...yeah... Nightmare's History :B my english sucks Dx
i hope it will make the things clearer :3
i've drawn these crappy pictures by hand...well, i think it fit to the text...
anyway here it is, i'll make a link in my bio too.
(ignore this bad english, 'kay?)
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Black and White
It was a dark night when he was born.
His parents lived in a forest far, far away. His father has been the leader, until a big, black stag had arrived. He and two other stags have beaten him in an unfair fight down.
So the black stag, who everyone’s called him ‘tyrant’, became the leader.
Old and ill deer were chased away and every newborn fawn was killed.
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One month after the fight he saw his father the first time. He was only three days old. The big, brown stag had got scars all over the body, but his face was friendly, when he lowered his head to hug his son the first time.
He didn’t got a name. It was too dangerous for him. His parents always hide him, when they got back to the herd.
But his world was friendly and happy and he loved these two deer so much.
But suddenly his little world broke down.
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He felt the vibration of big hooves. And they came nearer and nearer. This wasn’t his father. His little heart beat against his chest and his breath got faster. He just heard his heart and breath. Then a big, black head appeared between the high grass.
It smiled a creepy smile. Suddenly his parents were next to him.
‘ ‘My love’ his mother whispered ‘ ‘Run. As fast as you can. Please, we will find you’
His father turned the head ‘We love you’
The whole herd appeared behind the Tyrant.
‘ ‘Say “Bye” to your parents’ The tyrant laughed. His voice echo in his head.
Then he lowered his antlers and attacked.
They killed both of them in front of his eyes.
He reminds every scream of his mother and the lost sigh of his father when the live disappeared in his eyes.
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He ran. So long.
Every in the herd had affected his parents. Everyone.
He couldn’t trust anyone. They killed his parents…
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His soul was broken and had went dark.
So he was called Nightmare
And the scar will never disappeared.
Aw, poor guy.. Nice
--Stays a lonely Seele
OH GOSH. I must say, this is
I must say, this is amazing really. !!! The story is too sad, what a poor guy. And those illustrations make the whole thing so perfectly. :> Great work! Your stories are far better than mine 8D.
Cata & Paya & Pi'yu
Cata & Paya & Pi'yu
.. .... ...... D8> That's
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...... D8> That's horrible.
Poor, poor Nightmare. He've been throw so much, and he has been so young that time.
Btw, awesome writing you have here. I like it. <8D And your English wasn't bad at all. <:
My eyes almost filled with
~ Azugi