to think of anything. So eventually I came up with this as a way to explore what I wanna do.

I tried to write this from a stalkers point of view, but I'm kinda worried I failed. Anyways enough of me, hope you enjoy it.


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[center]You can see them. They weave though the woods with fluid motion.

Their stark white fur gleams with the last rays of sunlight, betraying

their location whenever they move. They give deep growls that warn

you they will devour you once they catch you, and for moments that

feel like hours you fear they are going to catch you and devour you.

You move faster, till your heart feels like its going to explode and your

legs are almost numb. Closer they get, they yelp with excitement of

the chase. Your life is about to end you fear, and there is nothing you

can do about it. Closing your eyes, you wait for the feeling of them

attacking.

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So I've been trying to do an out line on gimp, ive try using the paintbrush in black then airbrushing the color I wanted to use, but that's not working as well. So can anyone give me some tips?

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So what kind of area would you add if you had the chance? If there is already a thread to this then please point to out and Ill delete this.