~Black and White~ The History of Nightmare

Sunflyra's picture
...yeah... Nightmare's History :B my english sucks Dx
i hope it will make the things clearer :3
i've drawn these crappy pictures by hand...well, i think it fit to the text...
anyway here it is, i'll make a link in my bio too.
(ignore this bad english, 'kay?)
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Black and White

It was a dark night when he was born.
His parents lived in a forest far, far away. His father has been the leader, until a big, black stag had arrived. He and two other stags have beaten him in an unfair fight down.
So the black stag, who everyone’s called him ‘tyrant’, became the leader.
Old and ill deer were chased away and every newborn fawn was killed.

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One month after the fight he saw his father the first time. He was only three days old. The big, brown stag had got scars all over the body, but his face was friendly, when he lowered his head to hug his son the first time.


He didn’t got a name. It was too dangerous for him. His parents always hide him, when they got back to the herd.
But his world was friendly and happy and he loved these two deer so much.
But suddenly his little world broke down.

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He felt the vibration of big hooves. And they came nearer and nearer. This wasn’t his father. His little heart beat against his chest and his breath got faster. He just heard his heart and breath. Then a big, black head appeared between the high grass.
It smiled a creepy smile. Suddenly his parents were next to him.
‘ ‘My love’ his mother whispered ‘ ‘Run. As fast as you can. Please, we will find you’
His father turned the head ‘We love you’
The whole herd appeared behind the Tyrant.
‘ ‘Say “Bye” to your parents’ The tyrant laughed. His voice echo in his head.
Then he lowered his antlers and attacked.
They killed both of them in front of his eyes.
He reminds every scream of his mother and the lost sigh of his father when the live disappeared in his eyes.


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He ran. So long.
Every in the herd had affected his parents. Everyone.
He couldn’t trust anyone. They killed his parents…


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His soul was broken and had went dark.
So he was called
Nightmare
And the scar will never disappeared.
Seele's picture

Aw, poor guy.. Nice

Aw, poor guy.. Nice illustrations, I especially love the last one. But it's a sad story indeed ._. The second drawing is really, really well done, I must say. But it's sad yes. Daww. *Huggles Nightmare*

--Stays a lonely Seele

Cata's picture

OH GOSH. I must say, this is

OH GOSH.
I must say, this is amazing really. !!! The story is too sad, what a poor guy. And those illustrations make the whole thing so perfectly. :> Great work! Your stories are far better than mine 8D.


Cata & Paya & Pi'yu

Cata & Paya & Pi'yu
Rouda's picture

.. .... ...... D8> That's

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...... D8> That's horrible.
Poor, poor Nightmare. He've been throw so much, and he has been so young that time.

Btw, awesome writing you have here. I like it. <8D And your English wasn't bad at all. <:
mellion's picture

My eyes almost filled with

My eyes almost filled with tears when I read his father's last words to him because it was clear they wouldn't make it. Poor, poor Nightmare. D: *pets him* My fawn Februari has taken quite a shine to him. She met him today (or atleast I think it was Nightmare) for the second time, and was so happy to see Nighmare accepted her to his company much more openly this time. She truly enjoyed exploring the forest with him. <3

~ Azugi
~ Azugi